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Once upon a time 
ducky bopped at me and asked me to give writing a silly and sizey comic script a go. So I did!
...That's it. That's the story.
So now, some time later, I'm finally getting around to sharing it. Writing a comic script definitely stretched and strained my creativity but ultimately I'm quite proud of what I came up with! Tried my best to use and utilize the medium itself, the very boundaries of the boxes, to add what humor I could.
This isn't going to become a comic but, hey, it's cool to know that as a writer I'm capable of writing standalone stories, comics, and even visual novels now. I've come a long way.
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Page One
INT. – Stone Dungeon
Panel 1
Monster facing viewer. Slouched forward with his spear held up beside him as he absentmindedly guards his post.
Panel 2
Monster still facing viewer as he scratches at himself. Cat girl can be seen sneaking past him in the background with sack slung over her shoulder.
Panel 3
Monster yawns/stretches and some shiny vials/potions of goop hanging from his belt can be seen. Cat girl in background takes notice with a pronounced exclamation mark over her head.
Panel 4
Monster smacks his lips as cat girl approaches.
Panel 5
Monster has very stunned look on his face as cat girl practically bumps cheeks with him as she looks over his shoulder and peers down eagerly at the shinies on his person.
Panel 6
Monster sweating with very nervous look on his face as cat girl locks eyes with him and grins.
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Page Two
INT. - Stone Dungeon
Panel 1
Cat girl sitting back against a wall. Light trickling in through cracks in the ceiling as she scribbles on a piece of paper. The vials, and the trousers they are still hanging from, dangle out of the open mouth of the sack flopped beside her along with her other assorted treasures.
CAT GIRL
♪♪♪♪
Panel 2
Zoom out of cat girl. Shows entirety of room, and bonked monster with stars over his head, to capture the general feel of the dungeon. A very old, and fairly typical, stone dungeon that has all but been forgotten. Walls cracking apart and tree roots coil down along the walls from above. Sunlight peeks in through cracks/gaps in the ceiling while moss and stray plants grow here and there wherever it shines.
CAT GIRL
“Hide trunks are always in style and these potions are bound to be worth somethin'. This has gotta be my biggest and bestest haul yet!”
Panel 3
Cat girl taps her quill/writing utensil against her chin. Her eyes are turned up to the top right corner.
CAT GIRL
“Even so. It could be bigger.”
Panel 4
Over the shoulder view of cat girl. Looking down at her crudely drawn map as the room sprawls out before her. Her eyes twinkle brightly as she taps at the unexplored center.
Crossed out treasure chests and monster skulls decorate the rooms she has already been in. A cutely drawn kitty face indicates the current room she is in. In the map’s center is a noticeable blank spot. A room/area that has yet to be explored with a big ? mark circled.
CAT GIRL
“So much bigger. So much better! There's still treasure to be had here, I just know it!”
Panel 5
Zoom in of map to show kitty face icon now occupying the unexplored center. To serve as a transition of sorts on the next page when she finds herself in the MacGuffin room.
CAT GIRL
“And it's mine for the taking!”
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Page Three
INT. - MacGuffin Room
Panel 1
Back of cat's head can be seen as she peers into a chamber. Sunlight peeking through cracks in the ceiling and shining down on a golden bracelet sitting atop a pedestal in the center of the room. Rubble piled up along the floor
Panel 2
Hands cupped to her cheeks, the cat's eyes turn to coins as she smiles happily at the sight of the bracelet.
CAT GIRL
“Treasuuuuuure!”
Panel 3
The treasure can be seen in the foreground as the cat girl walks towards it. Her fingers twiddling as she reaches towards it with a twinkle in her eyes. A skeleton can be seen propped up against a wall behind her.
CAT GIRL
“What even are you, I wonder?”
Panel 4
Zoom in on skeleton behind her as its expression changes and its face flickers to life. Cat Girl off panel.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“Well whatever you are you're bound to be worth a fortune!”
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Page Four
INT. - MacGuffin Room
Panel 1
Skelly rises to life in a dramatic pose. Skelly's word bubble is cut off and blocked off by the cat girl's yell.
SKELLY
“Who dares lay their hands on the -”
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“AHHH!”
Panel 2
View of cat girl from the side and looking right to Panel 3, clutching the treasure close, as plenty of side boob is shown off. Her tail puffed out from being spooked. Skelly off panel.
CAT GIRL
“H-hey! What do you think you're doing sneaking up on someone like that?”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“I live here you thieving furball! Now put that back!”
Panel 3
Side view of Skelly being very annoyed and looking left to Panel 2. Cat girl off panel.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“I'm not thieving, I'm dungeon crawling! Besides, it's finders keepers.”
SKELLY
“It most certainly is not!”
Panel 4
Skelly, his panel colored dark and ominously, peers directly at the viewer. A tiny CLICK sound effect can be seen on the panel towards the right side.
SKELLY
“Foolish girl! You know not what forces, great and terrible, your carelessness threatens to unleash.”
“Locked away within that bracelet is a powerful curse that has brought low countless-”
Panel 5
Same perspective/focus on Skelly as seen in the prior panel. Now though Skelly wears a dumbfounded expression.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“Ooh! Fits like a glove!”
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Page Five
INT. - MacGuffin Room
Panel 1
Cat girl looking over herself and the fashionable bracelet now wrapped around her arm. Her tail flicking behind her excitedly.
CAT GIRL
“And it's comfy too! Gosh. I've never pawned off something this valuable before.”
Panel 2
Skelly looking completely flummoxed as he approaches the cat. Arms out at his sides as he pleads with her. His dialogue bubble completely overlapped by hers as she thinks aloud and drowns him out. Cat pinching at her chin with her free hand as she thinks.
CAT GIRL
“Hmm. Maybe I should get it appraised? Don't wanna be ripped off after all...”
Panel 3
Skelly looking incredibly flustered and frustrated as his dialogue bubble and repeated warnings continue to be drowned out and ignored. Clutching at the sides of his head and pulling out his nonexistent hair. Cat fiddling with the bracelet absentmindedly as she continues to ponder aloud.
