Review feedback + more wordsmithing

Author: hollasch

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 True Lambertian Reflection
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-Using a diffuse model that scatters vectors evenly about the hemisphere produces a nice and soft
-diffuse model, but we can definitely do better. A more accurate representation of real diffuse
-objects is the _Lambertian_ distribution, which scatters reflected rays in a manner that is
-propertional to $\cos (\phi)$, where $\phi$ is the angle between the reflected ray and the surface
-normal. This means that a ray is most likely to scatter in directions close to the normal, and less
-likely to scatter in directions more tangent to the surface. This distribution is notably no longer
-uniform, but the _Lambertian_ distribution does a better job of modeling objects in the real world
-than our previous uniform scattering. We can create this distribution by adding a random unit vector
-to the normal vector.
-
+Scattering reflected rays evenly about the hemisphere produces a nice soft diffuse model, but we can
+  definitely do better.
+A more accurate representation of real diffuse objects is the _Lambertian_ distribution.
+This distribution scatters reflected rays in a manner that is proportional to $\cos (\phi)$, where
+  $\phi$ is the angle between the reflected ray and the surface normal.
+This means that a reflected ray is most likely to scatter in a direction near the surface normal,
+  and less likely to scatter in directions away from the normal.
+This non-uniform Lambertian distribution does a better job of modeling material reflection in the
+  real world than our previous uniform scattering.
+
+We can create this distribution by adding a random unit vector to the normal vector.
 At the point of intersection on a surface there is the hit point, $\mathbf{p}$, and there is the
 normal of the surface, $\mathbf{n}$. At the point of intersection, this surface has exactly two
 sides, so there can only be two unique unit spheres tangent to any intersection point (one