This page is kinda special for me, and ironically, it was made/posted in the moment of my life where I'm leaving home and family is worried, and will probably miss me around.
Again I apologize for this period, I will soon be ready to work properly and things will be normal again, possibly improved routine.
(Note: I'll eventually put this comic in a furaffinity folder so I don't have to link the next/previous page in every post)
Again I apologize for this period, I will soon be ready to work properly and things will be normal again, possibly improved routine.
(Note: I'll eventually put this comic in a furaffinity folder so I don't have to link the next/previous page in every post)

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I saw this comic in the recent submissions section of furaffinity, your art was so beautiful that i had to go back and read the first series so that i could catch up and read this one. It was the cutest comic i saw. Keep up the good work, im sure ill be comment more soon.
This is just absolutely gorgeously written, illustrated, etc. I feel like writing a 5 paragraphy review on this one day, and I just might, post it as a journal and link if that'd be ok with you. because of all the furry comics I've read, this is by far the one that truly impresses me from every single angle. Not to mention the feels it gives anyone I know whose read it or seen it, or I've shared it with linking it and they just agree with me and/or the masses.
Amazing job, truly amazing.
Amazing job, truly amazing.
most PRON comics go directly to sex in as little as few pages, usually for no reason at all, which kinda disappoints me. You, on the other hand, add story into the mix, which makes for a very interesting comic series. Great job keeping the "literature" part of this.
(I apologize for the multitude of commas)
(I apologize for the multitude of commas)
I understand that, I have to agree with you on the part that porn comics can totally forget about the story.
My main objetive with a comic (at least this one) is to tell the story I created, this little universe that I'm sharing with the public. The porn bits are just part of it, helps to tell the story, adds the magic to it, but doesn't take its essence away =o
And thanks for you comment
My main objetive with a comic (at least this one) is to tell the story I created, this little universe that I'm sharing with the public. The porn bits are just part of it, helps to tell the story, adds the magic to it, but doesn't take its essence away =o
And thanks for you comment
There's so many little things I like about this comic - you're not told the answers to everything about the world it takes place in, and everything is described in a way that's so emotional and raw, that makes you have an emotional connection with the characters beyond what's explicitly said in it - i.e, our main character's not JUST some horny gay dude who fell in love with his best friend. There's so much more to him.
The reason I mention this is because this page in particular - more specifically, the two bottom panels - piques my interest. We see the mother looking at a photo of the family, which not only features herself and the main character (as an adorable child), but the apparent father, whose eyes aren't drawn into the picture. Does this in some way illustrate that he's died? Is he divorced? At any rate, it seems to me that he's no longer a part of the family - he's *not there.* Furthermore, his character is far different from the boy and his mom's; he's not a golden color, and his ears aren't flopped down. This shows us that the kid takes after his mom, who to this point has been shown to be not only a "good" character, but also a strong force in his life; this only gives us more reason to trust that the main character will continue to be a force for good through this comic, no matter what happens; even if he ends up doing something horrible, it will be with the best of intentions, and it will most likely be very difficult for him.
I bring all of this up to show you, Zeta-Haru - even though I don't expect you to read through all of this - that those little touches you put into every page and panel of your comics don't go unnoticed. In my opinion, they make you one of the greatest comic writers and illustrators on this site, if not THE greatest. The fact that this moment parallels the moment you're going through in your own life seems almost prophetic, in a way - I know it wouldn't be possible for you to make such a touching comic focusing in on someone if you didn't allow yourself to connect with said someone in a very special way. :D
That's all I have to say! I know Portuguese is your first language, so I don't know if you'll be able to understand everything I say in the way it was intended, but I have an immense respect for you and the work you do. I can't wait for the next page, much less the entirety of the comic!
