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Serge_Salvatrice of his character, Segatakai. Beauty can sure cause an accident when you don't pay attention on the road. But then again in Sega's case, beauty can be right in front of you... forcing you to stop and just... stare. O_O <3
Segatakai ©
Art © MEEEEeeeEEEEEEE*Gasp*EEEEEeeeeeEEEEEEE~!
Serge_Salvatrice of his character, Segatakai. Beauty can sure cause an accident when you don't pay attention on the road. But then again in Sega's case, beauty can be right in front of you... forcing you to stop and just... stare. O_O <3Segatakai ©

Art © MEEEEeeeEEEEEEE*Gasp*EEEEEeeeeeEEEEEEE~!
Category Wallpaper / Macro / Micro
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1280 x 800px
File Size 712.2 kB
Sue thing man. I'll definitely repost the commsion journal to keep everyone informed. Most likely will happen when:
1: I get back to a country with civilization
2: Repair or buy another tablet
3: Catch up on the last 3 commsions (and I was SO close to finishing one of them in December until my tablet died lol)
1: I get back to a country with civilization
2: Repair or buy another tablet
3: Catch up on the last 3 commsions (and I was SO close to finishing one of them in December until my tablet died lol)
We'll talk later about it then, yes? ^_^ By the time I either get my tablet again and catch up on commisions or when we meet again at MFM, we'll work something out. I'm SO looking forward to attending MFM in 2013 XD It's a loooooong ways from the annual event, but it's something I surely won't miss XD
I was pretty sure you had your own place but a whole city? aren't you a modern man eh? ^^
I like the idea here, though it's been done quite a number of times with macros, oh them big ladies what will they NOT do to show off themselves? Well I suppose when your X meters high you could do that stuff so yeah....what was I getting at again? OH! I like the idea, simplistic but it's not often you see macros this "small" usually they are skyscraper or mountain sized, if not even the size of the universe (seems rather silly if you as me but whatever works for them I suppose). That said there's a few things that troubles me a bit and a lot of other stuff that really works in this one.
The one thing I'll mention first is the thing troubling me the most in this picture, and that is the eyes. I really do not like how they are in this picture, I sat down analyzing them for 5 minutes trying to think up what it was but in the end I think I only came to the conclusion that they look wierd, artificial. If you've seen those freaky robots Japan has been working on in an attempt to make cybernetic humans you'll know what I'm talking of. this is not as much a critique to you the artist but the creator itself, I don't know what it is about her eye/nose/mouth combination but it seems very....odd looking. To me in any case.
Bleh now that that is out of the way I'll say that you again show your talent with lighting (especially consistent lighting) and thus your amazing 3D perception. Also real nice work on the shadows, to me they feel just right to complement your style and couldn't have been made much better. I sure don't know how it could've that's for sure. my only complaint in that regard is the bright light on her shoulder that's away from the VP. The shoulder is shielded by hair yes? there shouldn't be a highlight as bright there in that case, perhaps you got a bit carried away when you made the highlights ^_^
but with that amount of detail you put in it is a bit off putting when I spy other parts of the image that aren't as detailed as other. Consistency with detail is rather important if you ask me. if you were to compare the car door, the trees and the bikini strap to the lamp and her one visible horn you'd notice the lack of details in the latter. Now, details appears much more in highlights then in shadows however these parts are in the same lighting conditions as the other parts. I'd suggest that the lamp was given a bit more of the lighting job you do so well, remembering that the light is from an angle and not straight up so there should be a dash of really bright light from the sun on there I feel. the horn I'll mention later.
I suppose I already mentioned this previously but I am a fan of the trees and that little cloud you put in the background, as well as the amount of care and effort you put into the foreground with the 2 stunned furries there. I know I would've done the same and I feel you did a real nice job in letting the left one's body language speak for his surprise rather then an expression, it seems a bit odd he'd pull his legs apart that much but eh getting it all fully nailed down is real hard so I don't hold it against you ^^
now I don't think I've ever had to or that I'm going to have to do this in the future since you're very adept at this subject but in this one I feel like I need to bring up a bit of what I see as anatomical flaws. My most pressing concern is the horn. I'm not sure how the characters horn is supposed to be, looking at the pictures the creator has in his gallery didn't help me personally an awful lot either. I' guessing they are supposed to be like a weak S tilted 90 degrees anti-clockwise (characters head facing right) and angled slightly inwards, that's pretty much it. With that in mind I feel like the horn needs to probably be remade entirely, this because the angle with which it's presented is off. It should be pointing more "backwards" and not so much in profile like it appears to me here. Also I do believe that the other horn should be visible as well, if only for a bit of a point poking out behind the other horn. The length of leg closer to VP is also a bit off, seems to me like it'd be a bit too long but I feel as though I've said enough on the subject.
good use on the lineweights as in the venus one, but I feel you could've used it much more. right now I only spot it on the legs when it'd have been better if you kept doing it all the way through, again being consistent with the details. ^^ on a bit of a side note I'm curious how she can be "riding" on the highway anyways? She must be leaning on the back of a car transport truck or somehing :P
And I think that'd be about it. Hope it helps you out in any way possible!
