Ok so I guess because everyone else was doing it that I should too. Conformity can be fun sometimes too. After seeing
Razr's RL meme http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2762126 I felt to take it seriously and use a "myspace" picture of mine. Yes I can be a camera whore, eh but what can you do when you know you look good lol.
Also this is the first time doing wrinkles in clothes, I like how it came out for my shirt :3
Original: http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos.....581_458355.jpg
Didn't need to have my face in it since I was replacing it with a wolf head =/ but you can see my face elsewhere in my gallery
Razr's RL meme http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2762126 I felt to take it seriously and use a "myspace" picture of mine. Yes I can be a camera whore, eh but what can you do when you know you look good lol. Also this is the first time doing wrinkles in clothes, I like how it came out for my shirt :3
Original: http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos.....581_458355.jpg
Didn't need to have my face in it since I was replacing it with a wolf head =/ but you can see my face elsewhere in my gallery
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 500 x 700px
File Size 224.2 kB
kick ass! Love the scars, character, pose and perspective XD hell thats the whole thing X3 if I lost mah belly I would be a BEAST lol! I am actually pretty muscular (especially for a female! Ive lifted an effing POOL TABLE! A few months ago actually. Im 210lbs XP and 6ft tall!)
In accordance to <http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1095731>
Even though you used reference it seems to me you've completely ignored it in many places instead filling in with what you think should be there. Play close attention to the details and the spatial relationships they have to eachother. I can guarantee the abs and the belly button a very different in your original photo.
Gradients can be used as backgrounds but the choice you made doesn't help the piece. Had you chosen a contrasting full screen gradient that could help show the character silhouette more. Head is too big, angle of head is slanted oddly. Alot of details are ignored shoulder and armpit area. Hair is an after thought. Shape it don't just throw it on like a mop top.
Line art needs to be cleaner and more distinct.
And if you can't or don't want to shade effectively keep things to solid color so that you aren't muddling the drawing too much with shade that isn't really helping the form.
Even though you used reference it seems to me you've completely ignored it in many places instead filling in with what you think should be there. Play close attention to the details and the spatial relationships they have to eachother. I can guarantee the abs and the belly button a very different in your original photo.
Gradients can be used as backgrounds but the choice you made doesn't help the piece. Had you chosen a contrasting full screen gradient that could help show the character silhouette more. Head is too big, angle of head is slanted oddly. Alot of details are ignored shoulder and armpit area. Hair is an after thought. Shape it don't just throw it on like a mop top.
Line art needs to be cleaner and more distinct.
And if you can't or don't want to shade effectively keep things to solid color so that you aren't muddling the drawing too much with shade that isn't really helping the form.
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