The reason I mention this is because this page in particular - more specifically, the two bottom panels - piques my interest. We see the mother looking at a photo of the family, which not only features herself and the main character (as an adorable child), but the apparent father, whose eyes aren't drawn into the picture. Does this in some way illustrate that he's died? Is he divorced? At any rate, it seems to me that he's no longer a part of the family - he's *not there.* Furthermore, his character is far different from the boy and his mom's; he's not a golden color, and his ears aren't flopped down. This shows us that the kid takes after his mom, who to this point has been shown to be not only a "good" character, but also a strong force in his life; this only gives us more reason to trust that the main character will continue to be a force for good through this comic, no matter what happens; even if he ends up doing something horrible, it will be with the best of intentions, and it will most likely be very difficult for him.
I bring all of this up to show you, Zeta-Haru - even though I don't expect you to read through all of this - that those little touches you put into every page and panel of your comics don't go unnoticed. In my opinion, they make you one of the greatest comic writers and illustrators on this site, if not THE greatest. The fact that this moment parallels the moment you're going through in your own life seems almost prophetic, in a way - I know it wouldn't be possible for you to make such a touching comic focusing in on someone if you didn't allow yourself to connect with said someone in a very special way. :D
That's all I have to say! I know Portuguese is your first language, so I don't know if you'll be able to understand everything I say in the way it was intended, but I have an immense respect for you and the work you do. I can't wait for the next page, much less the entirety of the comic!
Firs of all thanks for your whole comment man
Even though you said I'm the best and all, I really appreciate but I have to disagree :c I'm still a beginner at comics and stories, what I'm doing here, someone more experienced could do it twice as fast or better in my opinion, but I can accept the credit for this one story I developed and am sharing with you all, it's amazing how people can get hints and see way more in the comic than it is really there, like if there were invisible extra lines at every page, this is something that normal illustrations can't do effectively with a single frame.
What I want to say I think, is that I am doing this for love, the whole art career and community participation. And I try give my best ><
Oh and on a side note, I was planning on "going for the extremes" in future comics, for example: A comic that is purely adult, and a comic that is for general audience and the story is the main (if not the only) focus of it. I would do that to expand what I know and what I can do with comics :3
And no worries, my first language is portuguese but I can understand english pretty well I appreciate your respect and appreciation! *hug*
Even though you said I'm the best and all, I really appreciate but I have to disagree :c I'm still a beginner at comics and stories, what I'm doing here, someone more experienced could do it twice as fast or better in my opinion, but I can accept the credit for this one story I developed and am sharing with you all, it's amazing how people can get hints and see way more in the comic than it is really there, like if there were invisible extra lines at every page, this is something that normal illustrations can't do effectively with a single frame.
What I want to say I think, is that I am doing this for love, the whole art career and community participation. And I try give my best ><
Oh and on a side note, I was planning on "going for the extremes" in future comics, for example: A comic that is purely adult, and a comic that is for general audience and the story is the main (if not the only) focus of it. I would do that to expand what I know and what I can do with comics :3
And no worries, my first language is portuguese but I can understand english pretty well I appreciate your respect and appreciation! *hug*
(This is sarcasm) say for example someone like Scott cawthawn could take a story just like the one you did but do twice as fast and better (not to offend you) however someone like Scotty boy could probably release some kind of story three times as fast (that explains how the FNAF games come out so fast)
That's cute but a little bit sad at the same time. And that this drawing is about a personal time of your life make it even more beautiful and sad. Hope that leaving the home will be as easy for you as it sound like. Also kinda funny cause something similar happens to me. I moved some days ago and my entire type of life changed since. I'm not used to my new type of life but hope that I will be soon and that everything I have to do will be cleared before it become to late and put me in trouble.
Acabei de reparar que na página passada, Daniel estava com uma camiseta branca, e nesse já está com uma preta.
Pra mim isso não faz a mínima diferença e nem faz a comic ter uma qualidade menor em qualquer sentido, só estou fazendo esse comentário porque acho que não foi proposital, sei lá.
Não se ofenda u.u"
Pra mim isso não faz a mínima diferença e nem faz a comic ter uma qualidade menor em qualquer sentido, só estou fazendo esse comentário porque acho que não foi proposital, sei lá.
Não se ofenda u.u"
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