PS: no need to shout on my channel, I'll get around to CC eventually when I have the time and effort. I'm rather loyal to those who respond back to me when I critique so you don't need to think I'm going to forget or anything ^^
I like the idea here, though it's been done quite a number of times with macros, oh them big ladies what will they NOT do to show off themselves? Well I suppose when your X meters high you could do that stuff so yeah....what was I getting at again? OH! I like the idea, simplistic but it's not often you see macros this "small" usually they are skyscraper or mountain sized, if not even the size of the universe (seems rather silly if you as me but whatever works for them I suppose). That said there's a few things that troubles me a bit and a lot of other stuff that really works in this one.
The one thing I'll mention first is the thing troubling me the most in this picture, and that is the eyes. I really do not like how they are in this picture, I sat down analyzing them for 5 minutes trying to think up what it was but in the end I think I only came to the conclusion that they look wierd, artificial. If you've seen those freaky robots Japan has been working on in an attempt to make cybernetic humans you'll know what I'm talking of. this is not as much a critique to you the artist but the creator itself, I don't know what it is about her eye/nose/mouth combination but it seems very....odd looking. To me in any case.
Bleh now that that is out of the way I'll say that you again show your talent with lighting (especially consistent lighting) and thus your amazing 3D perception. Also real nice work on the shadows, to me they feel just right to complement your style and couldn't have been made much better. I sure don't know how it could've that's for sure. my only complaint in that regard is the bright light on her shoulder that's away from the VP. The shoulder is shielded by hair yes? there shouldn't be a highlight as bright there in that case, perhaps you got a bit carried away when you made the highlights ^_^
but with that amount of detail you put in it is a bit off putting when I spy other parts of the image that aren't as detailed as other. Consistency with detail is rather important if you ask me. if you were to compare the car door, the trees and the bikini strap to the lamp and her one visible horn you'd notice the lack of details in the latter. Now, details appears much more in highlights then in shadows however these parts are in the same lighting conditions as the other parts. I'd suggest that the lamp was given a bit more of the lighting job you do so well, remembering that the light is from an angle and not straight up so there should be a dash of really bright light from the sun on there I feel. the horn I'll mention later.
I suppose I already mentioned this previously but I am a fan of the trees and that little cloud you put in the background, as well as the amount of care and effort you put into the foreground with the 2 stunned furries there. I know I would've done the same and I feel you did a real nice job in letting the left one's body language speak for his surprise rather then an expression, it seems a bit odd he'd pull his legs apart that much but eh getting it all fully nailed down is real hard so I don't hold it against you ^^
now I don't think I've ever had to or that I'm going to have to do this in the future since you're very adept at this subject but in this one I feel like I need to bring up a bit of what I see as anatomical flaws. My most pressing concern is the horn. I'm not sure how the characters horn is supposed to be, looking at the pictures the creator has in his gallery didn't help me personally an awful lot either. I' guessing they are supposed to be like a weak S tilted 90 degrees anti-clockwise (characters head facing right) and angled slightly inwards, that's pretty much it. With that in mind I feel like the horn needs to probably be remade entirely, this because the angle with which it's presented is off. It should be pointing more "backwards" and not so much in profile like it appears to me here. Also I do believe that the other horn should be visible as well, if only for a bit of a point poking out behind the other horn. The length of leg closer to VP is also a bit off, seems to me like it'd be a bit too long but I feel as though I've said enough on the subject.
good use on the lineweights as in the venus one, but I feel you could've used it much more. right now I only spot it on the legs when it'd have been better if you kept doing it all the way through, again being consistent with the details. ^^ on a bit of a side note I'm curious how she can be "riding" on the highway anyways? She must be leaning on the back of a car transport truck or somehing :P
And I think that'd be about it. Hope it helps you out in any way possible!
