I must say, I've played quite a number of these games and this is by far one of the very best. Yes there are a few bugs and grammar but still. The cohesive story line the artwork, the overall story itself is just good. Thank you so much for this work of art.
I just started playing this and I didn't like the MC's initial comments. He said his mother wants him to get a job but the MC thinks money won't help but that he needs to change. Well a job is about more than money. It will help him change. It could be the instrument of the change he wants. He's just being ignorant so that means the writer of the dialog is obtuse. Also, why does almost everything the MC says have profanity in it. That is not how normal people talk, at least not the ones I know. Why do you have to include this crap. It ruins the game.
The grammar needs work. Don't confuse when to use "I" and "ME". Don't say "Elsa here found Allen and I" you should say "Elsa here found Allen and me." The plural of I is We, the plural of me is us. You would never say "Elsa here found we" it should be "Elsa here found us." They are all pronouns but I and we are subject pronouns, Us and me are object pronouns. Know when to use each.
Why is the elbow up in the air? I've seen this position in many of these games and wonder why since this is not a natural position. I have never seen anyone do this and it looks pretty retarded. This position makes the MC look weak and stupid.
I finally got around it. It would do it everytime I presented, so I restored to an earlier point and avoided presenting and just pressed for an entire questioning and that seemed to straighten it out. Thanks for responding so quickly.
The game looks interesting, I just started playing. But how do I turn on auto-forward? I'm having to constantly click. The auto-forward button is grayed out and so its not clickable.
you're a moron. who gives a flying fuck. if you like the game, play it. if you don.t, then don't but shut the fuck up you idiot. if you want reality then watch a documentary, or soap operas, geeze.
I seem to be stuck and have tried everything I can think of to resolve this. I have 3 tasks in my smartphone notes, 1. go to swimming pool locker in the morning, 2. Go to abandoned brothel at night, 3. Fix Julia's car in the parking lot of the garage.
1. I have gone many times in the morning to all areas of the locker room and nothing ever happens. How can I get this to proceed?
2. When I go to the abandoned brothel at night, it tells me to "go to school on my smartphone notes first. What does that mean. The notes only say to go to the abandoned brothel at night. What more is there to "go to school on"? I go at night as it says. I have also tried during other times I'm able to enter but its just an old empty building. I have the baton that I got from the police station but it doesn't show up in my inventory. Why does it say "go to school on my smartphone notes." What am I missing?
3. I left the house one day and Julia's car was in the driveway and the MC automatically fixed it without me choosing to do anything. THEN the task showed up in my notes to fix Julia's care in the driveway of the garage. But its never there. When I click on the garage it says its in development. However I already fixed the car so why is this task still showing up.
These are the only tasks I have and I can't proceed on anything because I can't satisfy any of them. Is this a bug in the program or am I missing something. I have spent a lot of time trying every possible scenario but still can't proceed.
can anyone help. the hints say work on talisman preferably in the morning when your mind is clear. How do I work on the talisman? This message never goes away even though I have gone to the lab and made talismans.
Looks like an interesting game and the women seem pretty. Too bad there's no version with small breasts. I do not like large breasts and definitely not gigantic breasts. Too bad for me I guess.
sure thing. I understand and glad I could help. I've been a lifelong High School English teacher and I know how difficult it can be. By the way, I love the game. It's one of the best I've ever seen. It's so well developed and the images are beautiful. Thank you for all your effort on this. It really shows.
You use "you and I" incorrectly in most cases. It's only "you and I" when the subject of the sentence, otherwise it's "you and me" or "me and you". When its used incorrectly it sounds ridiculous, like an ignorant person trying to sound sophisticated. Example, You and I are friends - Subject of sentence. Can be rewritten as "We are friends." Mom is taking you and me to the movies - Object of sentence. Can be rewritten as, Mom is taking us to the movies. Would you say "Mom is taking we to the movies"? Of course not, how ridiculous, same with saying it as "You and I" when it's the object and not the subject.
Completely understandable and please know that I'm not complaining, I just wanted to bring it to your attention. I really enjoy this story and looking forward to the next chapter.
I love this game. I has a nice story line. I'm not being critical but if you want to improve the dialog and story logic, there are many places where this can be done. First of all, the word "got" is so overused and used improperly. Its actually the past tense of get. Often times the word have or has is the correct word not got. Hazelnut says she will make an exception and give him a hand. Really, an exception? Who else has she been jacking off? To have an exception there must be the standard rule but he's the only man so there is no established standard. Alright is not a proper word. Its better to use all right or okay depending on the context. Also, even though the sentence had proper grammar, an english speaker would never speak that way, for example. I would never say, "I'm going to go give her comfort," an English speaker would say, "I'm going to comfort her." It's better to use the verb comfort than the noun form. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Great story and game. I appreciate it. One point though, there are grammar issues, particularly with using I versus me. Use I when its the subject, use me when its the object. For example, your text says "leaving Morgan and I alone." It should say, "leaving Morgan and me alone."
so everyone that works on a schedule do half-assed work is that it? I guess some are better than others at being creative AND working to a schedule. so sorry for you.
