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And any critics are welcome.
Suggestions and all your thoughts
Even if I won't respond ))
Your silence doesn't help me improve my art :P
foxontheinside★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ I'm taking commissions ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
And any critics are welcome.
Suggestions and all your thoughts
Even if I won't respond ))
Your silence doesn't help me improve my art :P
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I must admit, I think the eyes were better on sketch 6. They were a little more intense and focused (in my opinion), but very happy with the artists work, and not only that - his professionalism in replying to messages regularly really impressed me.
Doing my final proof-read of the book before I publish it.
Doing my final proof-read of the book before I publish it.
"Your silence doesn't help me improve my art :P"
Oof. a little harsh sounding... o. o;;
But I do understand...
You spend years and years working to get this good at artwork, then spend hours on end on a detailed piece, and all you get are brief comments like "Nice" or "Hot"...
I think, though... part of the problem might be, that as you get better as an artist, there are fewer and fewer folks who feel like they themselves are qualified to make criticism on one's work.
For example, I myself am far inferior to your artistic capability, so I feel a little awkward offering criticism.
I also think that some folks worry that they will inadvertently insult the artist with their criticism, even if they mean well in the criticism.
If I HAD to pick out a negative quality...
Perhaps the shading on the neck line, under the chin and jaw, could have been a little darker? the shading blends enough still that the head and shoulders look a little flat on the page.
Aside from that, I can at least offer my appreciation for the many details you put into this piece.
First off, I noticed you even put subtle fabric texturing and staining on the shirt, which is fantastic attention to detail.
Similarly, the fur is gorgeous, showing muscle and sinew underneath, smoothed somewhat by the fur covering it, again, a very realistic detail.
I also like the dull sheen of the stainless steel lab table that you did, showing the reflection of the figure. The lab background tells a story about the piece in general, and indeed, I am curious about the bored look on his face, despite what most folks would consider a startling situation.
Also, the pawhand itself is gorgeous... perfect hybridization of anatomy and proportion... of course the tail is grand, too.
All in all, I would say you are on the cusp of photorealism... it's all a matter of making the brush strokes finer and finer now, which honestly dizzies me to think about even attempting such a level of detail.
I do hope that you find your work fulfilling... and if you ever care for commentary on any of your pieces, just Note me, including if you want to specify just what kind of observations you would like commented on.
One of the big perks about doing artwork is hearing what people think about your work, a rush that tends to end all too soon, as people give brief observations and wander off typically (though seldom meaning actual malice from it).
Because of this, when I do comment on art, I tend to be rather long winded, as I am being right now.
I appreciate the hard work you do bringing amazing fantasies closer to reality... Thank you. :)
Oof. a little harsh sounding... o. o;;
But I do understand...
You spend years and years working to get this good at artwork, then spend hours on end on a detailed piece, and all you get are brief comments like "Nice" or "Hot"...
I think, though... part of the problem might be, that as you get better as an artist, there are fewer and fewer folks who feel like they themselves are qualified to make criticism on one's work.
For example, I myself am far inferior to your artistic capability, so I feel a little awkward offering criticism.
I also think that some folks worry that they will inadvertently insult the artist with their criticism, even if they mean well in the criticism.
If I HAD to pick out a negative quality...
Perhaps the shading on the neck line, under the chin and jaw, could have been a little darker? the shading blends enough still that the head and shoulders look a little flat on the page.
Aside from that, I can at least offer my appreciation for the many details you put into this piece.
First off, I noticed you even put subtle fabric texturing and staining on the shirt, which is fantastic attention to detail.
Similarly, the fur is gorgeous, showing muscle and sinew underneath, smoothed somewhat by the fur covering it, again, a very realistic detail.
I also like the dull sheen of the stainless steel lab table that you did, showing the reflection of the figure. The lab background tells a story about the piece in general, and indeed, I am curious about the bored look on his face, despite what most folks would consider a startling situation.
Also, the pawhand itself is gorgeous... perfect hybridization of anatomy and proportion... of course the tail is grand, too.
All in all, I would say you are on the cusp of photorealism... it's all a matter of making the brush strokes finer and finer now, which honestly dizzies me to think about even attempting such a level of detail.
I do hope that you find your work fulfilling... and if you ever care for commentary on any of your pieces, just Note me, including if you want to specify just what kind of observations you would like commented on.
One of the big perks about doing artwork is hearing what people think about your work, a rush that tends to end all too soon, as people give brief observations and wander off typically (though seldom meaning actual malice from it).
Because of this, when I do comment on art, I tend to be rather long winded, as I am being right now.
I appreciate the hard work you do bringing amazing fantasies closer to reality... Thank you. :)
Hm, critique on this one: The head definitely looks too big proportionally to the body. I could see this working if this was an adolescent though, maybe a kid 12-14 years, at that awkward stage.
The fact that his normal human arm seems bigger than the transformed paw seems odd to my eye as well, and I can't really figure out the perspective of the background; the floor feels far longer+higher than it should be, like I should be able to see more wall there.
The fact that his normal human arm seems bigger than the transformed paw seems odd to my eye as well, and I can't really figure out the perspective of the background; the floor feels far longer+higher than it should be, like I should be able to see more wall there.
i know its just my imagination. however, when i first saw this pic. i instantly thought, why is there a thumb plugging up the vial of green? i know (after doing a triple take mind you) that it is a cork but ever since i thought of that, i cant help but see it. O.o
of course as always very great work :)
of course as always very great work :)
This image perfectly encapsulates "that feeling" when you inspect a part of your body and try to imagine your anthro self overlaid on top by merging your real vision with your imagined/mind's eye vision. I like that it could be taken as both a transformation piece and as a "one and the same" piece for otherkin/therians and those who just identify very strongly with their furry identities.
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