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[LazyFish] (Rewrite) A new Curse or maybe a Blessing?

Doujinshi
Posted:2025-07-12 16:41
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  RW
File Size:318.7 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:970 times
Rating:
159
Average: 4.61

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Posted on 12 July 2025, 16:41 by:   Benjiboyo    PM
Uploader Comment
Hi, this is a very... unique thing for me to upload... yes, it's a rewrite, with extra pages that I consider a prolouge. Most of what I wanted to say is on the disclaimer page (for the mirror sites) I once again want to say not shade or slight on lazy fish's writing... this is for fun, and a bit of a creative exercise from me.
I can only hope you enjoy it, and I'm sorry if you think i butchered it.
Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/3414417/4f96d09c4e/

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Posted on 13 July 2025, 02:06 by:   Mr. Xecret    PM
Score +52
Both original and rewrite tick so many checkboxes, great works!
Posted on 13 July 2025, 12:25 by:   Benjiboyo    PM
Score +7
@Mr. Xeceet glad you liked it...... mind if I ask wich boxes mine ticked?
Posted on 13 July 2025, 14:53 by:   deathmaximum001    PM
Score -37
missing deepthroat tag.....you guys don't know how to tag properly these days....
Posted on 13 July 2025, 17:14 by:   Mr. Xecret    PM
Score +19
@Benjiboyo Well, most comes from the art itself, but let me just list a few you did good. (Disclaimer: I did not know anything about Made in Abyss nor attempt to look it up)
The addition of 4-page intro certainly helped in soft-landing to what's about to happen, bonus point on that. Original's beginning is not bad but compared to this it feels abrupt now.
Better dialogues. Not just in grammatical sense but also wordings and the mood. The original sounded with a bit of reluctance/unwanted tone while yours now leans more to the care and love toward Mitty.
Less onomatopoeia or unnecessary speech bubbles means more real estate on the art itself.
So I give you twhree good boy points. Well done
Posted on 14 July 2025, 13:25 by:   akx69    PM
Score +2
That's not how you spell "sleight"
Posted on 14 July 2025, 17:06 by:   Benjiboyo    PM
Score +15
@akx69 "sleighting" means to decieve/trick.
To "slight" someone is to insult them. I mean no insult from my rewrite with my disclaimer. I'm not saying i'm decieving people with this.
Posted on 28 July 2025, 03:18 by:   NinoM4ster    PM
Score +7
two is too many.
Posted on 24 November 2025, 02:42 by:   brijou    PM
Score +8
so hot(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°),需要汉化口也!
Posted on 30 November 2025, 07:24 by:   Raznaak    PM
Score +7
This is great, I come back to this so often!
Posted on 08 January 2026, 15:26 by:   lattlatt    PM
Score +6
Very good nanachi sexy

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