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I think Star may have got her assumptions a little wrong. Maybe she should have asked what was in the bottle before jumping to conclusions....like the majority of you HAHAHA. Is
extra naughty for not telling Star...did Lure even know, I mean he's prolly the littlest baby here so prolly doesnt know much of anything other than dino stomping?
I think Star may have got her assumptions a little wrong. Maybe she should have asked what was in the bottle before jumping to conclusions....like the majority of you HAHAHA. Is
extra naughty for not telling Star...did Lure even know, I mean he's prolly the littlest baby here so prolly doesnt know much of anything other than dino stomping?
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Thank you, TBH, I unsubbed from an artist I really liked because she would frequently do these 50 hour drawathons and I didn't want to support such self destructive behavior. I know that at the end of the day it really isn't any of my business what people do with their lives, but knowing the damage, both temporary and long term that doing such things does... I just can't.
Wow, Star you always come with funny, suspenseful, and unpredictable pages for Shine, because I did not see that coming, lol. I love how Aunty Tessa is uncontrollably laughing at Star for her using her safeword and asking if she use it wrong and I love Lure head patting Star. That was such a cute and funny page with Star being confused about the situation, thanks to an evil Lure, lol. Great job as always, Star and thanks for posting all of these pages at once, because it's been such a blast watching these!
awe poor star you silly baby it's okay don't feel bad. Just explain what you thought was in the bottle and why you felt like you needed the safeword for it. Lure IS super naughty for not telling you what was in it and letting you think the worst case scenario though he should be given a spanking himself. yup.
LOL you got me with that one. I thought for sure the blue bottles where laced with something, I even went back to the panel where Star is on the naughty step and the big person was explaining why she couldn’t have another green bottle but nothing was actually mentioned about her not having a blue one instead of pink.
You tricked us on purpose didn’t you!!
You tricked us on purpose didn’t you!!
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Consuming foods containing soy protein or taking soy protein products is LIKELY SAFE. Taking dietary supplements with soy extracts is POSSIBLY SAFE when used short-term (up to 6 months). Soy can cause some mild stomach and intestinal side effects such as constipation, bloating, and nausea. It can also cause allergic reactions involving rash, itching, and anaphylaxis in some people. Some people might experience tiredness. Soy might also affect thyroid function. However, this seems to occur primarily in people who are iodine deficient.
Theres pushing out content in a hurry, then theres... this.
2nd panel, mc's face looks wrong in a few ways, jaw seems to be a lot shorter than snout, cheek marks are weirdly placed, eyes are shaped and placed weirdly, with more inconsistency of how far down the pink goes, and this time its at an angle across her head for some reason.
P3 and P4 the wolf's muzzle looks really flat, even with angling and perspective being accounted for, and her ears are longer for some reason at the same time.
Then there's the fact that the last panel of this page is cut and tweaked from panel 4 of the last one, except for the fact that you changed lure's shirt, face color, and hair color.
2nd panel, mc's face looks wrong in a few ways, jaw seems to be a lot shorter than snout, cheek marks are weirdly placed, eyes are shaped and placed weirdly, with more inconsistency of how far down the pink goes, and this time its at an angle across her head for some reason.
P3 and P4 the wolf's muzzle looks really flat, even with angling and perspective being accounted for, and her ears are longer for some reason at the same time.
Then there's the fact that the last panel of this page is cut and tweaked from panel 4 of the last one, except for the fact that you changed lure's shirt, face color, and hair color.
I'm not asking for criticism here. It seems you're just being picky for the sake of being an arse. It's not appreciated and it's not wanted thanks. These weren't done in a hurry each page took 8+ hours of solid work like I said previously, if you think you can do better go ahead.
You're not being all too tactful about it. Most of the criticism is right but that first line really makes you appear very antagonistic.
Especially since you don't have an impressive library of your own to justify yourself being this blunt is not a good idea. It will cause people to instinctively defend themselves rather than consider your arguments.
Especially since you don't have an impressive library of your own to justify yourself being this blunt is not a good idea. It will cause people to instinctively defend themselves rather than consider your arguments.
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