CAT GIRL
“Probably shouldn't be walking around flaunting this then. Mmph. Darn thing doesn't wanna come off though.”
Panel 4
Cat walking towards the viewer and out of the chamber with her sack slung over her shoulder. Tossing a wave back to Skelly with a smile. In the background Skelly reaches out towards her quite panicked as her word bubble drowns him out one last time.
CAT GIRL
Oh well! I'll figure something out. Seeya Skelly!”
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Page Six
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Bird's eye view of a forest. Peering down at a clearing where cat girl can be seen reclining back against a tree and her sack of goodies is sprawled out beside her.
Panel 2
Zoom in of cat girl resting in the shade of the tree. A worried/pouty look can be seen on her face as she continues to fiddle with the bracelet. Rustling noises/sound effects can be seen behind her.
CAT GIRL:
“Augh. Work with me here you stupid thing!”
“Tch. I wanted to sell you off not show you off. So much for my biggest bestest haul ever...”
Panel 3
Skelly, panting, stumbles into the scene. He is stuck through with twigs, leaves, and branches after having finally caught up with the cat. Cat looks back at him annoyed. Her brows flattened and furrowed.
SKELLY
“Excuse you! I'll have you know that 'stupid thing' was forged by none other than-”
CAT GIRL
“You again? Skelly, now's not a good time.”
Panel 4
Over the shoulder view of Skelly looking down at the grumpy cat. Skelly, just as annoyed as the cat is, knocks free and brushes off the various bits of forest debris that has accumulated on him.
SKELLY
“Yes, me again! You have something of mine and I would see you return it! Or at least that's what I'd like to say.”
Panel 5
Same point of view as prior panel. Cat girl extends her arm towards Skelly and dismissively shakes her hand. Skelly's expression has softened.
Skelly's dialogue bubble is cut off yet again. This time by an off panel bandit.
CAT GIRL
“You're welcome to try and take it.”
SKELLY
“*Sigh* If you would just listen to me I could finally explain that-”
BANDIT LEADER (OFF PANEL)
“Oh?”
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Page Seven
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Intro of bandit leader menacingly making their way into the clearing. Bandit has his hand resting on the pommel of the sword hanging from his hip.
BANDIT LEADER
“Well then. I'd be more than happy to oblige.”
Panel 2
Cat rises to her feet wary and nervous and with her bitty knife drawn. Tree at her back and unaware of the shadows creeping up behind her through the brush. Skelly just completely exasperated and sick of one interruption after another. Bandit Leader is off panel but his shadow is cast over them.
Panel 3
Same perspective as prior panel. Bandits have successfully snuck up behind cat and disarmed her. Skelly looking back at Cat shocked and alarmed.
BANDIT LEADER
“Come now, don't you worry. Me n' my boys will gladly take that treasure off yer hands.”
CAT GIRL
“H-hey!”
Panel 4
Bandit leader on left side of the panel and Skelly on the right. Skelly, a hand raised and finger held up in a tutting manner, confronts him. The Bandit leader tucks his chin against his chest and peers down at Skelly rather unimpressed.
SKELLY
“Impudent mortal! Your unfettered greed shall be your undoing!”
Panel 5
Bandit leader rears back one of his arms while Skelly keeps talking. Bandit leader's expression remains unchanged. Skelly's eyes are closed rather haughtily as he settles into his monologue.
SKELLY
“Ruins, not riches, await you! Forged by the great wizard Scoodles he decreed that whomever foolishly saw fit to don that bracelet would be cursed to-”
Panel 6
Bandit Leader uppercuts Skelly's skull clean off his body. Yet again, the Bandit Leader's expression is still unchanged. Skelly's hand, which was previously holding up a finger in a tutting position, droops in response.
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Page Eight
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Close up view of Bandit leader as he approaches the viewer with a malicious swagger in his step. His sword drawn and propped up against his shoulder.
BANDIT LEADER
“As I was sayin...”
Panel 2 & Panel 3
Panel 2 and 3 look like a single panel split into two for the sake of capturing action lines. Scene would be low angle shot looking up at Cat girl as the other bandits grab at her arms and drag her back towards the tree she was previously resting against.
Panel 2 specifically would show some action lines showing where Skelly's skull lands against the ground. Skelly's skull would then roll forward into Panel 3.
Panel 3 would show Skelly's skull, with very dizzy eyes, coming to a rest near Cat girl's feet. Cat girl looking very frowny as she kicks her legs.
BANDIT LEADER
“Since you were so kind to offer.”
Panel 4
Side view of Cat as she is being tied to the tree by rope by the other bandits. Bandit Leader standing before her as he rests a foot against the cat's sack of goodies. Skelly's body can be seen in the background grabbing confusedly at where its head once was. Cat has cheeks puffed out and is quite clearly mad.
BANDIT LEADER
“What's yours is ours now.”
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Page Nine
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Side view of the clearing. On the left side of the panel the Bandit Leader kicks roughly at the sack to force the various treasures to spill out. The other bandits, having finished tying up Cat Girl, walk over and start to rummage through them. Cat Girl, along with Skelly's head, are on the far right side of the panel can only watch. Cat girl angrily trying to wiggle free as she tries to shout something. Her word bubble getting drowned out by the Bandit Leader's as he ignores her.
BANDIT LEADER
“You two. C'mere.”
Panel 2
Bandit Leader looks back over his shoulder at the other bandits as they take stock of Cat girl's various treasures. One of the bandits can be seen behind him holding up the trousers, with potions hanging from it, curiously. The other squinting and poking warily at a pair of dentures.
BANDIT LEADER
“Sort out the goods from the garbage. I'll be tendin' to our gracious guest here in the meantime.”
Panel 3
Top-down view of Cat girl and Skelly's head. Almost like the viewer is looking down from among the tree branches. Cat girl very upset, as she struggles to get her arms free, while Skelly looks up at her with his eyes half-lidded in annoyance.
CAT GIRL
“You can't do that! I yoinked that stuff fair and square!”
