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Signed-off-by: Ranjini M N <[email protected]>

Author: ranjinimn

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-SUSE Telco Cloud (formerly known as SUSE Edge for Telco) is a telecom-optimized computing platform that enables telecom operators and teelcom network vendors to innovate and accelerate the modernization of their networks.
+SUSE Telco Cloud (formerly known as SUSE Edge for Telco) is a telecom-optimized computing platform that enables telecom operators and telecom network vendors to innovate and accelerate the modernization of their networks.
 
-SUSE Telco Cloud is a complete Telco cloud stack for hosting CNFs, including 5G Packet Core, Cloud RAN, OSS and BSS.
+SUSE Telco Cloud is a complete Telco-enabled cloud native stack for hosting CNFs, covering all telecom domains: Packet Core, RAN, OSS and BSS.
 
 - Automates zero-touch rollout and lifecycle management of complex edge stack configurations at Telco scale.
 - Continuously assures quality on Telco-grade hardware, using Telco-specific configurations and workloads.