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Fox With A Gun

@f0xwithagun

Any Pronouns, They/Them prefered Hi! Call me Fox, don't forget I have a gun >;3 All comments welcome! Except for hate of any kind to any persons, the gun is here for a reason

Hello hello! Greetings to all! It's been a crazy couple of months, but here I am with some old jp drawings! I meant to post these a long time ago, but then life happened :p

So! @keferon is/was instrumental in helping me figure out how to draw transformers, and they absolutely deserve to be recognized for their incredible aus and character designs, so if you don't already know them go check them out!

Anyways, here are a couple drawings I made based on their designs!

Jazz is based off of kef's Reverse Mecha AU's minibot!Jazz design and Prowl is based off of their MoMU Prowl design!

And an extra little Jazz doodle because I strangely find him so much easier to draw than Prowl half the time:

Writing advice from my uni teachers:

  • If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
  • Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
  • Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
  • Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.

This is legit good writing advice, especially the first bullet point! In playwriting class we did a bit where every bit of dialogue had to be an accusatory question and it was glorious.

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