Panel 4
Low-angle view from behind Skelly's head as he looks up at Cat girl. A worried expression on her face as she looks to him for help as she has managed to get her arms free and she fumbles with the ropes to no avail. A little teardrop can be seen on the back of Skelly's head.
In the background one of the bandits can be resting his hands on his hips and shaking his butt as he tries on the trousers and looks over himself approvingly. The other is kneeling before the sack of treasure and chucking stuff out over his shoulder. The various treasures bonking against Skelly's body which is holding its arms up trying to shield itself from the barrage of garbage.
Bandit Leader's shadow is also seen on the grass/in the background to indicate he is approaching.
CAT GIRL
“Skelly, what do we do?”
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Page Ten
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat girl has alarmed look on her face as Bandit Leader's huge hand grabs her arm, the one with the bracelet on it, and slams it back against the tree. Skelly looking up at her scared as he starts to grasp the severity of the situation. The rest of the Bandit Leader is off screen.
BANDIT LEADER (OFF PANEL)
“Fer starters...”
Panel 2
Closeup view of Bandit Leader showing just his head and shoulders. The sun is behind his head and casts him in shadow which serves to obscure his eyes. A wide and wicked toothy grin shines through the darkness cast upon his face. Over his shoulder, far in the background, Skelly's body can be seen holding its hands up to where its head would be in fear.
BANDIT LEADER
“You can make good on that offer of yours.”
Panel 3
Note: Panel 3 and 4 will be side by side so it gives off the impression the Cat and Bandit Leader are locked in a stare down with one another.
Side view of Cat girl angrily furrowing her brows and biting her lip as she looks to the right. Bandit Leader's huge arm and hand can be seen painfully squeezing/gripping her arm with the bracelet on it. She pushes back and sinks her nails into his huge limb with her free hand to no effect.
CAT GIRL
“Fat chance! Even if I wanted it to this stupid thing isn't coming off! Not like this and not for you!”
Panel 4
Side view of Bandit Leader leader cracking a cheeky grin as he looks to the left at Cat Girl in Panel 3.
Panel 5
Similar perspective as Panel 2. Bandit Leader raises his sword up with his free hand and it glistens as the sun's rays catch upon it. In the background the two henchmen, one dressed rather silly and now wearing the dentures while the other looks up from the sack of garbage, can be seen with faint exclamation marks over their heads as they look to the Bandit Leader. Or, more specifically, what's rushing towards him.
In the bottom right corner is a small insert panel showing Cat Girl with scared/fearful expression.
BANDIT LEADER
“Well not with that attitude it ain't.”
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Page Eleven
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1: Close up shot of Bandit Leader knocked forward, with lots of action lines, by Skelly's body tackling into the Bandit Leader's back. Bandit Leader completely blindsided and surprised.
SKELLY
“Oh stuff it you arrogant oaf.”
Panel 2
Bandit Leader has his back to the viewer. Skelly's body clings to his back and hangs on his sword swishing arm forcing the Bandit Leader to let go of Cat Girl. Bandit Leader angrily fumbling with the skeleton body in the meantime. Past his shoulder we can see the Cat Girl, still tied up to the tree, beaming down at Skelly's skull with a smile. Skelly's skull sporting a dour and serious expression as he looks towards the Bandit.
CAT GIRL
“Skelly! You saved me!”
SKELLY
“Hardly. I've but delayed the inevitable.”
Panel 3
Bird's eye view of the clearing looking down on the ridiculous scene taking place. The other bandits stumbling towards the Bandit Leader as he fumbles with Skelly's body.
SKELLY
“Yet... that might be enough. Because if you are to have any hope of getting out of this mess you need to LISTEN.”
Panel 4
Zoom in of Bandit Leader, absolutely enraged, while his henchmen try to tug Skelly off of him. As the Bandit Leader tries to say something Skelly's body can be seen literally stuffing the Bandit Leader's word bubble back in his face. The word bubble can be seen smooshed up against the side of the Bandit Leader's head so that for once Skelly can get a word in.
SKELLY
“Locked within that bracelet is a terrible curse. One that has flattened kingdoms and brought low civilizations.”
Panel 5
Cat Girl wearing a serious expression as she lets Skelly speak uninterrupted.
SKELLY
“And if you are to survive to see another day you're going to have to call upon it.”
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Page Twelve
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Zoom in of Skelly's skull on the grass, wind whistling by as leaves and branches tumble past, as he finally gives his long awaited monologue.
SKELLY
“Promising salvation one moment it sunders those selfsame hopes the very next. Indifferent to intentions it brings low any and all without a care for caution. Once taken it can never be returned. Such is the power the great wizard Scoodles saw fit to tempt you with!”
Panel 2
Point of view is right behind Cat Girl's head and looking over her shoulder. Cat girl holding up her bruised arm with the bracelet and peering curiously at it as it brims with magic. Bandit Leader can be seen before her SLAMMING Skelly's body to the ground.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Invoke his name and claim his power. Before you shall your friends and foes cower!”
Panel 3
Similar view as prior panel. Cat Girl looking down and to her left, at Skelly's off panel head, as Bandit Leader stomps towards her. Skelly's body cartoonishly flails as it is trampled underfoot by the Bandit Leader and his henchmen.
CAT GIRL
“I do what now?”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Augh... just. Just repeat after me.”
“Scoodles hear my beck and call. So that I may rise and these bandits may fall.”
Panel 4
Bandit Leader crashes his huge hand against the tree, bark splintering off, as he pins Cat Girl's arm to the tree and lifts his sword up. Cat Girl's tail puffs out as her eyes go wide. Skelly's skull off panel.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Any time now!
CAT GIRL
“S-scoodles! Hear my hecking call! So I can claim my prize and make these bandits bawl!”
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Page Thirteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat girl looks to the bracelet as it glows bright and arcs of energy trickle out from it. The energy coiling around her limbs and up along her neck.
Panel 2
Cat Girl clenches her eyes shut as the arcs of magic ripple across her face and start to blow back her hair.
Panel 3
Cat Girl flicks her eyes open, now aglow, with a confident expression.
