Take Me Away Redone (WIP) Light Critique please
UPDATE: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4013520/
I'm redoing that old pencil drawing I started years back. I'm reworking the anatomy, trying to make it look better ten-fold. I'm also finally adding in the "dragon", like I told myself I would do that day I finished drawing it. I'm pretty happy with how it's turning out but it could always be better.
This image contains another one of my Jacobs, a (for now) reptilian/cetacean hybrid and Sydney. Neither is derived from any specific species, just taking traits I like from various related species. The light story, these are future-based creatures that started as cloned embryos of their human counterparts, then genetically modified as per request of the donating party. Meaning, my human form chose feline Sydney's traits and Jacob's human form chose dragon/cetacean Jacob's traits.
I'd be grateful if viewers could share what they feel would make this look better. I need help on the feline's feet especially.
I'm redoing that old pencil drawing I started years back. I'm reworking the anatomy, trying to make it look better ten-fold. I'm also finally adding in the "dragon", like I told myself I would do that day I finished drawing it. I'm pretty happy with how it's turning out but it could always be better.
This image contains another one of my Jacobs, a (for now) reptilian/cetacean hybrid and Sydney. Neither is derived from any specific species, just taking traits I like from various related species. The light story, these are future-based creatures that started as cloned embryos of their human counterparts, then genetically modified as per request of the donating party. Meaning, my human form chose feline Sydney's traits and Jacob's human form chose dragon/cetacean Jacob's traits.
I'd be grateful if viewers could share what they feel would make this look better. I need help on the feline's feet especially.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 960 x 1280px
File Size 89 kB
I'm redoing this image in a higher resolution and using the photoshop pen tool to do the lines this time (instead of the line tool). I was avoiding doing those age lines in the inking phase because I can't get them to look the way I want. With this comment, it seems I'm better off leaving them out anyway. :D
Thanks Donkeh. <3
Thanks Donkeh. <3
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