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meesh
this is a WIP, going to fix it up and colour it sometime this week <3
I dunno something is off with Meesh's face or something think it's the eye I dunno :\
Any advice?
meeshthis is a WIP, going to fix it up and colour it sometime this week <3
I dunno something is off with Meesh's face or something think it's the eye I dunno :\
Any advice?
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haha, it's funny you say that. I kept drawing and re drawing their legs and fucking them up so I just used Meesh's tail as a little stopper.
She's pretty much standing side on, but I suppose I could make her pushing her other leg back.. might change the position of her tail but I'll have a fiddle.
Thanks
She's pretty much standing side on, but I suppose I could make her pushing her other leg back.. might change the position of her tail but I'll have a fiddle.
Thanks
I think her left arm wrapping around your shoulder appears flat right where it starts appearing making the upper part of her arm seem long. The faces are nice, the "right before we go muzzle to muzzle" moment. This is supercute I personally like how you cut the legs off with the tail and looks good, it's something I can't do naturally without making my characters look like amputees :(( lol. Can't wait to see colors!
These are the issues (though small) that I noticed:
Red's left hand. Where's the thumb? (Or the other finger, or at least an indication of either.)
Red's ears. Missing.
Meesh's eye. Possibly too small, or too forward, but I think the eyelashes are too long, as well. It makes him look a little dazed and girly, as opposed to sultry. Maybe something to do with the heavy indication of an eyelid - it looks like you mean to put eyeshadow there later.
Hope that helps. :] It looks really, really good, though!
Red's left hand. Where's the thumb? (Or the other finger, or at least an indication of either.)
Red's ears. Missing.
Meesh's eye. Possibly too small, or too forward, but I think the eyelashes are too long, as well. It makes him look a little dazed and girly, as opposed to sultry. Maybe something to do with the heavy indication of an eyelid - it looks like you mean to put eyeshadow there later.
Hope that helps. :] It looks really, really good, though!
I figured her thumb would be kinda tucked behind her other fingers because they aren'y laying flat, but looking again you're right it does look silly I'll fix that.
Red has really little ears but I'll put those in too. haha.
Meesh's eye was where I had the most trouble and I knew it was funny looking! haha. I usually draw eyes wide open and just looking a particular way so I've beern trying to work on adding eyelids and expression.. Without much luck yet. I agree he looks a little dazed. I'll keep fiddling with his eye, thanks.
Red has really little ears but I'll put those in too. haha.
Meesh's eye was where I had the most trouble and I knew it was funny looking! haha. I usually draw eyes wide open and just looking a particular way so I've beern trying to work on adding eyelids and expression.. Without much luck yet. I agree he looks a little dazed. I'll keep fiddling with his eye, thanks.
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