Panel 4
Side view of Cat Girl and Bandit Leader. Cat Girl now wearing a confident/cocky expression as she locks eyes with the Bandit Leader. Problem is... she is all of a few inches taller albeit now glowy. Bandit Leader has flattened his brows and still looks mighty pissed off.
Panel 5
Exact same view as Panel 4. Cat Girl's ears droop and her confident smile falters as a nervous sweat bead appears on her head. Bandit Leader with the exact same expression except now he has reared his sword swinging arm back. Skelly speaks from off panel.
SKELLY
“OH FOR.”
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Page Fourteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Back of Skelly's head facing the viewer. Both Cat Girl and and Bandit Leader giving him a side eye as he speaks.
SKELLY
“You are calling down the power of the greatest wizard this realm has ever known! Say it like you mean it, come on!”
Panel 2
Note: Show arcs of energy crackling between Panel 2 and Panel 3
Zoom in of Cat Girl's face. In the reflection of her eyes gone wide a sword can be seen swinging towards her as Bandit Leader is quite clearly done and over with their shenanigans.
CAT GIRL
“S-scoodles hear my beck and call!”
Panel 3
Side view of Cat Girl and Bandit Leader. Cat Girl BWOOMPHS and dramatically swells in size as the ropes that were tied around her explode off of her. She suddenly finds herself standing head and shoulders above the Bandit Leader as she catches the wrist of his sword swinging hand in her palm. A relieved expression can be seen on her face. Bandit Leader is surprised and thrown a little off balance as the bracelet clad arm he was clutching before is now spilling out of his grasp.
SKELLY
“There you go!”
Panel 4
Bandit Henchmen have their backs to the viewer as they back away. Before them, Cat Girl still can be seen still glowing and brimming with power as she grows still. Cat Girl having flipped the tables as she holds/hoists up the Bandit Leader by one hand with a beaming and very kitty-like grin. Skelly's skull can be seen in the corner of the background by her feet.
CAT GIRL
“So that I may rise...”
SKELLY
“Great. Good.”
Panel 5
View of clearing from above. The Bandit Henchmen and Skelly's body are swallowed up in the shadow of the growing and off-panel Cat Girl. The Bandit Henchmen can be seen hugging each other worriedly. Skelly's body is shaking its hands to implore her to stop stop stop. Skelly's skull is off frame.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“And these bandits may fall!”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“A-alright. Now might be a good time to rein it in just a little bit...”
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Page Fifteen
EXT. - Forest & Forest Clearing
The entire page would be a single picture of the surrounding forest landscape, broken up into multiple panels, for the sake of showing Cat Girl's growth. Cat Girl can be seen rising up into the sky, towering over the page, as her head and shoulders crash up and through multiple panels. Chunks and shards of the panels tumble down around her.
CAT GIRL
“Grant me power!”
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Page Sixteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Bandit Leader dangling in mid air, sweating bullets, as he looks down at the clearing so very far below. A vertigo inducing perspective for him and the viewer as Cat Girl's huge fingers can be seen pinching his arm.
Panel 2
Bandit Leader, his back to the viewer, can be seen dangling before the Cat Girl's massive face. His tail hanging limp as her face nearly fills the entirety of the panel.
Cat Girl essentially having become the >:3 face incarnate.
CAT GIRL
“What's mine is yours, huh?”
Panel 3
Side view of Cat Girl peering down at the bitty Bandit Leader with a smug grin on her face while he laughs and wiggles nervously.
BANDIT LEADER
“I-it was meant more as a suggestion than anythin' else, honest!”
Panel 4
Bird's eye view of the Bandit Henchmen on the ground. Dipping to their knees they hurriedly shovel back in the various treasures they had chucked out of Cat Girl's treasure sack. The Henchman who had played dress up desperately tries to take off the pants he stole.
Panel 5
Exact same point of view and perspective as Panel 4. The shading is significantly darker now as Cat Girl's shadow reaches towards them. Both of the Henchmen frozen in place in fear. One can be seen stuffing garbage back into the sack while the other has those pants, with the potion vials still dangling from the waist, pooled around his ankles. Cat Girl speaks from off panel.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“Was it now?”
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Page Seventeen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat Girl, crouching low and allowing for a copious shot of her cleavage, reaches a huge hand out towards the viewer. The Henchmen in the foreground panicking and trying to crawl away towards the viewer as she does so.
CAT GIRL
“Funny thing, that!”
Panel 2
Closeup of Cat Girl's hand as she grabs the Henchmen. The both of them cartoonishly squeaking/puffing out as she gently squeezes them.
Panel 3
Low angle view of Cat Girl's broad face, and breasts, as she holds her hands before her. Peering down past her chest she smirks at the bad guys in tow. In one hand she holds/squeezes the Bandit Leader and in the other she holds the Henchmen. Both the Bandit Leader and the Henchmen have their backs to the viewers.
CAT GIRL
“Because I have a suggestion for you too!”
Panel 4
Perspective is from Cat Girl's eyes. Looking out over her breasts, which fill the foreground of the panel as if we are looking over them, and at her hands held up before her. The Bandit Leader and Henchmen that are squeezed within her grasp warily side eye one other.
BANDIT LEADER
“An' what might that be? I-if you dun mind us askin?”
Panel 5
Note: Panel 5 and 6 will be side by side so it gives off the impression that Cat Girl is hurling the Bandits from one panel into another.
Perspective is bird's eye view looking down on Cat Girl. Eyes half lidded, Cat Girl hurls her arm up and right towards Panel 6. Action lines shooting out from her blurred hand.
Panel 6
Zoom in of Bandit Leader and Henchmen as motion blur lines rush past them. The Bandits looking up and to the right as their cheeks and hair blown back by the wind as they are hurtled upwards at ludicrous speed.
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Page Eighteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Point of view from among the clouds as Bandit Leader and his henchmen flail about in mid-air. Their expressions one of alarm and dread as the Henchmen swat and try to cling on to low hanging clouds. Cat Girl can be seen leaping up below them as she makes ready to uppercut them.
