An observation
An observation
every instance of silver in official pkmn animation (to go along with my ethan post)
triptych fanmade cards i drew for @erazonpo3 in a recent exchange!
i hate fatigueee its so stupid. ohh when im home i’ll do this or that Nope. replacing all of your bones with pure titanium now. Goodbye
How to Fix Underwriting
1. Slow down at emotionally important moments.
Big emotions need space to land. If a scene feels rushed, pause the plot briefly to show how the moment affects the character.
2. Add reactions, not explanations.
Instead of explaining what a character feels, show it through physical responses, hesitation, or small actions that reveal emotion naturally.
3. Ground every scene in the senses.
If a scene feels thin, add one or two sensory details—sound, texture, smell, or temperature—to make the moment feel lived-in.
4. Let thoughts interrupt action.
A line of internal thought can deepen a scene without slowing it too much. Thoughts show stakes, fear, longing, or conflict beneath the action.
5. Expand consequences, not events.
You don’t need more things to happen—you need to show what matters. Focus on how events change relationships, decisions, or self-perception.
6. Strengthen setting where emotion peaks.
The environment should echo or contrast the emotion of the scene. Setting is not decoration—it’s emotional reinforcement.
7. Add specific details instead of general ones.
Underwriting often relies on vague language. Swap “they argued” for one sharp line of dialogue or a specific breaking point.
8. Let dialogue breathe.
Short dialogue exchanges without pauses can feel flat. Add beats—silence, gestures, interruptions—to give the conversation weight.
9. Show transitions between scenes.
If scenes jump too quickly, readers feel disoriented. A brief transition helps establish time, mood, and emotional continuity.
10. Clarify stakes early in the scene.
If readers don’t know what can be lost, scenes feel empty. Make sure the character wants something specific and fears losing it.
11. Use the “what are they feeling right now?” check.
After each major beat, ask what emotion is dominant in that moment. If it’s missing on the page, the scene is likely underwritten.
12. Expand scenes that feel “too clean.”
If a scene resolves too neatly or quickly, it probably needs more tension. Messy emotions and unresolved feelings add depth.
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Gonna make one hundred soups this year. Starting off with kapustnyak, carrot soup, chickpea soup, and parsnip soup.
4% complete.
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8% complete baybeee. This may end up being a long post. Hope you like the colour of the soup.
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Can’t stop won’t stop. 15 soups so far.
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Slowed down for a minute because vet bills ate up my grocery budget but made it to 20%, baybEEEE.
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Whoops I slowed down but BAM, 25%. I’m gonna make a comeback baybeeEEEE.
I AM BECOMING SO POWERFUL
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Four new BEAN BASED SOUPS, the first one trailblazing because it was a taco soup recipe courtesy of @alex-of-1000-dumbasseries. 61 IN THE BAG, 39 TO GO.
I am also linking my soup planning doc because I can, and it’s easier than tagging all of them individually.
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Have I lost all my followers yet? NOT YET. Time for more soups. I’m up to 70 now.
OP this is a gorgeous post and I’m so proud of you
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Thank you, I will take these codfish words to my grave. Also, I have achieved 8 more, putting me at 77 soups. How is 70 plus 9 photos 77? I’m glad you asked.
Earlier, I forgot to include a photo of my cock-a-leekie-soup (#57) - pictured above as the first one of this set - and also I MADE TARATOR TWICE by accident so I’ve struck one from the record since I’m trying to make 100 soups here, not 99 and one twice.
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A new bowl approaches. Bought myself some soup bowls from the 70s with goofy little geese on them for my own birthday (though I did not get them in time for my miyeok-guk), because what else is free will for. This puts me at 86. I JUST MIGHT MAKE IT? SOMEHOW?
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A COLOURFUL BATCH featuring another Certified Tumblr Soup because people kept recommending Yeto’s Soup, and they were right.
How am I at 92? ALL MY LIFE I’VE BEEN A QUITTER.
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100/100!
A wonderful day to take a stroll around Snowpoint City
New Volo and Togepi sticker that will be available at Liquid Games’ Pokemon market next month and online! :)
Writing Description Notes:
Updated 19th October 2025
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- Dialogue Tags
- Facial Expressions
- Masking Emotions
- Smiles/Smirks/Grins
- Eye Contact/Eye Movements
- Blushing
- Voice/Tone
- Body Language/Idle Movement
- Thoughts/Thinking/Focusing/Distracted
- Silence
- Memories
- Happy/Content/Comforted
- Love/Romance
- Sadness/Crying/Hurt
- Confidence/Determination/Hopeful
- Surprised/Shocked
- Guilt/Regret
- Disgusted/Jealous
- Uncertain/Doubtful/Worried
- Anger/Rage
- Laughter
- Confused
- Speechless/Tongue Tied
- Fear/Terrified
- Mental Pain
- Physical Pain
- Tired/Drowsy/Exhausted
- Eating
- Drinking
- Warm/Hot
- Cold/Freezing