Correct spelling and re-word x86 not supported message.

Author: tjone270

build/windows/installer/installer.nsi

@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@ Section -Main SEC0000
     ${nsProcess::KillProcess} "${APP_EXE}" $R4
 
     ${IfNot} ${RunningX64}
-        MessageBox MB_OK "Starting from 2019.0.0 version RDM doesn't support 32-bit Windows"
+        MessageBox MB_OK "Starting from version 2019.0.0, Redis Desktop Manager doesn't support 32-bit Windows"
         Quit
     ${EndIf}
 
-    IfFileExists $INSTDIR\uninstall.exe alredy_installed not_installed
-    alredy_installed:
+    IfFileExists $INSTDIR\uninstall.exe already_installed not_installed
+    already_installed:
     ExecWait '$INSTDIR\uninstall.exe /S'
     Sleep 3000
 

docs/install.md

@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@
 
 ## Windows
 
-1. Install [Microsoft Visual C++ 2017 x64](https://aka.ms/vs/15/release/vc_redist.x64.exe)  (If you have not already)
-2. Download Windows Installer from [http://redisdesktop.com/download](http://redisdesktop.com/download) **(Requires subscription)**
-3. Run downloaded installer
+1. Install [Microsoft Visual C++ 2017 x64](https://aka.ms/vs/15/release/vc_redist.x64.exe)  (If you have not already).
+2. Download Windows Installer from [http://redisdesktop.com/download](http://redisdesktop.com/download). **(Requires subscription)**
+3. Run the downloaded installer.
 
 ## Mac OS X
 
-1. Download dmg image from [http://redisdesktop.com/download](http://redisdesktop.com/download) **(Requires subscription)**
-2. Mount dmg image
-3. Run rdm.app
+1. Download dmg image from [http://redisdesktop.com/download](http://redisdesktop.com/download). **(Requires subscription)**
+2. Mount the DMG image.
+3. Run rdm.app.
 
 ## Ubuntu / ArchLinux / Debian / Fedora / CentOS / OpenSUSE / etc
 
-1. Install RedisDesktopManager using [Snapcraft](https://snapcraft.io/redis-desktop-manager)
+1. Install RedisDesktopManager using [Snapcraft](https://snapcraft.io/redis-desktop-manager).
 
 > !!! warning "SSH Keys"
     To be able to access your ssh keys from RDM please connect `ssh-key` interface:
@@ -27,9 +27,12 @@
 
 ### Get source
 
-1. Install git
-2. Get source code:
-
+1. Install git: 
+    ```
+    sudo apt install git
+    ```
+    
+2. Get the source code:
     ```
     git clone --recursive https://github.com/uglide/RedisDesktopManager.git -b 2019 rdm && cd ./rdm
     ```
@@ -41,30 +44,23 @@
 
 ### Build on OS X
 
-1. Install [XCode](https://developer.apple.com/xcode/) with Xcode build tools
-2. Install [Homebrew](http://brew.sh/)
-3. Copy `cd ./src && cp ./resources/Info.plist.sample ./resources/Info.plist`
+1. Install [Xcode](https://developer.apple.com/xcode/) with Xcode build tools.
+2. Install [Homebrew](http://brew.sh/).
+3. Copy `cd ./src && cp ./resources/Info.plist.sample ./resources/Info.plist`.
 4. Building RDM dependencies require i.a. `openssl`, `cmake` and `python3`. Install them: `brew install openssl cmake python3`
-5. Install python requirements `pip3 install -t ../bin/osx/release -r py/requirements.txt`
+5. Install Python requirements `pip3 install -t ../bin/osx/release -r py/requirements.txt`
 6. Install [Qt 5.9](http://www.qt.io/download-open-source/#section-2). Add Qt Creator and under Qt 5.9.x add Qt Charts module.
-7. Open ./src/rdm.pro in Qt Creator
-8. Run build
+7. Open `./src/rdm.pro` in **Qt Creator**.
+8. Run build. 
 