PS: no need to shout on my channel, I'll get around to CC eventually when I have the time and effort. I'm rather loyal to those who respond back to me when I critique so you don't need to think I'm going to forget or anything ^^
I agree with ya on macros being the size of the universe. Granted that everything is ficticious, the simple fact that any macro bigger than the sun can touch the Earth or even STAND on it is beyond unrealistic and ridiculous in my opinion. LoL So many disaterous things should happen and the population of the world should cease to exist in an instant like a meteor striking the surface. I can go on forever why I'm not so enthuesed about over done macros or better yet, muscled characters that can move a planet with a pinky or their toungue. But moving on... XD
I see what you're talking about as far as the lighting on the lamp shade, Sega's horn, etc, etc. What is stupid of me is that I SAW these mistakes and somehow, I forgot to correct them. The highlights on Sega's shoulder however, was of ignorance until you pointed that error out.
LoL I've noticed that I have maybe over exaggerated the guy on the right with his legs spread too far apart. Must have been one of those old Godzilla movie moments when the japanese residents look in awe at the monster and yell, "GODZILLA!" Inspired by that? Yeah, true confession LoL.
And thanks a bunch on pointing out on Sega's horns and line thickness too. Once I get my tablet, I intend to fix this picture and replace this file. Can't let a customer get something that is rather substandard in my books. Especially if it can be fixed easily.
And now I know you'll respond to my recent posts, I'll omit the thought of sending a shout. You know how some people have like a lot of people on their watchlist and they never seem to get to everyone? Well... I thought you might not catch my recent post yknow? But thanks again for your time and detailed critique man! They're always helpful when in detail like the way you do it ^_^ Cheers!
I see what you're talking about as far as the lighting on the lamp shade, Sega's horn, etc, etc. What is stupid of me is that I SAW these mistakes and somehow, I forgot to correct them. The highlights on Sega's shoulder however, was of ignorance until you pointed that error out.
LoL I've noticed that I have maybe over exaggerated the guy on the right with his legs spread too far apart. Must have been one of those old Godzilla movie moments when the japanese residents look in awe at the monster and yell, "GODZILLA!" Inspired by that? Yeah, true confession LoL.
And thanks a bunch on pointing out on Sega's horns and line thickness too. Once I get my tablet, I intend to fix this picture and replace this file. Can't let a customer get something that is rather substandard in my books. Especially if it can be fixed easily.
And now I know you'll respond to my recent posts, I'll omit the thought of sending a shout. You know how some people have like a lot of people on their watchlist and they never seem to get to everyone? Well... I thought you might not catch my recent post yknow? But thanks again for your time and detailed critique man! They're always helpful when in detail like the way you do it ^_^ Cheers!
Eh a lot of things are imaginative, fetishes are the spice of the sex life....hey wait that rimed! Oh I am on so on a roll today xD
Well despite it being unrealistic it hasn' stopped people before so eh let 'em just have it. I've got my fair share of shameless eye candy from them, I'm a guy what can I say? ^_^;;
I've never heard of such muscle characters before, but it seems odd to say the least. I mean it's not like lifting weights if you're in a friction free environment you'd nee some sort of leverage.....but eh who am I trying to make sense of fantasy?:P
it looks like he's stopped in the middle of a puddle and tries to stand over it lols. but that's what I'd do to try and make sense of it all ^^
lols I watch twice as many people as you do but I don't talk to a single percent of them....well ok I do if I didn't it'd be maybe 1.5 people I ever spoke to lols. But yeah don't worry people I do follow closely I do notice these sorts of things with so you don't need to trouble your little head with that....not saying your head is small I am sure it's grand and....big and...I'll just keep quiet now ok? xD;;
as long as it helps out and I get a bit of human interaction lols, (J/K I'm not that desperate ^^)
Well despite it being unrealistic it hasn' stopped people before so eh let 'em just have it. I've got my fair share of shameless eye candy from them, I'm a guy what can I say? ^_^;;
I've never heard of such muscle characters before, but it seems odd to say the least. I mean it's not like lifting weights if you're in a friction free environment you'd nee some sort of leverage.....but eh who am I trying to make sense of fantasy?:P
it looks like he's stopped in the middle of a puddle and tries to stand over it lols. but that's what I'd do to try and make sense of it all ^^
lols I watch twice as many people as you do but I don't talk to a single percent of them....well ok I do if I didn't it'd be maybe 1.5 people I ever spoke to lols. But yeah don't worry people I do follow closely I do notice these sorts of things with so you don't need to trouble your little head with that....not saying your head is small I am sure it's grand and....big and...I'll just keep quiet now ok? xD;;
as long as it helps out and I get a bit of human interaction lols, (J/K I'm not that desperate ^^)
Oh snap! At least it sounds better than today's so-called Rap music. You'll go double plastic with that line right there man! Hell yeah!