CAT GIRL
“Get lost.”
Panel 2
Side view of Bandit Leader and Henchmen pressing against Cat Girl's fist as clouds rush past.
Panel 3
A carbon copy of Panel 2 just with silly amounts of motion blur to show the Bandits are about to blast off.
Panel 4
View of Cat Girl from behind as she holds her arm up high and sunlight shines down upon her. Action lines explode off of Cat Girl's fist as the bandits are sent blasting off into the sky, and through quite a few clouds, with a twinkle.
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Page Nineteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat Girl lands back down in the clearing with a cacophonous THOOM. Trees rustling and jettisoning out of the ground as she wears a satisfied smile on her face.
Panel 2
Skelly's body fumbles for Skelly's skull as its grip on it falters during Cat Girl's meteoric landing. Cat Girl's towering legs can be seen behind him in the background.
Panel 3
Skelly, facing the viewer, puts his skull back on his body. Straightening it even as he sports a very nervous expression and looks nervous about speaking with Cat Girl again. Cat Girl drops to her hands and knees, showing off plenty of boobage, as she smiles down at him.
CAT GIRL
“Skelly! That was amazing!”
SKELLY
“That's certainly one word for it.”
Panel 4
Close-up of Cat Girl face, happy as can be, as she continues chatting him up.
CAT GIRL
“A super special treasure that makes me grow with the right magic words? Psh and here I was thinking about selling it! Now what are the magic words that make me shrink?”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Uhhh...”
Panel 5
Same close-up of Cat Girl face. Her happy expression remains but a pallor, lots of shadows, have fallen over her eyes as Skelly delivers an answer she doesn't want to hear.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“T-there aren't any.”
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Page Twenty
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Skelly, facing the viewer, rubs at the back of his neck with one hand while he swishes the other about his wrist. Very very nervously explaining himself in the shadow of Cat Girl.
SKELLY
“I mean I did kind of sort of warn you.”
Panel 2
Same point of view as Panel 1. Skelly weakly shrugging as he tosses his hands out to his sides.
SKELLY
“Once taken it can never be returned? Such is the power the great wizard Scoodles saw fit to tempt you with?”
Panel 3
Same point of view as both Panel and Panel 2. Difference is a giant set of Cat Girl fingers now fill the panel and can be seen pinching Skelly's head between them. Skelly's head is completely obscured by those fuzzy fingers. His arms hang limply at his sides as he just accepts what is happening to him.
SKELLY
“Why do I bother.”
Panel 4
Cat Girl puffs out her cheeks, her visage and bust filling the panel, as she frowns at the speck sized Skelly skull that has since been plucked off of his body. Skelly's skull sweating bullets.
CAT GIRL
“You're saying I'm stuck like this?!”
SKELLY
“B-better to be big than buried!”
Panel 5
Close up of Skelly's skull as he is cartoonishly mooshed between her fingertips.
SKELLY
“And s-surely a daring dungeon crawler like yourself can recognize that there's no greater treasure to be had than one's own health and happiness?”
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Page Twenty-One
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Zoom in of Cat Girl, still on her hand(s) and knees, squints at Skelly as she flares her nostrils. His skull, trembling in fear, is pinched between two fingers held up before her.
Panel 2
Cat Girl harrumphs and droops her ears. Skelly's skull heaves a sigh of relief.
Panel 3
Cat Girl's expression softens as she takes to rolling Skelly's skull about her palm. The feline giantess sitting down in the clearing with a THOOM. Her big butt and thighs bulldozing apart trees that barely come up past her waist as she sits down.
One hand is held up before her while the other rests on the ground beside her. Skelly's body can be seen in the foreground wiping the brow of the head that is no longer upon its shoulders.
A very tiny 'CRNCH' sound effect can be seen alongside Cat Girl's hand resting on the ground.
CAT GIRL
“This wasn't what I had in mind for my biggest bestest haul ever but... I'll take it.”
Panel 4
Bust shot of Cat Girl. Her eyes lighting up with twinkles/sparkles as she balls her fists and brings them up to her cheeks. Skelly's skull can be seen peeking up over some of her fingers as he is now squeezed within her grasp.
CAT GIRL
“And it's not like it was a total wash! I still have the rest of my record breaking haul to turn in!”
Panel 5
Similar perspective as Panel 4. Cat Girl turns her head down towards the ground with the intent of gazing upon her haul. A very kitty-like :3 smile on her face as Skelly looks along with her.
Panel 6
Zoom in of Cat Girl's hand being lifted up off the ground. Within the huge hand print shaped crater left in its wake is an utterly demolished sack of treasure that lies imprinted and half buried in the dirt. Torn to shreds and the rest of her gathered treasure teased at earlier on in the comic now lies in pieces.
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Page Twenty-Two
EXT. - Forest
Panel 1
Note: Panel 1 will be shaking/wobbling out of place from Cat Girl yelling.
Panoramic view of the forest. Trees shaking and flocks of bird flying up into the air as Cat Girl voices her frustration. Her very frustrated and angry word bubble practically filling the entirety of the sky.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“SCOOOOOOOOOOODLES!”
Panel 2
Ground-level, almost worm's eye view, of Cat Girl lumbering towards the viewer. Her huge feet looking like they're about to step down upon us. Shoulders hunched, fists balled up, and a frown on her face as she stomps through the forest very agitated. Skelly's body can be seen diving out of the way of her footfalls. Skelly's skull is tucked into her fist and his word bubbles filter out from between her fingertips.
SKELLY
“H-hey! Hey! Where do you think you're going!?”
CAT GIRL
“Where do you think? I'm gonna go find me a wizard!”
Panel 3
Another ground-level, worm's eye view, of Cat Girl from behind. Looking up up up at her heels and backside as Skelly's body chases after her. Arms out before it as it stumbles and tries to keep pace with her massive strides.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Come now, don't be ridiculous! Do you even know where to start?!”
CAT GIRL
“No. But I bet you sure do!”