 ### Build on Windows
 
-1. Install Visual Studio 2017 Community
-
-2. Install [Qt 5.9](https://www.qt.io/download)
-
-3. Go to `3rdparty/qredisclient/3rdparty/hiredis` and apply patch to fix compilation on Windows:
+1. Install Visual Studio 2017 Community Edition.
+2. Install [Qt 5.9](https://www.qt.io/download).
+3. Go to `3rdparty/qredisclient/3rdparty/hiredis` and apply the patch to fix compilation on Windows:
 `git apply ../hiredis-win.patch`
-
-4. Go to `3rdparty/` folder and install zlib with `nuget`: `nuget install zlib-msvc14-x64 -Version 1.2.11.7795`
-
-5. Install Python 3.7 amd64 to `C:\Python37-x64`
-
-6. Install python requirements `pip3 install -r src/py/requirements.txt`
-
-7. Open `./src/rdm.pro` in **Qt Creator**.  Chooses `Desktop Qt 5.9.x MSVC2017 64bit > Release` profile.
-
-8. Run build. ( Just hit `Ctrl-B` )
+4. Go to the `3rdparty/` folder and install zlib with `nuget`: `nuget install zlib-msvc14-x64 -Version 1.2.11.7795`
+5. Install Python 3.7 amd64 to `C:\Python37-x64`.
+6. Install Python requirements `pip3 install -r src/py/requirements.txt`.
+7. Open `./src/rdm.pro` in **Qt Creator**.  Choose the `Desktop Qt 5.9.x MSVC2017 64bit > Release` build profile.
+8. Run build. (Just hit `Ctrl-B`)

docs/quick-start.md

@@ -2,53 +2,54 @@
 ***
 
 
-After you [install](install.md) RDM the first you need to do in order to start using it is create Connection to your Redis server. On the main screen press button **Connect to Redis Server**. 
+After you've [installed](install.md) Redis Desktop Manager, the first thing you need to do in order to get going is to create a connection to your Redis server. On the main window, press the button labelled **Connect to Redis Server**. 
 
 ![](http://redisdesktop.com/static/docs/rdm_main.png)
 
-## Connect to local or public redis-server
-On the first tab Connection Settings put general info regarding connection that you are creating.  
+## Connect to a local or public redis-server
+On the first tab (Connection Settings), put in general information regarding the connection that you are creating.
 
-* **Name** - name of new connection (example: my_local_redis)
+* **Name** - the name of new connection (example: my_local_redis)
 * **Host** - redis-server host (example: localhost)
 * **Port** - redis-server port (example: 6379)
-* **Auth** - redis-server authentication password ([http://redis.io/commands/AUTH](http://redis.io/commands/AUTH))
+* **Auth** - redis-server authentication password (if any) ([http://redis.io/commands/AUTH](http://redis.io/commands/AUTH))
 
-## Connect to public redis-server with SSL
-If you want to connect to redis-server with SSL you need to enable SSL on the second tab and provide a public key in PEM format. Bellow you can find instructions for particular cloud services.
+## Connect to a public redis-server with SSL
+If you want to connect to a redis-server instance with SSL you need to enable SSL on the second tab and provide a public key in PEM format. 
+Instructions for certain cloud services are below:
 
 <img src="http://redisdesktop.com/static/docs/rdm_ssl.png" height="300" />
 
 
 ### Windows Azure Redis Cache <br /> <img src="https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/azure-cache-for-redis/media/index/redis-cache.svg" height="100" />
 
-1. Create connection with all requested information 
+1. Create a connection with all requested information.
  <br /> <img src="http://redisdesktop.com/static/docs/rdm_ssl_azure.png" width="300" />
-2. Make sure that "Use SSL Protocol" checkbox is enabled
-3. Your Azure Redis connection is ready to use
+2. Make sure that the "Use SSL Protocol" checkbox is enabled.
+3. Your Azure Redis connection is ready to use.
 
 ### Redis Labs <br /> <img src="https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/7/75/Redis_Labs_Logo.png" height="75" />
-To connect Redis Labs instance with SSL/TLS encryption do following steps:
+To connect to a Redis Labs instance with SSL/TLS encryption, follow the steps below:
 
-1. Make sure that SSL is enabled for your Redis instance in Redis Labs dashboard.
-2. Download and unzip `garantia_credentials.zip` from Redis Labs dashboard
-3. Select `garantia_user.crt` in "Public key" field
-4. Select `garantia_user_private.key` in "Private key" field
-5. Select `garantia_ca.pem` in "Authority" field
+1. Make sure that SSL is enabled for your Redis instance in the Redis Labs dashboard.
+2. Download and unzip `garantia_credentials.zip` from the Redis Labs dashboard.
+3. Select `garantia_user.crt` in the "Public key" field.
+4. Select `garantia_user_private.key` in the "Private key" field.
+5. Select `garantia_ca.pem` in the "Authority" field.
 
