Great song mate, seems familiar for some reason, have you posted this before without vocals? Particuarly like the hammond organ lead during the "folky" bit XD

adfdfjkadhfkgrj I don't know what people see in that little part, everything else is so much better :'c

I very much enjoy folk music, particularly the melodies involved, hence why it stuck out to me.

But don't get me wrong haha, I really enjoyed the whole thing XD

Duuude you did an amazing job on it. Accept it. XD

Ahhhh this part is you?

It's excellent mate, don't sell yourself short :P Compliments the song nicely and as mentioned above, fantastic melodies.

I did, yeah! If I recall, it was actually the first song of mine you faved and commented on. Lol I had submitted it to the Furry Musicians Spotlight, but I don't remember if I made the cut or not. XD

Glad you like it, dude! :D

Thought it was familiar ;) Great work dude, vocals bring it to life!

Personal Opinion - one of your best

I agree! XD I've been wanting to get this recorded for...well, it seems like forever. Lol

Much thanks, yo! :D

Thanks in return ,

Full appreciation this side for posting

I enjoyed that! Lots of good sounds in here mannnnnn, everything flows so well, love Juno and Cyril's contributions! Love all the vocal harmonies going on too, and that's some good riffing!

If I can be so bold as to give criticism, I feel like a few less notes in your opening keyboard riff can make it more powerful (also perhaps playing with velocity might make it sound a bit less mechanical)- and I think perhaps eschewing the fade-out at the end in favor of an extended guitar solo, ending the song with a full-band variation of the opening piano riff, ending on the open B (i think you said you're playing in A?) and just letting it fade out there

But yeah, it's solid good work you got here man! I applaud ye

MORE! MORE!

Thanks dude! I was afraid you'd have some major major "this shit and that shit suck" kinds of comments when you asked if I wanted criticism. XD

I'm not sure how to do velocity stuff when it comes to piano, to be honest. Whenever I've done keyboard stuff on an actual keyboard, I tend to keep velocity control off, since I'm not much of a pianist myself. I could give it a shot, sure, but I make no promises there. XD I'm not sure which notes I could remove from it, either. When I wrote it, I wanted a good mixture of kind of fluttery stuff alongside a pounding low end to accentuate it.

I have always wanted to extend the solo at the end, though. The only reason I didn't was because I was worried that the ending would have dragged on and overstayed its welcome. Lol Also, I ran out of ideas when I was writing the solo and didn't want to keep going with scales. XD

I do really appreciate the critique, though! I'll see if I can give it a bit of a rework when I can! X3

Anytime!

Thanks so much! It is easily one of my favourites of my songs. Lol

Just out of curiosity, what were the personal taste things you noted?

Hey, opinions, so long as they aren't inflammatory, are always valid critiques. ;)

I generally prefer long intros to songs. This one is actually slightly too long for my tastes, but I was noodling around and improvising guitar solos and it just kind of got away from me. XD

Now, when you say the riff solo, are you talking about the one just as the song gets heavy again, just before the "I'm losing out and it's getting cold" section? There are...five total solos in this, so it's hard to know which one. XD If it is that one you're thinking of, I do agree. I wanted that one to be a bit longer, but I wasn't sure if the song could handle that many long solos, since all of them aside from that one are on the slightly lengthy side. Lol