Next part finally up....only a few more parts left to go for this section. Let me know what you think. Thanks and enjoy.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 11.8 kB
I guess i am repeating myself, but again i feel compelled to say "well done" for it is exactly that. Overall another very good example of how a well told story can create a whole world and bring to life what we conjure up in our minds. all i found here were some minor typos - nothing else.
You've grown good over the course of the last few chapters of your story. Keep it up.
You've grown good over the course of the last few chapters of your story. Keep it up.
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