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Well, unlike Baby Gem, who can be assigned to any set of parents, Star has an established family. She has two parents who were in the army, which is why she grew up to be a corporal, and she has three older brothers, which is why she's such a tomboy. It's canon, so they can't have her have it in one piece and be an orphan in another.
I know you said that he's lost forever, but I do hope there's a possibliity for reincarnation for Gem's father. (Afterall, even though he's fallen into darkness, Gem still has some connection to him.) No one should wallow in their missery forever. That only would only serve to create more darkness. Although I guess it's up to him to realize that he can pull that cord. I guess I just like the idea of giving people in a hopeless situation at least a little shimmer. Even if you don't make it cannon, I have friends who I'm certain wouldn't mind sharing my headcannon.
Even as a dog for the month… I'm still that kind of raccoon at heart. Looking forward to the ending you've chosen.
Even as a dog for the month… I'm still that kind of raccoon at heart. Looking forward to the ending you've chosen.
Personally, I see it like this: When a soul is "consumed" it's broken down into it's base elementary particles. However, those particles still exist, and thus the soul is not truly gone forever. Furthermore, it may be possible to reconstitute the lost soul if one can gather and reassemble these particles.
Well, that simply wont do. Then it wouldn't be any different than when one eats food. Eventually the molecules will become part of another being… er… not to make it too complicated it becomes a "Ship of Theseus Paradox".
Whereas the way I see it, his soul is intact, but it exists in a plane that is inescapable, the darkness of his own mind. Hense why I pointed out that "shimmer of hope" thing. The string alone might not be strong enough to bring him back to the surface of his "sea of missery", but it might lead him back (coincidentally, just like Theseus from the minataur's maze.)
Whereas the way I see it, his soul is intact, but it exists in a plane that is inescapable, the darkness of his own mind. Hense why I pointed out that "shimmer of hope" thing. The string alone might not be strong enough to bring him back to the surface of his "sea of missery", but it might lead him back (coincidentally, just like Theseus from the minataur's maze.)
Not necessarily. It's like in The World Ends With You, when -
<BIG SPOILERS AHEAD>
- Rhyme got erased. With Mr. Hanekoma's help, the SOUL she was made up of was able to be preserved in the form a pin. Ultimately, both the pin and the Noise that could be conjured from it still had Rhyme's personality and memories encoded into them, and by the end the game, she was able to be restored to her proper human form by the Composer.
<BIG SPOILERS AHEAD>
- Rhyme got erased. With Mr. Hanekoma's help, the SOUL she was made up of was able to be preserved in the form a pin. Ultimately, both the pin and the Noise that could be conjured from it still had Rhyme's personality and memories encoded into them, and by the end the game, she was able to be restored to her proper human form by the Composer.
Which btw is exactly what a "Ship of Theseus Paradox" is.
Although what you're describing sounds more like a save file. Real "souls" tend to be less about data and seem to be made up of something a bit more… for lack of better word, "timeless". It's not a physical thing that can be recorded and truely replicated. Given it can be quite similar. Kind of like the time old "Cloning" plot.
Although what you're describing sounds more like a save file. Real "souls" tend to be less about data and seem to be made up of something a bit more… for lack of better word, "timeless". It's not a physical thing that can be recorded and truely replicated. Given it can be quite similar. Kind of like the time old "Cloning" plot.
Okay, but to what limitation? I mean, your explination states " (his soul is) broken down into it's base elementary particles. However, those particles still exist…" giving rise to the idea that these particles can then become part of something else, but because they still "exist" then you can eventually Remove them from all of the "something else"s out there, bring all of these individual parts together to "recreate" Jack. (Thus see the second part of the Theseus Ship Paradox. The same can be asked about your own body too. Science has determined that Every single molecule in your body will be completely replaced in seven year cycles. Crazy right? So all of this could be argued one way or the other.)
Although it's my understanding that his soul wasn't "destroyed" in any shape or fashion. Just lost to the endless void. So something more akin to this rather than that time that April scattered Donetello's molecules across the cosmos… Assuming you watch the newest TMNT series that is… ( As I can't find the clip. ) I still don't think that the Donnie that April "brought together" is the same Donnie despite having the same memories and body.
Even so, I prefer not to think of a character being shattered like that as it raises the question of… to be a bit crude… If you put a frog in a blender, you have all the parts of the frog, so why can't you just put the frog back together. Or like this There are some things you simply can't fix or recreate perfectly.
Although it's my understanding that his soul wasn't "destroyed" in any shape or fashion. Just lost to the endless void. So something more akin to this rather than that time that April scattered Donetello's molecules across the cosmos… Assuming you watch the newest TMNT series that is… ( As I can't find the clip. ) I still don't think that the Donnie that April "brought together" is the same Donnie despite having the same memories and body.
