Part of an art trade with JPkeeper22

JPKeeper22's half
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This is his character from Pangearas, Stalingrad and partner animal Rain. Rain is a little on the small side but they are supposed to be younger at this point so I could get away with that. Real reason is because the paper was too small. All critiques on how to improve are encouraged and welcome.

Speedpaint part 1 --> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rPb6YRaeXyY
Speedpaint part 2 --> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VayqprK5MBw
Speedpaint part 3 --> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cflaS27EHZs

<b>Commissions -</b> http://101icestormxx.deviantart.com.....Open-453240670