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Hey, does anyone wanna check out my hot steamy porn story??? story here

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I'd love to, Sini. Here, give me some feedback on my poem about pineapples. poetry here

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Will do.

...That's one way to kick it off.

But hey, I got a piece that could use a fresh pair of eyes to help point out plot holes, or other errors. As you all probably know, it may be clear in your head, but the translation may be a little wonky.
Link -> https://www.furaffinity.net/view/17792626/

Fair point, this story contains mild gore and language and falls under the Transformation genre (dragon). [Mature rating]

The -only- reason I'm not replying to Zenobox above is I have one small suggestion to make: beyond just giving a link, perhaps have folks include content rating and themes? Saying it's a porn story is good, but there's a lot under the banner of porn, or violence. Would keep people from feeling like they've wasted their time with something that wasn't interesting to them. (And maybe have the first person in the comment chain say if there's anything they absolutely have no interest in?)

For example (and because I would love feedback on this new version, so also consider this for my comment chain):

Here's a link to my in-progress novel that I would like some feedback on: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18256599/
This work has a Mature rating for coarse language and descriptions of violence, and the world has an economy based on slavery.

I am currently not interested in reading stories that are only porn, or porn with very little plot.

I think I was originally going to include a note about ratings and descriptions but forgot about that. You're totally right. We have the "WHAT" of the work, but we don't have the "WHY" of the work. Really great point. Damn.

Journal #1 stands as it is; the Feed4Feed system can receive feedback like anything else. I just wasn't all too thorough this time around.

I'll take some of your suggestions into the Feed4Feed Journal for next week (abouts next Saturday!)

Thank you!

No problem! :3 I try to help where I can, especially to help writers on FA. I know how it is to write something, then forget about it. rofl (This is why there are 3 notes on my "need beta readers" doc.)

I may be able to do a little feed4feed with you if you wish. I chose to respond to your submission because of the slavery economy theme. My story is that of a slave. However, before you agree make note that my story is very long and very adult. It contains very explicit sexual scenes as well as brutal violence. It does possess a story line that should envoke emotional response besides the explicit material. Please let me know if you are interested. The link to the first chapter of my story is http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17917524/

I think that would be okay. :) Explicit isn't necessarily bad, but the "plot? what plot" get's a bit old. (I got bunt out a few years ago in fanfic.) I'll pop this open in a tab and read once I've slept a bit. :3

How much detail do you want me to go into for your material? Would you like edits and grammer notes?

Not at this point. I'll be asking for that when I finally gather beta readers and such. :3 Just things like how it reads and feelings from it and if there's anything that I forget to cover. (Somethings will be covered later though.) What all would you like for yours?

I will take anything you are willing to give. The files posted here are unedited so I will not ask for that... It would be more than unfair to ask. Lol
However, i am rather new to writing adualt material and I am unsure whether my explicit material is too detailed or lacking for that matter. I have some male on male material that makes me a little nervous. This material is rather difficult to get objective feedback considering its content. I guess I am trying to decide the entertainment value of the explicit material.

Sounds good!

Okay, do you want me to post my thoughts or send them to you in a pm?

Note is good, email would be better, so I have it in case FA decides to die or something when I go to review. :) delphin.arts[at]gmail.com (it's posted on my profile as well).

Edit: And how should I send feedback to you? Comment, PM?

I sent an email.let me know if you don't receive it.

Yep, I got it!

Okay going on some of the suggestions of the comments above me, this is marked as mature, just so we're clear on what kind of submission this is http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18111330/

First chapter from a 10 chapter long series I did, and, though it's had a fair amount of views, never received feed back for it. Mature language for some mild language and violence. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7508519/

Sounds good to me!!

Here is my first submission. It's an older prose, SFW (Maybe at most PG-13), about two females, and their night on the town. A fun 'slice of life' (with anthros of course :)

I'll be glad to take on anthor's story. But due to the holidays, and collage please understand I may be a bit slowish. Next year will be a bit calmer.

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/15292768/