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OMG, THAT IS NOT HOW YOU HOLD A PIZZA, CHANCE! (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
I played around with expressions this time. Let me know if you like it or not.
"Yarn in the closet" is a SWAT Kats based gay comic/ fanfiction
--> Comment please, I love reading feedback :3
If you find any errors (spelling/ grammer or if something sounds off), please let me know, so I can fix it! And improve for future pages! <--
Big thanks to
AceBear for helping with the dialogue and
RickWhitechest687 for proofreading!
OMG, THAT IS NOT HOW YOU HOLD A PIZZA, CHANCE! (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
I played around with expressions this time. Let me know if you like it or not.
"Yarn in the closet" is a SWAT Kats based gay comic/ fanfiction
--> Comment please, I love reading feedback :3
If you find any errors (spelling/ grammer or if something sounds off), please let me know, so I can fix it! And improve for future pages! <--
Big thanks to
AceBear for helping with the dialogue and
RickWhitechest687 for proofreading!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Housecat
Size 1500 x 2100px
File Size 1.88 MB
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You did great with the expressions, but I am not sure I am interpreting them correctly. I am going to put what I think I am seeing so you can tell me how well it matches with what you intended (Pretty please, do tell)
Panel 2: Chance is Relieved
Panel 3: Jake is Calmly Dismissive.
Panel 4: Jake is Cheerful
Panel 6: Chance is Smugly Aggressive; Jake is Nervous
Panel 7: Chance is Calmly Dismissive; Jake is Dismissively Aggressive
Panel 8: Chance is Mischievous; Jake is Smugly Aggressive
Panel 11: Jake is Smugly Aggressive
Panel 2: Chance is Relieved
Panel 3: Jake is Calmly Dismissive.
Panel 4: Jake is Cheerful
Panel 6: Chance is Smugly Aggressive; Jake is Nervous
Panel 7: Chance is Calmly Dismissive; Jake is Dismissively Aggressive
Panel 8: Chance is Mischievous; Jake is Smugly Aggressive
Panel 11: Jake is Smugly Aggressive
Aw thanks!
Panel 2: Chance has just regular happy faces, maybe looking at the sunset. No deeper meaning behind them.
Panel 3: Jake is satisfied with finishing work really soon and looking at Chance from below, which is always a good thing :3
Panel 4: Jake: Wants to say goodby before leaving and gets excited once he sees the pizza
Panel 6: Chance is supposed to look threathning (he is serious about food stuff), while not really being mad;
Jake just got a little jumspcared, just shat his pants a little :P
Panel 7: Chance is trying to be an smart-ass, his eyes should atleast imply he is not serious (since Jake is only seeing him from behind, he didn't noticed that);
Jake is mildy annoyed by Chance, even tho he knows Chance is joking about the whole "no pizza for you" thing, it still pushes his buttons => he's a little mad as well
Panel 8: Chnace feels like Jake is hiding something from him (being gay) for a while, can't figure out what exactly. With Jake is "going out again", he figures it is because of a girl. Thats face is supposed to be the face of someone (proud and a little cocky), who just played his thrump card, by thinking he saw through Jakes little secreat;
Jake get'S stuck on Chances use of the word again - he probably seems some (probably?) unfair criticism in Chances last comment (the leaving "again"), which makes him a little aggressive
Panel 9: Jake is flat out mad, Chance took forever to hand him the bag - it was open before, now it is closed when he hands it over- and suspects Chance did something with his backpack. But before he can say anthing, he literally get's trown out, while Chance is asking him to stay out late -> which confirms JAkes suspision, that Chance is up to something
Panel 11: He is smacking the door, probably really mad :D Apperently, he has some issues calling this helmet pick up a date D:
Happy? :3
Panel 2: Chance has just regular happy faces, maybe looking at the sunset. No deeper meaning behind them.
Panel 3: Jake is satisfied with finishing work really soon and looking at Chance from below, which is always a good thing :3
Panel 4: Jake: Wants to say goodby before leaving and gets excited once he sees the pizza
Panel 6: Chance is supposed to look threathning (he is serious about food stuff), while not really being mad;
Jake just got a little jumspcared, just shat his pants a little :P
Panel 7: Chance is trying to be an smart-ass, his eyes should atleast imply he is not serious (since Jake is only seeing him from behind, he didn't noticed that);
Jake is mildy annoyed by Chance, even tho he knows Chance is joking about the whole "no pizza for you" thing, it still pushes his buttons => he's a little mad as well
Panel 8: Chnace feels like Jake is hiding something from him (being gay) for a while, can't figure out what exactly. With Jake is "going out again", he figures it is because of a girl. Thats face is supposed to be the face of someone (proud and a little cocky), who just played his thrump card, by thinking he saw through Jakes little secreat;
Jake get'S stuck on Chances use of the word again - he probably seems some (probably?) unfair criticism in Chances last comment (the leaving "again"), which makes him a little aggressive
Panel 9: Jake is flat out mad, Chance took forever to hand him the bag - it was open before, now it is closed when he hands it over- and suspects Chance did something with his backpack. But before he can say anthing, he literally get's trown out, while Chance is asking him to stay out late -> which confirms JAkes suspision, that Chance is up to something
Panel 11: He is smacking the door, probably really mad :D Apperently, he has some issues calling this helmet pick up a date D:
Happy? :3
Jake is about to meet up with Allan (as Razor), to pick up his helmet (and probably more ). The bag will be used for transporting purposes, so he can bring the helmet back without people giving him strange looks.
But there are some other goodies in there, which I won't spoil here
But there are some other goodies in there, which I won't spoil here
A lot of artists draw arms "cut off", when their limb is coming from "outside the picture" to "inside the picture". This is (atleast supposed) to show Chances perspective. But WITHOUT showing Chances body, which would block the view on Jake and therefore make it impossible to understand, what's going on in this scene. (Without redoing the entire panel from a different perspective).
So yes: the arm is missing. But it's on purpose :)
So yes: the arm is missing. But it's on purpose :)
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