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Guy Mauve is finally opening the Café of his dreams. Just one problem though; he needs Graham Crackers. Lucky for him, there's a friendly import company who is happy to oblige his craving at a cheap price! I'm sure nothing could go wrong...
This has been a bit of a passion project for me so I hope you all read and enjoy it! I would love to bring Guy to life in the future with my art so make sure you keep a nostril out for the scent of campfire and burnt sugar in the future~
(Any feedback concerning any errors is appreciated!)
This has been a bit of a passion project for me so I hope you all read and enjoy it! I would love to bring Guy to life in the future with my art so make sure you keep a nostril out for the scent of campfire and burnt sugar in the future~
(Any feedback concerning any errors is appreciated!)
Category Story / Transformation
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 340.5 kB
I am a massive fan of long stories, transformation, weight gain, and food tf. This was a truly fantastic combination of all of them! I absolutely loved the descriptions of change and the timeline you set. Your characters were all wonderfully charming as well. I really enjoyed this read! Thank you so much for sharing this :3 I can't wait to see Guy in your art when you get to it!
On the note of wanting feedback on errors - I noted at the end of page 14 "I'll could submit your diagnosis". I only found the one though - you certainly made a well-crafted piece here ^^
On the note of wanting feedback on errors - I noted at the end of page 14 "I'll could submit your diagnosis". I only found the one though - you certainly made a well-crafted piece here ^^
Wow, just wow. This story is absolutely incredible. The slow TF over time, the fantastic level of detail, and the absolutely lovely cast of characters throughout. Excellent work, I enjoyed every last page.
Guy can definitely expect some patronage from a fellow confectionary dragon in the future!
Guy can definitely expect some patronage from a fellow confectionary dragon in the future!
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