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This page is pretty boring, by itself. I could be mistaken, as I haven't read many comics in my life, but I feel like any given page of a comic is supposed to be fairly interesting in some way. Nothing much happens here- it's just setup for stuff to come. This is likely an example of my not actually being a writer showing through, but things should pick up pretty quick over the next few pages!
Even though nothing much is happening on this page, if ya like seeing me make stuff, you can help me make more stuff with a lil' support over here. https://www.patreon.com/ruaidri
You'll get to see comic pages ahead of time and there's a few other little bonuses, but mostly it just helps me make stuff! If you've been enjoying this comic so far, it literally wouldn't exist without the support of the folks over there so if nothing else, give 'em a thanks. ;P
Also, just to double-check- are the watermarks still unobtrusive? I had a nice big open area last time to put them in but there wasn't a great place in these panels. I'm trying to make them visible but as non-distracting as possible, so hopefully they're not getting in the way too much!
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Even though nothing much is happening on this page, if ya like seeing me make stuff, you can help me make more stuff with a lil' support over here. https://www.patreon.com/ruaidri
You'll get to see comic pages ahead of time and there's a few other little bonuses, but mostly it just helps me make stuff! If you've been enjoying this comic so far, it literally wouldn't exist without the support of the folks over there so if nothing else, give 'em a thanks. ;P
Also, just to double-check- are the watermarks still unobtrusive? I had a nice big open area last time to put them in but there wasn't a great place in these panels. I'm trying to make them visible but as non-distracting as possible, so hopefully they're not getting in the way too much!
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Oof, the watermark is so light here that it's actually hard to read. My advice is to not be afraid of just writing your info in pure black, like expand the image down a bit and write it in the margin there. It's less obtrusive and it's easier to read.
Sure, if you're worried about some malicious person editing the info out, it would be easy to do... But:
- Most people who spread art around to image boards and such aren't going to modify it (either because they think it helps the original artist, or just out of laziness).
- For a motivated malicious person, a simple transparent watermark is pretty easy to edit out anyway.
- If somebody DOES edit out your info and try to do pass it off as their own or something, there's a large community of good people out there who can help make him stop whatever he's doing.
Sure, if you're worried about some malicious person editing the info out, it would be easy to do... But:
- Most people who spread art around to image boards and such aren't going to modify it (either because they think it helps the original artist, or just out of laziness).
- For a motivated malicious person, a simple transparent watermark is pretty easy to edit out anyway.
- If somebody DOES edit out your info and try to do pass it off as their own or something, there's a large community of good people out there who can help make him stop whatever he's doing.
It's not really about theft prevention for me... that's been pretty rare. It's more about advertising for places where these get reposted, where there's a chance people might see these that don't know me. But I find advertising pretty gross in general so I'm a bit averse to making it super obvious. :P
That said, consensus seems to be that it's a bit too light right now, so I might lower the transparancy in the next page!
That said, consensus seems to be that it's a bit too light right now, so I might lower the transparancy in the next page!
> any given page of a comic is supposed to be fairly interesting in some way
Well, I'm speaking for myself, but not having a dick/other sexual characteristic on a page doesn't automatically make it non-interesting. I think the page is fine, gives some pacing between porn shots, establishes a few things about our fluffy flufferino, and helps empathize. Migranes suck and not in a good way.
Well, I'm speaking for myself, but not having a dick/other sexual characteristic on a page doesn't automatically make it non-interesting. I think the page is fine, gives some pacing between porn shots, establishes a few things about our fluffy flufferino, and helps empathize. Migranes suck and not in a good way.
I get the kind of pressure headaches that make you curl up in a bawl and cry. (while contemplating a hole to relieve the pressure). Thankfully I've found something that works for me finally tho. 2 excedrin and a 5 hour energy drink. Think it's the combination of caffine in the excedrin and the caffine in the 5 hour energy drink. It's weird cause I hardly ever drink caffine normally. Figured I'd pass it on, maybe it will work for someone else.
i like the page :3 but if youre really unsatisfied about it being too "boring", lemme give you my amateur opinion i guess... when other comics have setups or actionless scenes, what they tend to do is, they still focus on a few parts to make them standout regardless... like, if the pill is the setup here, other comics would probably play around with that bottom left panel. the pill swallowing curve for example would overlap with other panels (kinda putting it in the foreground pretending as if it was anything important) and maybe some action lines, i dunno xD or maybe even a swallowing action panel or something (or more action in the "pop" panel :D). but i do feel like youve tried this and i appreciate a good setup :D
"BLooooooowoooh' seventeen police cars swoop down and surround him in a flash of screeching tires and exhaust fumes. 34 riot gear armored police grab him and wrestle him to the ground, hog tieing him with handcuffs legcuffs and belt chains. They peel off his clothes to get at the drugs he just took and spray him with CS tear gas Pepper spray and MACE to subdue him as the jumpsuited DEA and three-piece business suited FBI show up and comb through is belongings and DRUGS!!!
The SWAT team retrieves the water bottle as the bomb squad uses a robot to put in an explosion container!
The cops cordon off the drug and bomb component machine and use the fire department to open it up with the Jaws of Life to get to the probable counterfeit coin he used to purchase the bomb-making container before he took his drugs!
Just spicing up a boring page for you.
The SWAT team retrieves the water bottle as the bomb squad uses a robot to put in an explosion container!
The cops cordon off the drug and bomb component machine and use the fire department to open it up with the Jaws of Life to get to the probable counterfeit coin he used to purchase the bomb-making container before he took his drugs!
Just spicing up a boring page for you.
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