edits to metrics draft

Author: michelle-luna

jekyll/_cci2/monitoring.md

@@ -18,44 +18,43 @@ environment variables into the builder process.
 To set environment variables create a file called `/etc/circle-installation-customizations`
 with environment variable entries, for example, `export CIRCLE_OPTION_A=foo`. 
 
-## Basic System Monitoring 
+## Basic System Monitoring with CloudWatch
 
-Enable the Cloudwatch by going to Replicated Admin > Settings > Enhanced AWS Integration (1.0 Only) > Enable Cloudwatch (e.g. https://example.com:8800/settings#enhanced_aws). **Note:** CloudWatch does **not** support monitoring of macOS containers.
+Enable CloudWatch by going to Replicated Admin > Settings > Enhanced AWS Integration (1.0 Only) > Enable Cloudwatch, for example, `https://example.com:8800/settings#enhanced_aws`. **Note:** CloudWatch does **not** support monitoring of macOS containers.
 
-CloudWatch already monitors the health and basic checks for the EC2 instances, for example, CPU, memory, disk space, and basic counts with alerts. Consider upgrading machine types for the Services instance or decrease the number of containers per container if CPU or memory become a bottleneck.
+CloudWatch already monitors the health and basic checks for EC2 instances, for example, CPU, memory, disk space, and basic counts with alerts. Consider upgrading machine types for the Services instance or decrease the number of CPUs per container if CPU or memory become a bottleneck.
 
 ## Advanced System Monitoring
 
-Enable the ability to forward system and docker metrics to supported platforms by going to Replicated Admin > Settings > Metrics (e.g. https://example.com:8800/settings#metrics) and clicking `Enable Metrics`.
+Enable the ability to forward system and Docker metrics to supported platforms by going to Replicated Admin > Settings > Metrics, for example `https://example.com:8800/settings#metrics`. Then, click Enable Metrics.
 ![Enable Metrics](  {{ site.baseurl }}/assets/img/docs/enable_metrics1.png)
 
 ### Supported Platform(s)
 
-#### AWS CloudWatch
-Currently only AWS CloudWatch is supported.  Click `AWS CloudWatch` to begin configuration.
+Currently, only AWS CloudWatch is supported.  Click AWS CloudWatch to begin configuration.
 ![AWS CloudWatch](  {{ site.baseurl }}/assets/img/docs/enable_metrics2.png)
 
-##### Configuration
+### Configuration
 
-There are two options for configuration.  
+There are two options for configuration:  
 
-Use the IAM Instance Profile of the services box and configure your custom region and namespace.
+- Use the IAM Instance Profile of the services box and configure your custom region and namespace.
 ![Configuration IAM](  {{ site.baseurl }}/assets/img/docs/enable_metrics3a.png)
 
-Alternatively, you may use your AWS Access Key and Secret Key along with your custom region and namespace.
+- Alternatively, you may use your AWS Access Key and Secret Key along with your custom region and namespace.
 ![Configuration Alt](  {{ site.baseurl }}/assets/img/docs/enable_metrics3b.png)
 
-You can verify that metrics are forward by going to the AWS CloudWatch console.
+Verify that metrics are forwarding by going to the AWS CloudWatch console.
 
-### Technical Details
-Services VM Host and Docker metrics are forwarded via [Telegraf](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf), a plugin-driven server agent for collecting & reporting metrics.
+### Metrics Details
+Services VM Host and Docker metrics are forwarded via [Telegraf](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf), a plugin-driven server agent for collecting and reporting metrics.
 
-The following are the metrics that have been enabled;
-* [CPU](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/CPU_README.md#cpu-time-measurements),
-* [Disk](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/DISK_README.md#metrics),
-* [Memory](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/MEM_README.md#metrics),
-* [Networking](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/NET_README.md#measurements--fields), and
-* [Docker](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/tree/master/plugins/inputs/docker#metrics)
+Following are the metrics that are enabled:
+- [CPU](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/CPU_README.md#cpu-time-measurements)
+- [Disk](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/DISK_README.md#metrics)
+- [Memory](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/MEM_README.md#metrics)
+- [Networking](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/blob/master/plugins/inputs/system/NET_README.md#measurements--fields) 
+- [Docker](https://github.com/influxdata/telegraf/tree/master/plugins/inputs/docker#metrics)
 
 
 ## Scheduled Scaling