Even so, I prefer not to think of a character being shattered like that as it raises the question of… to be a bit crude… If you put a frog in a blender, you have all the parts of the frog, so why can't you just put the frog back together. Or like this There are some things you simply can't fix or recreate perfectly.
Oh and as thanks for the chat. FA has a "Spoiler" tag. Using these "[]" Put "spoiler" at the front and "/spoiler" in the back. so it'd look something like <spoiler> "Kind of Cool, Right?" </spoiler> (While obviously replacing "<>" with "[]")
And you'll get something that looks like this: "Kind of cool. Right?" Use it well, my friend.
And you'll get something that looks like this: "Kind of cool. Right?" Use it well, my friend.
I was on my phone before, so it's hard to notice the detail. Of course, she has the necklace on at her wedding, how beautiful. Paul looks wonderful, and if Mr. Paul looked just as dashing at your real wedding, I'm sure it would be great to see the photos.
Are YOU teaching Paul to play guitar, or is he teaching you? Squirrels in the snow! Looks like fun
Finally, I hope Gemma and Paul find the perfect child to adopt, or maybe more than one!
All in all, a great story, Sammy. A lot of ups and downs, a lot of tears, a lot of emotion packed into this story. I'm sure the next page will be the best of all. Are you still going to do the 'alternate ending?'
Hugs
Are YOU teaching Paul to play guitar, or is he teaching you? Squirrels in the snow! Looks like fun
Finally, I hope Gemma and Paul find the perfect child to adopt, or maybe more than one!
All in all, a great story, Sammy. A lot of ups and downs, a lot of tears, a lot of emotion packed into this story. I'm sure the next page will be the best of all. Are you still going to do the 'alternate ending?'
Hugs
Quick question:
How did this part get resolved?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18094827/
meaning the incident the newscaster was talking about
How did this part get resolved?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18094827/
meaning the incident the newscaster was talking about
she explains what happened here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19551793/ after her recovery both gem and paul return to the solicitor office lucily for them theyre both great at their jobs so were taken back
Huh, I would've figured Paul would be okay with finding work elsewhere, since:
A. It'd allow Gem to avoid the whole "workplace romances are not appropriate" issue.
B. If he opted to work at someplace like a candy store or flower shop, he'd be able to constantly shower Gem with romantic gifts.
A. It'd allow Gem to avoid the whole "workplace romances are not appropriate" issue.
B. If he opted to work at someplace like a candy store or flower shop, he'd be able to constantly shower Gem with romantic gifts.
Congrats, you have finished the comic .I realized that 'Found" means how Gem Found her love, both in real and spirit world, even though she felt that it left her.
although i don't understand that why they were in the spirit world, as far as i know, people either take rebirth in a matter of weeks, or if have done excellent/worst deeds, go to live among the angels/demons till eternity
although i don't understand that why they were in the spirit world, as far as i know, people either take rebirth in a matter of weeks, or if have done excellent/worst deeds, go to live among the angels/demons till eternity
You deserve an A++ for this comic!!
It's super emotional and each page had me guessing what happens next til the very end.
I thought this was gonna just be all about baby furs, too, but you proved me wrong.
I really enjoyed this, and I really do hope they remain happy for the rest of their lives~! QwQ
It's super emotional and each page had me guessing what happens next til the very end.
I thought this was gonna just be all about baby furs, too, but you proved me wrong.
I really enjoyed this, and I really do hope they remain happy for the rest of their lives~! QwQ
Well what a great adventure was it to read through. Of course I don't mean it in a cynical or mean spirited way, I'm just saying how grand and long this comic was.
I read through it after really liking your "Shine" comic. And as for this one, I still liked it a lot.
I didn't love the first few dozen of pages, but after that, the more I read through it, the more I found it great and interesting. And some of the pages, they're just excellents . Though I wasn't the biggest fan of the last part of the climax, it's just my taste and opinion ofcourse, maybe it's because it was too emotional for me at that life moment, maybe it's because I would have better seen Gem's father as if he went so far in his fury that he couldn't be brought back to reason (and would've loved to see that moment in page 371 when Jack and Souffle where found physically in an hospital room developped)..
But those are just nitpicks, because it was a really good comic.
And I think that's all I wanted to say in this comment so ... ythe you go.
I read through it after really liking your "Shine" comic. And as for this one, I still liked it a lot.
I didn't love the first few dozen of pages, but after that, the more I read through it, the more I found it great and interesting. And some of the pages, they're just excellents . Though I wasn't the biggest fan of the last part of the climax, it's just my taste and opinion ofcourse, maybe it's because it was too emotional for me at that life moment, maybe it's because I would have better seen Gem's father as if he went so far in his fury that he couldn't be brought back to reason (and would've loved to see that moment in page 371 when Jack and Souffle where found physically in an hospital room developped)..
