Salem Saberhagen Weight Gain Drive - step 2
The second step of the drive, this one supported by
hamstertrove! They wanted to feed Gem Stone as a mouse to him, with a bunch of extra food around to stuff him a bit more - on top of giving him quite bad breath, too.
The drive is still open here if you'd like to contribute!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/48613831/
hamstertrove! They wanted to feed Gem Stone as a mouse to him, with a bunch of extra food around to stuff him a bit more - on top of giving him quite bad breath, too.The drive is still open here if you'd like to contribute!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/48613831/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Feline (Other)
Size 3000 x 2048px
File Size 1.28 MB
This looks fantastic! Thank you for drawing my idea. :)
I love how thick Salem's thighs are looking, how big and bloated his gut's getting, and the innie belly button that's becoming visible upon his belly! I like how even his tail's getting thicker too, ha. It'll be exciting to see him getting even bigger and thicker as time goes on!
I appreciate you including all the details I mentioned! The look of his breath and his maw is totally what I had in mind, and I like the design of Gem Stone's mouse form!
I think the only minor criticism I have is Salem's crossed eyes; I feel like it probably would make more sense if his eyes were both gazing straight at Gem Stone while he's huffing out his breath and moving her towards his mouth. Other than that though, excellent work!
Would it be alright if I donated again and suggested a second idea? I had another idea that was more well-suited for the $10 donation tier, but I decided this was my favourite of the two ideas I came up with (plus I wanted to donate $20 to the weight gain drive anyway, as you stated you're saving up and supporting a friend financially!).
I love how thick Salem's thighs are looking, how big and bloated his gut's getting, and the innie belly button that's becoming visible upon his belly! I like how even his tail's getting thicker too, ha. It'll be exciting to see him getting even bigger and thicker as time goes on!
I appreciate you including all the details I mentioned! The look of his breath and his maw is totally what I had in mind, and I like the design of Gem Stone's mouse form!
I think the only minor criticism I have is Salem's crossed eyes; I feel like it probably would make more sense if his eyes were both gazing straight at Gem Stone while he's huffing out his breath and moving her towards his mouth. Other than that though, excellent work!
Would it be alright if I donated again and suggested a second idea? I had another idea that was more well-suited for the $10 donation tier, but I decided this was my favourite of the two ideas I came up with (plus I wanted to donate $20 to the weight gain drive anyway, as you stated you're saving up and supporting a friend financially!).
I've provided another donation and idea! I'll be excited to see the second idea visualised. :)
Oh, speaking of nitpicks; I noticed that in this drawing you forgot to add Salem's pink-coloured toe pads on his right foot. The lack of that detail certainly doesn't ruin the drawing, but it did stand out to me upon viewing the drawing again, as Salem possesses these toe pads in the previous drawing, as well as the following one. Would you like to add his toe pads to this drawing, so Salem's design is consistent throughout the weight gain drive?
Oh, speaking of nitpicks; I noticed that in this drawing you forgot to add Salem's pink-coloured toe pads on his right foot. The lack of that detail certainly doesn't ruin the drawing, but it did stand out to me upon viewing the drawing again, as Salem possesses these toe pads in the previous drawing, as well as the following one. Would you like to add his toe pads to this drawing, so Salem's design is consistent throughout the weight gain drive?
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