Well, when people make a story about their character being strong and what not (as I described), it's like their character has no weakness, invunerable, and no limit. All I think is, "Well damn... might as well take over the world then!" So it doesn't really appeal to me hearing of a character that has no limit or the only way they can be defeated is by some magical... I dunno- magic marker for example. That's a bit too common to me. And then the hyper muscle art isn't my type of thing neither. I know a handful of muscle-fur (or muscle lovers in general) would disagree with me on it, but I always think that having muscle on top of muscle, on top of muscle looks out of proportion and unrealistic. But like we both said, it's fantasy. There's no limit on what the imagination can create. That's just my lil' worthless 2 cent opinion about bicep muscles having bicep muscles XD
*paws your head like Paw Kitty*
Well, when people make a story about their character being strong and what not (as I described), it's like their character has no weakness, invunerable, and no limit. All I think is, "Well damn... might as well take over the world then!" So it doesn't really appeal to me hearing of a character that has no limit or the only way they can be defeated is by some magical... I dunno- magic marker for example. That's a bit too common to me. And then the hyper muscle art isn't my type of thing neither. I know a handful of muscle-fur (or muscle lovers in general) would disagree with me on it, but I always think that having muscle on top of muscle, on top of muscle looks out of proportion and unrealistic. But like we both said, it's fantasy. There's no limit on what the imagination can create. That's just my lil' worthless 2 cent opinion about bicep muscles having bicep muscles XD
*paws your head like Paw Kitty*
yah never cared for much of that myself, I like 2 of Eminem's songs but that's about it- "Hummingbird" and "Loose yourself". mostly I think because he isn't portraying himself as some "Gasta rappah fro da hood ya'all, lemme git some bling-bling in da house we Ain' goan' rock dis' club till they ain't goan' have no cealin' no moar!" Because it upsets me a bit that people like that get popular, *shrugs* oh well what'cha gonna do?
I will admit that my personal level of what is "too big" is quite out there in the hyper genre, that said I still enjoy realism as well. If i gives you any hints as to how far it is I still prefer my characters being able to move, however a bit restricted ^^ I can show ya a picture from Ryoko which illustrates that level quite well for me personally. Bigger then athat and it's too much, even for me ^^;
You may have read some of the wanna be authors stories in that case, newvies tends to exaggerate their story telling by quite some in an effort to compensate for their lack of proper sentencing. they haven't gotten to that point where you realize what is too much pretty much...unless it's a power fetish. In which case he could ignore this rant ^^
*messes up your head floof* silly. hey that little thing you made there made me wonder, do you have a fursona or the likes of it? I remember you told me you don't consider yourself a furry so I started wondering.
I will admit that my personal level of what is "too big" is quite out there in the hyper genre, that said I still enjoy realism as well. If i gives you any hints as to how far it is I still prefer my characters being able to move, however a bit restricted ^^ I can show ya a picture from Ryoko which illustrates that level quite well for me personally. Bigger then athat and it's too much, even for me ^^;
You may have read some of the wanna be authors stories in that case, newvies tends to exaggerate their story telling by quite some in an effort to compensate for their lack of proper sentencing. they haven't gotten to that point where you realize what is too much pretty much...unless it's a power fetish. In which case he could ignore this rant ^^
*messes up your head floof* silly. hey that little thing you made there made me wonder, do you have a fursona or the likes of it? I remember you told me you don't consider yourself a furry so I started wondering.
Oh you talking about that firey wolf character? Naw, he's more or less like a icon. Not only that, I hardly ever draw Nisemni much and if I do, it's either something goofy (mauling santa) or something decent (Die Sunde In Mir). Some people think that either Cheeyana or Jamie was my fursona as well. Online, which I can understand since a majority of the users who say they're females are actually males hiding behind their female avatars. In person, one asked me if Jamie was my fursona. I couldn't help but laugh, but replied politely no. But like I said, I don't have a fursona.
You take your time, remember though that even though someone can have many different "forms" there's usually one that is the most common, I suppose the "original" you could say. So just because you have a fursona doesn't mean that you cannot draw it in different species or forms or a whatnot. ^^
Dude, this is as awesome as anything I've seen from you. Great depth of field work, it's something I've been trying to work in since 2005.
She makes me think of how some of my dinosaur characters would look to regular people. HUUUUUUUGE!!!
By the way, that tree off to the right.... god I wish I could get mine to look like that.
She makes me think of how some of my dinosaur characters would look to regular people. HUUUUUUUGE!!!
By the way, that tree off to the right.... god I wish I could get mine to look like that.
Thanks, bro. I'm working on a tutorial on how I draw trees actually. I think that it might be of some good use to ya. As soon as I get my tablet done, I'll submit it on either here or on DA. Better yet, I'll E-mail it to ya when it's done so you can get first look at it. ^_^
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