For those of you who are Dan Cook fans, you know what I mean when I say I'm crying and repeating "I tried my best." Chapter one is finished. I decided not to put a mature rating on this since there is only very brief nudity, and no details about it. I'm pretty pleased with this one, but there's just something about it I feel I could have done better. Oh well. Chapter two is almost finished, and that's where the really mature stuff will begin. Again, comments are very appreciated.