For being such short novels, I find the scope much too large and the details become a chore and a bore.
This is the first book of the series I've decided no to finish, which is weird because everyone else says they just get better and better.
I found this one had some cliches I couldn't get over, and a utilitarian style which lacked style and artistry. The four plots were too damn much (the coastal stuck ship, the ocean boat shoot out, the Beaver island plan and evac zone, and the U.K. HQ). There was only one plot I was invested in, way too many characters, and just mediocre writing overall.
I forgave a lot in book two and three, giving them higher stars than they should have had due to hypnotizing plot twists, but you need to grow as an author and not do the same damned thing for book after book or you risk losing your readership.
James and Fuchs -- you really can't add some mid-point plot twist or freshen the voice or something? Do you have to rehas the same character fears over and over? Describe the zombies with the same twenty adjectives and metaphors over and over and over and over??
.... and over?
The plot was really incredible for the last half of book one, all of book two, and the first 3/4s of book three. I'm finding my interest the series completely waning at a time were big things should be coming into focus. I think "Maximum Violence" is way too fattened up, and it's taking way too long, with every little action described and every character's thought chronicled.
Let's get this fucking doctor to a base already.
Too many characters... so much action... it all drags. It's not balanced. I read half or it and I'm not hooked. I'm not finishing it.
I only cared about the "Henno, Ali, Predator" group; the group the reader has the most invested in since book one. Yet here, we are made to spend a huge section of the second act at other locations that felt unwelcome. Had I written these books, they would have been the fuck outta there by the beginning of this book. Let's get to the next plot point. Let's head back to the U.K.
How are there six books?
I started skipping around to various chapters that included specific story lines only until, at 57% completion, I gave up.
2.75/5
MH