Panel 4
Another panoramic view, looking on down from among the clouds, of the gargantuan Cat Girl stomping through the forest.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Why is this my problem to fix?! You're the one who stole the bracelet! You're the one who ignored my warnings!”
CAT GIRL
“Don't you try and talk your way out of this! You're gonna help me find that mean old wizard and make him fix this!”
Panel 5
Pan up to the sky and the clouds. A beautiful sunshiney day capping off Cat Girl and Skelly's new adventure together.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Augh...”
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“No take backsies!”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“AUUUUUGH.”
FIN
ducky bopped at me and asked me to give writing a silly and sizey comic script a go. So I did!...That's it. That's the story.
So now, some time later, I'm finally getting around to sharing it. Writing a comic script definitely stretched and strained my creativity but ultimately I'm quite proud of what I came up with! Tried my best to use and utilize the medium itself, the very boundaries of the boxes, to add what humor I could.
This isn't going to become a comic but, hey, it's cool to know that as a writer I'm capable of writing standalone stories, comics, and even visual novels now. I've come a long way.
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duckyPage One
INT. – Stone Dungeon
Panel 1
Monster facing viewer. Slouched forward with his spear held up beside him as he absentmindedly guards his post.
Panel 2
Monster still facing viewer as he scratches at himself. Cat girl can be seen sneaking past him in the background with sack slung over her shoulder.
Panel 3
Monster yawns/stretches and some shiny vials/potions of goop hanging from his belt can be seen. Cat girl in background takes notice with a pronounced exclamation mark over her head.
Panel 4
Monster smacks his lips as cat girl approaches.
Panel 5
Monster has very stunned look on his face as cat girl practically bumps cheeks with him as she looks over his shoulder and peers down eagerly at the shinies on his person.
Panel 6
Monster sweating with very nervous look on his face as cat girl locks eyes with him and grins.
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Page Two
INT. - Stone Dungeon
Panel 1
Cat girl sitting back against a wall. Light trickling in through cracks in the ceiling as she scribbles on a piece of paper. The vials, and the trousers they are still hanging from, dangle out of the open mouth of the sack flopped beside her along with her other assorted treasures.
CAT GIRL
♪♪♪♪
Panel 2
Zoom out of cat girl. Shows entirety of room, and bonked monster with stars over his head, to capture the general feel of the dungeon. A very old, and fairly typical, stone dungeon that has all but been forgotten. Walls cracking apart and tree roots coil down along the walls from above. Sunlight peeks in through cracks/gaps in the ceiling while moss and stray plants grow here and there wherever it shines.
CAT GIRL
“Hide trunks are always in style and these potions are bound to be worth somethin'. This has gotta be my biggest and bestest haul yet!”
Panel 3
Cat girl taps her quill/writing utensil against her chin. Her eyes are turned up to the top right corner.
CAT GIRL
“Even so. It could be bigger.”
Panel 4
Over the shoulder view of cat girl. Looking down at her crudely drawn map as the room sprawls out before her. Her eyes twinkle brightly as she taps at the unexplored center.
Crossed out treasure chests and monster skulls decorate the rooms she has already been in. A cutely drawn kitty face indicates the current room she is in. In the map’s center is a noticeable blank spot. A room/area that has yet to be explored with a big ? mark circled.
CAT GIRL
“So much bigger. So much better! There's still treasure to be had here, I just know it!”
Panel 5
Zoom in of map to show kitty face icon now occupying the unexplored center. To serve as a transition of sorts on the next page when she finds herself in the MacGuffin room.
CAT GIRL
“And it's mine for the taking!”
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Page Three
INT. - MacGuffin Room
Panel 1
Back of cat's head can be seen as she peers into a chamber. Sunlight peeking through cracks in the ceiling and shining down on a golden bracelet sitting atop a pedestal in the center of the room. Rubble piled up along the floor
Panel 2
Hands cupped to her cheeks, the cat's eyes turn to coins as she smiles happily at the sight of the bracelet.
CAT GIRL
“Treasuuuuuure!”
Panel 3
The treasure can be seen in the foreground as the cat girl walks towards it. Her fingers twiddling as she reaches towards it with a twinkle in her eyes. A skeleton can be seen propped up against a wall behind her.
CAT GIRL
“What even are you, I wonder?”
Panel 4
Zoom in on skeleton behind her as its expression changes and its face flickers to life. Cat Girl off panel.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“Well whatever you are you're bound to be worth a fortune!”
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Page Four
INT. - MacGuffin Room
Panel 1
Skelly rises to life in a dramatic pose. Skelly's word bubble is cut off and blocked off by the cat girl's yell.
SKELLY
“Who dares lay their hands on the -”
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“AHHH!”
Panel 2
View of cat girl from the side and looking right to Panel 3, clutching the treasure close, as plenty of side boob is shown off. Her tail puffed out from being spooked. Skelly off panel.
CAT GIRL
“H-hey! What do you think you're doing sneaking up on someone like that?”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“I live here you thieving furball! Now put that back!”
Panel 3
Side view of Skelly being very annoyed and looking left to Panel 2. Cat girl off panel.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“I'm not thieving, I'm dungeon crawling! Besides, it's finders keepers.”
SKELLY
“It most certainly is not!”
Panel 4
Skelly, his panel colored dark and ominously, peers directly at the viewer. A tiny CLICK sound effect can be seen on the panel towards the right side.
SKELLY
“Foolish girl! You know not what forces, great and terrible, your carelessness threatens to unleash.”
“Locked away within that bracelet is a powerful curse that has brought low countless-”
Panel 5
Same perspective/focus on Skelly as seen in the prior panel. Now though Skelly wears a dumbfounded expression.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“Ooh! Fits like a glove!”
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Page Five
INT. - MacGuffin Room
Panel 1
Cat girl looking over herself and the fashionable bracelet now wrapped around her arm. Her tail flicking behind her excitedly.
CAT GIRL
“And it's comfy too! Gosh. I've never pawned off something this valuable before.”
Panel 2
Skelly looking completely flummoxed as he approaches the cat. Arms out at his sides as he pleads with her. His dialogue bubble completely overlapped by hers as she thinks aloud and drowns him out. Cat pinching at her chin with her free hand as she thinks.