But those are just nitpicks, because it was a really good comic.
And I think that's all I wanted to say in this comment so ... ythe you go.
hey i love your work but it's a shame you have to end it here i think you should make more and be happy though this really got to me i love it it inspired me to make my own work not on here but in real life i think that you just should not end it there write about 30 or 40 years into the future she dies and lives happily and has fun times but still remembers all the moments she has had in her life with them.
hey i love your work but it's a shame you have to end it here i think you should make more and be happy though this really got to me i love it it inspired me to make my own work not on here but in real life i think that you just should not end it there write about 30 or 40 years into the future she dies and lives happily and has fun times but still remembers all the moments she has had in her life with them.
augh I just found this comic today and I've stayed up all night-- and let me tell you I've been bawling mY EYES OUT. Amazing, truly amazing. To be honest touched base on a lot of aspects to this. However over all just a 20/10.
I actually had to take a breaks every now and then because it would hit a little too close to home. But I just had to keep reading. <3
I actually had to take a breaks every now and then because it would hit a little too close to home. But I just had to keep reading. <3
I started this 2 years ago but stopped since it didn't seem as interesting to me as Shine.....Now after 6 Hours of Reading Found I'm sitting there, not crying but I definitely had tears run down my Cheeks. Reading about someone who is Adopted and suddenly getting Old Memories shown which also includes Seein your real Mother and Siblings is something I would never be able to think of happening to me but I'm REALLY like REALLY sensitive and can get so much Emotional about stuff. Long Story Short I am So happy to go At least be in contact to my Mom and my Brothers since my Dad Died 13 years ago... well I didn't know him much but I loved him so maybe this was the reason why I teared up so much in this Comic. Also the thing with her getting drugs while Cuffed was... I stopped at that page and nearly decided to skip a few pages since I totally knew what those drugs would do, in an even thinking about that was so... I'm kinda Happy to Read that Comic instead if Watching Markipliers 5 Hour Five Nights and Freddy's video but at the same time, I wished I would never have read it. So Dark and... I know I might not even make sense with what I'm writing... it's 3:35 am okay?! IM.... not even tired but this Comic affected me... made me everything my Life even though I had rough moments but... like.... damn that was sooo Dark...
For me when I see the epilogue, that music https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=w1FgmqTU92I fits that epilogue for my opinion
I just found your comic like, idk, it was very short time... and i rlly didn't have the trip like all the people from the beggining, but... it was for me a rlly long trip, a lot of emotions, and i'm so happy if this was the ending, i love your comic, it's so special
Thanks for make this lovely story ♥
Thanks for make this lovely story ♥
I like this entire webcomic. It's amazing I think that all of us had at least been visited by a deceased loved one through our dreams. That's was this webcomic was about. It's strange that she found out that half her family died and found her dreams. Basically I wouldn't call her crazy since this was high levels of visitation dreams from the long deceased that has contact with a loved one who alive. Example her brothers who where long dead managed to contact her through a dream which was something that had me thinking that she was visited. It's a cool mix of supernatural and I liked it alot! And somehow thier visit would trigger a memory that had been locked away 36 years. Sooner or later we all would eventually remember our childhood even if it's a few small glimpses of the past.
I read everything for the first time in one sit and you can't even know how much of an achievement is that in me is really hard for me to focus but I was so hang up that I stayed up late like real late I couldn't hold the story I was sooooo hang up on it that it was physically impossible real I slept from 6am to 10 am because I couldn't leave it be I had to see it through
it took my untill now to read this one. Three hours of my life im not getting back...but damn...it was worth it. I have no idea how you do it deat. Now, it might be because my lack of sleep, but your talent and ability to create wonders in colored inked form... im litterally crying here.... yup im pretty tired. Anyways long text short....
Flipping epic story!!! <3
Flipping epic story!!! <3
I came here searching for some wholesome babyfur stuff but what I found is a story that genuinely had me in tears by the time it was over. Its extremely rare that I ever encounter characters in a story that I can in some small way connect to. Your art and storytelling improved dramatically as the story progressed and I count myself lucky to have been able to read this story.
Gosh, I've read the whole story in a couple of hours. Tears wept, laughs lauged. This was for me an emotional rollercoaster. To sum up what my thought is about this story, never be left out to be loved, to love and care for each other. We are all identities who are running this world and living our lives, don't leave anyone behind!
Thank you, *drops mic* Guru out
Thank you, *drops mic* Guru out
Ok, looking at this now, I read it in about 9 hours, and my emotes were going up and down. This is really cool storey, full of sad things, and full of great things. I'm still sad for the ending, but happy for Gem.
