Sure, I liked this book. It was epic. The trip to get the scientist to the carrier, and the huge battle with the carrier. But there were some questions that it brought up for me. I think that Drake lost a lot of men and ammo he didn't have to. Let's back up to the mutiny and review.
I'll reveal all kinds of spoilers here, because I want to review the decisions that Drake did or didn't make. Don't read any more if you don't want the plot details.
Homer sensed something was off with the Chaplains and the ammo. He told Drake. Drake didn't give it any priority, and didn't check into it. Acting on Homer's tip might have prevented the mutiny.
Meanwhile it became clear that there was only a single support vessel, and it was suddenly too important as a backup ride home for Park to be used to help out the JFK.
The mutiny cost them the entire crew for the nuclear reactors. Captain Martin managed to shut them down before they melted down. But neither he nor anyone else on the ship knew how to start them back up.
The JFK ran aground near Virginia Beach. Apparently it did so in a method that really stuck it. They had no engines to back it off, even at high tide. No tugs to pull it off the rocks.
The mutiny apparently put the ship out of touch with Centcom too. And when they did reach them, there were no nuclear engineers to be had.
And lastly the mutiny resulted in a magazine blowing up that left a hole in the hull.
They tried to fix the hole, but they unbalanced the crane and that turned into a big mess. I figured that was not gonna happen, that they would know the weights and set the crane or cranes to handle the job. This isn't a bunch of beginners. This is the US Navy, and they do their homework.
I also wondered, with marinas and Naval Air Stations and the like around, whether they could mount a mission to find a few tugs that they could use to pull on the ship at high tide.
As these repair and refloating questions were being addressed, a giant herd of ten million zombies started marching toward them. And some of the air defenses observed that they reacted to bombing, slowing down and walking backward to the center of the bomb site.
Drake let Captain Martin ruin one of their two nuclear reactors trying to start it up.
And they attached some anchor cables to their destroyer so they would use it as a tug to pull them off at high tide, if they got a bit of extra float from a whole lot of zombies - so many that the sea level would rise.
Before the battle, the mysterious Captain of the JFK went below decks, formed a militia, pumped out the ballast to make the ship lighter, and got his irregulars ready to contribute to the big fight.
During the battle, two things happened. First, a nuke was fired at the zombies, revealing that they had a nuclear sub around. Second, the Captain and his irregulars used the runway foam to repel the zombies on the flight deck, and then used the catapults to throw fork lifts at them. That was creative, inventive, surprising. It really contrasted in my mind with the approach that Drake was taking.
And once the destroyer captain knew that there was a sub, he knew that they had a backup ride home. So he pulled on the anchor chains at max speed, and pulled the JFK away from the zombies.
We have the impression that it's been a week or ten days since the ship went aground. Now they're off and safe.
Okay, that much we know. In the beginning of the next book we find that the destroyer was sunk by damage from the towing. But we also learned late in the battle that there were nuclear engineers on the submarine, and they had no problem getting the reactor going. And THAT was when I called a foul.
Things that didn't make sense started to pop into my head. Like:
I think that there's no way that a Navy Commander would let Martin mess with the reactor when he had nuke sub engineers in his pocket.
He could have gotten those engineers over there the day after they went aground and gotten the power back up.
Knowing that there was a sub, the aegis cruiser (have I been calling it a destroyer?) could have been staged elsewhere, could have tried to push, etc. I mean, with them pulling AND the engines working, they might have been able to refloat the JFK.
Also, I have to ask why they didn't send a cruise missile into the middle of that scenery on the first day. Why wait until after their losses are so high?
I know, we needed that battle scene. It was a big deal, but it bothered me, okay? In literary terms, the battle of the JFK was necessary. In military terms, it was not.
While I'm complaining, I'd like to complain that the landing site for Chuck was home to thousands of Canadian government fugitives. I'd like to complain that Chuck was shot down by having a near mid-air collision followed by rolling into friendly fire.
My guess is that all of these "if-only's" are the author's message that things get Murphied. But the mutiny could have been avoided, the engines could have been restored earlier, the JFK could have been refloated in time, and the Chuck could have been brought back safely. Instead, we get the dramatic epic battle that should not have been.
Maybe all of the real battles are like that too.
Like I say, I liked the book. But I also think that there were parts of the plot that felt more contrived than necessary, and that Drake would have approached differently.
Now I'm off to read Book Six!