Why on earth would you not be proud of this?!? It's beautiful! I'm a poet myself, but the best I can do still falls short of this!
*Fav*

*chuckles* is probably cause i have writen better...or atleast put more effort, into other writings of mine

That was a wonderful poem, how can you not like it?

It's very touching and vivid, that's for sure.

I'm a poet myself, and I guess I've got a bias towards rhythm and measure. So while I don't like the form of this poem, it's likely because I'm very big into the rules of poetry.

I'd be interested in seeing some of your other stuff, though. Any chance you'll put any of it up?

well, i seem to be getting more feedback on FA then i am on DA, so sure ^.=.^ ill be posting my stuff on here from now on

That's saying something, since poetry goes mostly unnoticed on FA.

Great ^.^ I'm looking forward to it, thanks!