CAT GIRL
“Hmm. Maybe I should get it appraised? Don't wanna be ripped off after all...”
Panel 3
Skelly looking incredibly flustered and frustrated as his dialogue bubble and repeated warnings continue to be drowned out and ignored. Clutching at the sides of his head and pulling out his nonexistent hair. Cat fiddling with the bracelet absentmindedly as she continues to ponder aloud.
CAT GIRL
“Probably shouldn't be walking around flaunting this then. Mmph. Darn thing doesn't wanna come off though.”
Panel 4
Cat walking towards the viewer and out of the chamber with her sack slung over her shoulder. Tossing a wave back to Skelly with a smile. In the background Skelly reaches out towards her quite panicked as her word bubble drowns him out one last time.
CAT GIRL
Oh well! I'll figure something out. Seeya Skelly!”
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Page Six
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Bird's eye view of a forest. Peering down at a clearing where cat girl can be seen reclining back against a tree and her sack of goodies is sprawled out beside her.
Panel 2
Zoom in of cat girl resting in the shade of the tree. A worried/pouty look can be seen on her face as she continues to fiddle with the bracelet. Rustling noises/sound effects can be seen behind her.
CAT GIRL:
“Augh. Work with me here you stupid thing!”
“Tch. I wanted to sell you off not show you off. So much for my biggest bestest haul ever...”
Panel 3
Skelly, panting, stumbles into the scene. He is stuck through with twigs, leaves, and branches after having finally caught up with the cat. Cat looks back at him annoyed. Her brows flattened and furrowed.
SKELLY
“Excuse you! I'll have you know that 'stupid thing' was forged by none other than-”
CAT GIRL
“You again? Skelly, now's not a good time.”
Panel 4
Over the shoulder view of Skelly looking down at the grumpy cat. Skelly, just as annoyed as the cat is, knocks free and brushes off the various bits of forest debris that has accumulated on him.
SKELLY
“Yes, me again! You have something of mine and I would see you return it! Or at least that's what I'd like to say.”
Panel 5
Same point of view as prior panel. Cat girl extends her arm towards Skelly and dismissively shakes her hand. Skelly's expression has softened.
Skelly's dialogue bubble is cut off yet again. This time by an off panel bandit.
CAT GIRL
“You're welcome to try and take it.”
SKELLY
“*Sigh* If you would just listen to me I could finally explain that-”
BANDIT LEADER (OFF PANEL)
“Oh?”
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Page Seven
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Intro of bandit leader menacingly making their way into the clearing. Bandit has his hand resting on the pommel of the sword hanging from his hip.
BANDIT LEADER
“Well then. I'd be more than happy to oblige.”
Panel 2
Cat rises to her feet wary and nervous and with her bitty knife drawn. Tree at her back and unaware of the shadows creeping up behind her through the brush. Skelly just completely exasperated and sick of one interruption after another. Bandit Leader is off panel but his shadow is cast over them.
Panel 3
Same perspective as prior panel. Bandits have successfully snuck up behind cat and disarmed her. Skelly looking back at Cat shocked and alarmed.
BANDIT LEADER
“Come now, don't you worry. Me n' my boys will gladly take that treasure off yer hands.”
CAT GIRL
“H-hey!”
Panel 4
Bandit leader on left side of the panel and Skelly on the right. Skelly, a hand raised and finger held up in a tutting manner, confronts him. The Bandit leader tucks his chin against his chest and peers down at Skelly rather unimpressed.
SKELLY
“Impudent mortal! Your unfettered greed shall be your undoing!”
Panel 5
Bandit leader rears back one of his arms while Skelly keeps talking. Bandit leader's expression remains unchanged. Skelly's eyes are closed rather haughtily as he settles into his monologue.
SKELLY
“Ruins, not riches, await you! Forged by the great wizard Scoodles he decreed that whomever foolishly saw fit to don that bracelet would be cursed to-”
Panel 6
Bandit Leader uppercuts Skelly's skull clean off his body. Yet again, the Bandit Leader's expression is still unchanged. Skelly's hand, which was previously holding up a finger in a tutting position, droops in response.
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Page Eight
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Close up view of Bandit leader as he approaches the viewer with a malicious swagger in his step. His sword drawn and propped up against his shoulder.
BANDIT LEADER
“As I was sayin...”
Panel 2 & Panel 3
Panel 2 and 3 look like a single panel split into two for the sake of capturing action lines. Scene would be low angle shot looking up at Cat girl as the other bandits grab at her arms and drag her back towards the tree she was previously resting against.
Panel 2 specifically would show some action lines showing where Skelly's skull lands against the ground. Skelly's skull would then roll forward into Panel 3.
Panel 3 would show Skelly's skull, with very dizzy eyes, coming to a rest near Cat girl's feet. Cat girl looking very frowny as she kicks her legs.
BANDIT LEADER
“Since you were so kind to offer.”
Panel 4
Side view of Cat as she is being tied to the tree by rope by the other bandits. Bandit Leader standing before her as he rests a foot against the cat's sack of goodies. Skelly's body can be seen in the background grabbing confusedly at where its head once was. Cat has cheeks puffed out and is quite clearly mad.
BANDIT LEADER
“What's yours is ours now.”
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Page Nine
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Side view of the clearing. On the left side of the panel the Bandit Leader kicks roughly at the sack to force the various treasures to spill out. The other bandits, having finished tying up Cat Girl, walk over and start to rummage through them. Cat Girl, along with Skelly's head, are on the far right side of the panel can only watch. Cat girl angrily trying to wiggle free as she tries to shout something. Her word bubble getting drowned out by the Bandit Leader's as he ignores her.
BANDIT LEADER
“You two. C'mere.”
Panel 2
Bandit Leader looks back over his shoulder at the other bandits as they take stock of Cat girl's various treasures. One of the bandits can be seen behind him holding up the trousers, with potions hanging from it, curiously. The other squinting and poking warily at a pair of dentures.
