From 5c2c59ba0b5f723b067a6fa8bf8452d41fbb2125 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bruce Momjian Date: Wed, 24 May 2023 12:18:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] doc: PG 16 relnotes, wording adjustments Reported-by: Erik Rijkers Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/c4a88acf-ab1a-a912-d4a9-5e19b323c5ed@xs4all.nl --- doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml index bb92fe5cf9..88d6514ad7 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-16.sgml @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ - Allow logical replication from standbys servers + Allow logical replication from standby servers @@ -126,11 +126,11 @@ Author: Michael Paquier -Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexedb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs) +Change REINDEX DATABASE and reindexdb to not process indexes on system catalogs (Simon Riggs) -Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexedb --system. +Processing such indexes is still possible using REINDEX SYSTEM and reindexdb --system. @@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ Create subscription statistics entries at subscription creation time so stats_re -Previously entries were created only created when the first statistics were reported. +Previously entries were created only when the first statistics were reported. @@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ Simplify permissions for LOCK TABLE (Jeff Davis) -Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions. For example, UPDATE could could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which +Previously the ability to perform LOCK TABLE at various lock levels was bound to specific query-type permissions. For example, UPDATE could perform all lock levels except ACCESS SHARE, which required SELECT permissions. Now UPDATE can issue all lock levels. MORE? @@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ Restrict the privileges of CREATEROLE roles (Robert Haas) -Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role. Such changes, including adding members, are now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION +Previously roles with CREATEROLE privileges could change many aspects of any non-superuser role. Such changes, including adding members, now require the role requesting the change to have ADMIN OPTION permission. @@ -946,7 +946,7 @@ Add dependency tracking of grantors for GRANT records (Robert Haas) -This will guarantee that pg_auth_members.grantor values is always valid. +This guarantees that pg_auth_members.grantor values are always valid. @@ -3017,7 +3017,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane -Allow required extensions to marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe) +Allow required extensions to be marked as non-relocatable using "no_relocate" (Regina Obe) -- 2.30.2