 
 ## Connect to private redis-server via SSH tunnel
 ### Basic SSH tunneling
-SSH tab is supposed to allow you using SSH tunnel. It's useful if your redis-server is not publicly accessible via a network.
-To use SSH tunnel select checkbox "Use SSH Tunnel". There are different security options: you can use a plain password or OpenSSH private key. 
+SSH tab is supposed to allow you to use a SSH tunnel. It's useful if your redis-server is not publicly accessible.
+To use a SSH tunnel select checkbox "Use SSH Tunnel". There are different security options; you can use a plain password or OpenSSH private key. 
 
 >!!! note "for Windows users:" 
-    Your private key is must be in .pem format.
+    Your private key must be in .pem format.
 
 <img src="http://redisdesktop.com/static/docs/rdm_ssh.png" height="300" />
 
 ### Advanced SSH tunneling
-If you need advanced SSH tunneling you should setup SSH tunnel manually and connect via localhost:
+If you need advanced SSH tunneling you should setup a SSH tunnel manually and connect via localhost:
 ```
 ssh SSH_HOST -L 7000:localhost:6379
 ```
@@ -59,32 +60,30 @@ Follow instructions from [this blog post](https://userify.com/blog/howto-connect
 ### How to connect to Redis ElastiCache with In-Transit Encryption through EC2
 #### Using RedisDesktopManager >=0.9.9
 
-Click on "Enable TLS-over-SSH" in SSH connection settings and follow instructions from section [How to connect to Redis ElastiCache through EC2](#how-to-connect-to-redis-elasticache-through-ec2)
+Click on "Enable TLS-over-SSH" in the SSH connection settings and follow instructions from section [How to connect to Redis ElastiCache through EC2](#how-to-connect-to-redis-elasticache-through-ec2)
 
 
 #### Using RedisDesktopManager <0.9.9
-Follow instructions from [this documentation section to setup `stunnel` on EC2 instance](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/AmazonElastiCache/latest/red-ug/in-transit-encryption.html#connect-tls)
+Follow instructions from [this documentation section to setup `stunnel` on an EC2 instance](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/AmazonElastiCache/latest/red-ug/in-transit-encryption.html#connect-tls)
 
-After that [connect to your Redis ElastiCache through EC2](#how-to-connect-to-redis-elasticache-through-ec2)
+After that [connect to your Redis ElastiCache through EC2](#how-to-connect-to-redis-elasticache-through-ec2).
 
-## Connect to UNIX socket
+## Connect to a UNIX socket
 
-Redis Desktop Manager [doesn't support UNIX sockets](https://github.com/uglide/RedisDesktopManager/issues/1751) directly, but you can use redirecting of local socket to the unix domain socket, for instance with [socat](https://sourceforge.net/projects/socat):
+Redis Desktop Manager [doesn't support UNIX sockets](https://github.com/uglide/RedisDesktopManager/issues/1751) directly, but you can use redirecting of the local socket to the UNIX domain socket, for instance with [socat](https://sourceforge.net/projects/socat):
 
 ```
 socat -v tcp-l:6379,reuseaddr,fork unix:/tmp/redis.sock
 ```
 
 ## Advanced connection settings
-Use the next tab Advanced settings in order to setup Namespace separator or other settings. 
-
-
+The **Advanced settings** tab allows you to customise the namespace separator and other advanced settings.
 <img src="http://redisdesktop.com/static/docs/rdm_advanced_settings.png" height="300" />
 
 ## Next steps
-Now you can test connection or create connection right away. 
+Now you can test a connection or create a connection right away. 
 
-Congratulations, now you connected to your Redis Server. You should see something similar to what we showed on our screen.
+Congratulations, you've successfully connected to your Redis Server. You should see something similar to what we show above.
 ![](http://redisdesktop.com/static/docs/rdm_main2.png)