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To my memory we haven't seen anything of this world that would imply magic/gods/prophecies or the like actually exists, but I like to think they do. Thus I can't help but imagine some comical outcome to his search. "Well there's your problem! You had the temple feng shui set for Bountiful Sunshine not Rain." *moves a few pieces of furniture around, storm clouds immediately gather*
Just wishful thinking it would be that simple, I wanna see happy snake and perhaps one day chubby half-snake/half-fennec babies!
Just wishful thinking it would be that simple, I wanna see happy snake and perhaps one day chubby half-snake/half-fennec babies!
shen was a slave (now kinda free kinda not thanks to having the keybirth mark), zaphira is princess? (born with the lock birthmark) the only thing she is a slave to is the titular Prophecy (though she was raised purely in regards to fulfilling the prophecy under the belief that key+lock+sex=water coming back to the oasis)
Review Time!
Art: 9/10 Almost perfect!
Story: 9/10 Almost perfect!
Characters: 10/10 Characters seem like they could be in real life!
Pacing: 7/10 A little slow, but it's still good.
Lewdness: 9/10 During sexual pages, the "action" kept me hard all the way through!
Overall: 8/10 It's a great comic! There are some things that could have been done better, but that number could be counted on just one hand! Keep doing great work, and I look forward to future pages.
Art: 9/10 Almost perfect!
Story: 9/10 Almost perfect!
Characters: 10/10 Characters seem like they could be in real life!
Pacing: 7/10 A little slow, but it's still good.
Lewdness: 9/10 During sexual pages, the "action" kept me hard all the way through!
Overall: 8/10 It's a great comic! There are some things that could have been done better, but that number could be counted on just one hand! Keep doing great work, and I look forward to future pages.
Thank you so much, but I think it would make much more sense to add score points if everyone could do it or would have a system to do so :) I really appreciate your contructive critiques! Each of my comics has something that I could do better, and I'm eager to find out my mistakes and make things better in my next works. But unfortunately this is a long process. I only reached this level in years. I wonder what level I will be in a few more years ^^
I like that the kingdom actually did hire people to look for water. It would be funny but perhaps a bit ridiculous that the kingdom pinned all of their hopes on the sex prophecy and didn't bother trying anything else.
And her desperation and despair makes a lot of sense if the prophecy was their last hope
And her desperation and despair makes a lot of sense if the prophecy was their last hope
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