Yeah, to say I'm not a fan of the linework in the Wings of Fire graphic novels would be an understatement. These panels you picked out are not the worst of it though, there's this lack of energy in the art and there's so little variation in character design between dragons of the same species that I actually got confused several times during "The Lost Heir." Your art has actual personality and energy to it and with these designs I can actually tell that these are supposed to be two different characters.