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Transform... (repost)

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posted 17 years ago Writer

Ok so it didn't show up... and idk why! >.< Thank you Osiris

Osiris for noticing that for me I hope it'll show this time...

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Osiris ~osiris

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17 years ago

No worries. Just keep on writing!
Great poem, but you need to organize your thoughts without using the multiple dots. If you insist on using them, use longer, more involved sentences.
And, I must admit, the night does sometimes change us in strange ways.

DWA1810 ~dwa1810

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17 years ago

I see what u mean about organizing my thoughts. Ok Thanxz for ur advice ^^
Yes it does :)
Don't worry I will

tailwaggerlupine ~tailwaggerlupine

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17 years ago

...dots can be useful at times.

I'm presuming that you are meaning for this to be more drawn out and thought about before reading onto the next line, thereby making it a little bit more lyrical in timing, and maybe that it be digested a little more...

...maybe?

Keep it up.

DWA1810 ~dwa1810

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17 years ago

yeah pretty much... it sounded better in my head though :D

tailwaggerlupine ~tailwaggerlupine

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17 years ago

That's the way it usually works, an why I mentioned the thing about "lyrical".

I like how it flows.

DWA1810 ~dwa1810

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17 years ago

O ok now I understand what u mean in fact... I could turn it into a song lol maybe XD

tailwaggerlupine ~tailwaggerlupine

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17 years ago

Maybe... ;)

DWA1810 ~dwa1810

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17 years ago

lol

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