I really like this game, its nicely written and done, but theres one thing that bothers me
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When we discover who we are, and who Oyun is to us, I got this feeling that its too straightforward? I think I'd like that moment better if we had something like "oh, you feel something in your pocket" and theres our (maybe some sort of badge? Something to tell that we are who we are) and beside it theres our phone or something where we read information about the case. Or no phone, just a reminder that we got from viewing our, lets say, badge. But maybe its something that only bugs me, I know it could be hard to do something like this too. I dunno
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After all Oyun felt like they were a real person (and that means you did a great job creating them), I really like this game and will definitely recommend this to my friends!
Thank you for the feedback, that's actually really great advice! Actually, [SPOILERS] the ending was supposed to go a different route but due to the time limit I went with the ending I did to wrap it up quickly, so it makes sense that the reveal is a bit jarring. Your suggestions are really good though!! If I ever rework this further I'll try to implement more hints towards that for sure, and also keep this in mind for future games I make.
Thanks for the comment and feedback, it's really helpful!
I am so glad I came to play this before watching the BTS video, I really wasn't expecting a time loop even though its totally in the title. This was so crazy to play, I really felt like I was pulled into the story and experiencing it, the attachment to the characters came really quick, the pacing was perfect and it had just the right amount of unease and intrigue, that combined with the art/color direction really made for such a captivating playthrough! I feel like there's an endless amount of endings, hidden away just out of reach. Wahhhhh, too good!
this is so cool!! love the replayability and the different dialogue options and paths you can take. i have like 12 saves because i wanted to go back to certain moments. so cool!
The story is incredible, really I love it. But I'v been repeating the story again to be sure to have every ending, to end up being drown 4 times already, how cruel T^T
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I really like this game, its nicely written and done, but theres one thing that bothers me
[SPOILER]
When we discover who we are, and who Oyun is to us, I got this feeling that its too straightforward? I think I'd like that moment better if we had something like "oh, you feel something in your pocket" and theres our (maybe some sort of badge? Something to tell that we are who we are) and beside it theres our phone or something where we read information about the case. Or no phone, just a reminder that we got from viewing our, lets say, badge. But maybe its something that only bugs me, I know it could be hard to do something like this too. I dunno
[SPOILER END]
After all Oyun felt like they were a real person (and that means you did a great job creating them), I really like this game and will definitely recommend this to my friends!
Thank you for the feedback, that's actually really great advice! Actually, [SPOILERS] the ending was supposed to go a different route but due to the time limit I went with the ending I did to wrap it up quickly, so it makes sense that the reveal is a bit jarring. Your suggestions are really good though!! If I ever rework this further I'll try to implement more hints towards that for sure, and also keep this in mind for future games I make.
Thanks for the comment and feedback, it's really helpful!
I came across your video on youtube and had to check it out considering I wanted to get into making visual narratives myself. Nicely done!
really fun and beautiful game! I wonder if I have unlocked the secret endingor not :D I hope you keep making games <3
So cool!! and gorgeous art btw
(spoilers) Absolutely gorgeous visuals and a compelling storyline. I wish we could save them/free their soul so bad I just want them to be happy......
I am so glad I came to play this before watching the BTS video, I really wasn't expecting a time loop even though its totally in the title. This was so crazy to play, I really felt like I was pulled into the story and experiencing it, the attachment to the characters came really quick, the pacing was perfect and it had just the right amount of unease and intrigue, that combined with the art/color direction really made for such a captivating playthrough! I feel like there's an endless amount of endings, hidden away just out of reach. Wahhhhh, too good!
this is so cool!! love the replayability and the different dialogue options and paths you can take. i have like 12 saves because i wanted to go back to certain moments. so cool!
Is your profile picture Tsukishima?
haha yes, i just took a tsukishima photo and redrew it on ibis paint x
Hehe, great to see a fan in the wild!
the game and the story are so cool !!
for being so short its so well done TvT.. i already miss you, Oyun 😭
The story is incredible, really I love it. But I'v been repeating the story again to be sure to have every ending, to end up being drown 4 times already, how cruel T^T
beautiful game! loved the story. now can watch your vid spoiler free
same!!
i love the concept of getting more choices the more times you play! new game+++++
Thank you so much!! :D