I think any other chapter will be better than this! ANY! (Sorry Baby Star)
And now I cry, when going to sleep, nice. What is mother finds out lol
I think any other chapter will be better than this! ANY! (Sorry Baby Star)
And now I cry, when going to sleep, nice. What is mother finds out lol
Hey,
So I saw your journal about Shine spoiling the end of this so I came back to read it (it only took me a couple hours, I read fast). I don't think I have been more emotionally invested in a comic in a long time and I want to thank you for not shying away from letting things get dark before the light can shine. You are an amazing story teller and, reading through this comic also shows just how much you have grown as an artist.
So thank you for this, and I look forward to reading even more of you future work
So I saw your journal about Shine spoiling the end of this so I came back to read it (it only took me a couple hours, I read fast). I don't think I have been more emotionally invested in a comic in a long time and I want to thank you for not shying away from letting things get dark before the light can shine. You are an amazing story teller and, reading through this comic also shows just how much you have grown as an artist.
So thank you for this, and I look forward to reading even more of you future work
Thankyoo for reading it. It is a tough ride to read the whole thing in one sitting some parts are really dark and upsetting and theres parts im dreading returning to for the remake so im always impressed when people manage to get through the comic all in one go because i dont think even i can do that hahaha
I just read the whole thing.. this story, the writing, the art (with all of its progressions and commentary) it’s so amazing. I laughed and cried way more than I should have. I’m so excited to see the remake.
I’m sure you get a ton of comments and stuff but I hope this reaches you.. Thank yoos
I’m sure you get a ton of comments and stuff but I hope this reaches you.. Thank yoos
Just wow. What a Rollercoaster. You made a grown man almost cry. Last time the feels hit that hard, I was watching clannad.
And I'm not even into the furs, just found your page through a random journey down the rabbit hole starting over at reddit.
After I figured that pages were missing, due to NSFW settings, your comics started to be way less confusing.
Nice work!
And I'm not even into the furs, just found your page through a random journey down the rabbit hole starting over at reddit.
After I figured that pages were missing, due to NSFW settings, your comics started to be way less confusing.
Nice work!
I had a hard frustrating day. Then i was looking at the old-page comparison of the redraw and thought "I forget what happens next, I should just go see" .. and fell down the rabbit hole rereading the whole rest all over again and crying and crying. Hoo boy I feel better now.
Girl, I don't know what to say. I read the entire comic in almost one sitting and it made me cry so many times! I'm very impressed and sad by all the things that have happened. Still, thank you so much for this beautiful story. (I already read all of the published pages of the retake, I don't know if I will be able to endure the pain once again)
Thanks ToddlerGirl for this journey. I read this over several weeks. Taking a break to do a little self reflection. You kept me up at night as I lay there thinking about the basics of what one wants out of life.
I've mentioned the anime "Your Name" before. I'd recommended to watch it if you haven't seen it. But it's 'sparkle' sound track was a rather fitting track to listen to after these last few pages.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tpH8TEkKQI4
thanks again and, I wish you well ToddlerGirl!
I've mentioned the anime "Your Name" before. I'd recommended to watch it if you haven't seen it. But it's 'sparkle' sound track was a rather fitting track to listen to after these last few pages.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tpH8TEkKQI4
thanks again and, I wish you well ToddlerGirl!
I gotta say, I was not expecting this story to be as deep as it was. Not only did the diaper bits actually make sense story-wise, but the actual regression also made sense because of Gem's lack of childhood. The whole enzyme-dream spirit thing was confusing at first, but I managed to grasp it well enough. Overall a very great story that pandered to the audience while delivering an emotional rollercoaster.
Also small sidenote: Jack trying to bring his family back together made me think of MatPat's Game Theory vid about the Mrs. Afton reuniting the family. Made me giggle quite a bit.
Also small sidenote: Jack trying to bring his family back together made me think of MatPat's Game Theory vid about the Mrs. Afton reuniting the family. Made me giggle quite a bit.
i know this is 5 years old now but WOW, there is few of the pages that almost made me tear up but this hit the nail on the head bawling my eyes out as if i have known her all my life. when i saw adult zeezee i thought the ending was going to be gem searching and reuniting with her family, it broke my heart to learn they died in a house fire 😭. but this ending is 100/10. Not only are you an insanely good artist but you're an amazing storyteller/writer.
I cant wait to re-read this in the re-take 👋. stay safe and have a wonderful lifetime to anyone reading this, just remember in the most hopeless of times there is always that special someone who loves you for who you are not what they want you to be.
I cant wait to re-read this in the re-take 👋. stay safe and have a wonderful lifetime to anyone reading this, just remember in the most hopeless of times there is always that special someone who loves you for who you are not what they want you to be.
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