BANDIT LEADER
“Sort out the goods from the garbage. I'll be tendin' to our gracious guest here in the meantime.”
Panel 3
Top-down view of Cat girl and Skelly's head. Almost like the viewer is looking down from among the tree branches. Cat girl very upset, as she struggles to get her arms free, while Skelly looks up at her with his eyes half-lidded in annoyance.
CAT GIRL
“You can't do that! I yoinked that stuff fair and square!”
Panel 4
Low-angle view from behind Skelly's head as he looks up at Cat girl. A worried expression on her face as she looks to him for help as she has managed to get her arms free and she fumbles with the ropes to no avail. A little teardrop can be seen on the back of Skelly's head.
In the background one of the bandits can be resting his hands on his hips and shaking his butt as he tries on the trousers and looks over himself approvingly. The other is kneeling before the sack of treasure and chucking stuff out over his shoulder. The various treasures bonking against Skelly's body which is holding its arms up trying to shield itself from the barrage of garbage.
Bandit Leader's shadow is also seen on the grass/in the background to indicate he is approaching.
CAT GIRL
“Skelly, what do we do?”
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Page Ten
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat girl has alarmed look on her face as Bandit Leader's huge hand grabs her arm, the one with the bracelet on it, and slams it back against the tree. Skelly looking up at her scared as he starts to grasp the severity of the situation. The rest of the Bandit Leader is off screen.
BANDIT LEADER (OFF PANEL)
“Fer starters...”
Panel 2
Closeup view of Bandit Leader showing just his head and shoulders. The sun is behind his head and casts him in shadow which serves to obscure his eyes. A wide and wicked toothy grin shines through the darkness cast upon his face. Over his shoulder, far in the background, Skelly's body can be seen holding its hands up to where its head would be in fear.
BANDIT LEADER
“You can make good on that offer of yours.”
Panel 3
Note: Panel 3 and 4 will be side by side so it gives off the impression the Cat and Bandit Leader are locked in a stare down with one another.
Side view of Cat girl angrily furrowing her brows and biting her lip as she looks to the right. Bandit Leader's huge arm and hand can be seen painfully squeezing/gripping her arm with the bracelet on it. She pushes back and sinks her nails into his huge limb with her free hand to no effect.
CAT GIRL
“Fat chance! Even if I wanted it to this stupid thing isn't coming off! Not like this and not for you!”
Panel 4
Side view of Bandit Leader leader cracking a cheeky grin as he looks to the left at Cat Girl in Panel 3.
Panel 5
Similar perspective as Panel 2. Bandit Leader raises his sword up with his free hand and it glistens as the sun's rays catch upon it. In the background the two henchmen, one dressed rather silly and now wearing the dentures while the other looks up from the sack of garbage, can be seen with faint exclamation marks over their heads as they look to the Bandit Leader. Or, more specifically, what's rushing towards him.
In the bottom right corner is a small insert panel showing Cat Girl with scared/fearful expression.
BANDIT LEADER
“Well not with that attitude it ain't.”
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Page Eleven
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1: Close up shot of Bandit Leader knocked forward, with lots of action lines, by Skelly's body tackling into the Bandit Leader's back. Bandit Leader completely blindsided and surprised.
SKELLY
“Oh stuff it you arrogant oaf.”
Panel 2
Bandit Leader has his back to the viewer. Skelly's body clings to his back and hangs on his sword swishing arm forcing the Bandit Leader to let go of Cat Girl. Bandit Leader angrily fumbling with the skeleton body in the meantime. Past his shoulder we can see the Cat Girl, still tied up to the tree, beaming down at Skelly's skull with a smile. Skelly's skull sporting a dour and serious expression as he looks towards the Bandit.
CAT GIRL
“Skelly! You saved me!”
SKELLY
“Hardly. I've but delayed the inevitable.”
Panel 3
Bird's eye view of the clearing looking down on the ridiculous scene taking place. The other bandits stumbling towards the Bandit Leader as he fumbles with Skelly's body.
SKELLY
“Yet... that might be enough. Because if you are to have any hope of getting out of this mess you need to LISTEN.”
Panel 4
Zoom in of Bandit Leader, absolutely enraged, while his henchmen try to tug Skelly off of him. As the Bandit Leader tries to say something Skelly's body can be seen literally stuffing the Bandit Leader's word bubble back in his face. The word bubble can be seen smooshed up against the side of the Bandit Leader's head so that for once Skelly can get a word in.
SKELLY
“Locked within that bracelet is a terrible curse. One that has flattened kingdoms and brought low civilizations.”
Panel 5
Cat Girl wearing a serious expression as she lets Skelly speak uninterrupted.
SKELLY
“And if you are to survive to see another day you're going to have to call upon it.”
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Page Twelve
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Zoom in of Skelly's skull on the grass, wind whistling by as leaves and branches tumble past, as he finally gives his long awaited monologue.
SKELLY
“Promising salvation one moment it sunders those selfsame hopes the very next. Indifferent to intentions it brings low any and all without a care for caution. Once taken it can never be returned. Such is the power the great wizard Scoodles saw fit to tempt you with!”
Panel 2
Point of view is right behind Cat Girl's head and looking over her shoulder. Cat girl holding up her bruised arm with the bracelet and peering curiously at it as it brims with magic. Bandit Leader can be seen before her SLAMMING Skelly's body to the ground.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Invoke his name and claim his power. Before you shall your friends and foes cower!”
Panel 3
Similar view as prior panel. Cat Girl looking down and to her left, at Skelly's off panel head, as Bandit Leader stomps towards her. Skelly's body cartoonishly flails as it is trampled underfoot by the Bandit Leader and his henchmen.
CAT GIRL
“I do what now?”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Augh... just. Just repeat after me.”
“Scoodles hear my beck and call. So that I may rise and these bandits may fall.”
Panel 4
Bandit Leader crashes his huge hand against the tree, bark splintering off, as he pins Cat Girl's arm to the tree and lifts his sword up. Cat Girl's tail puffs out as her eyes go wide. Skelly's skull off panel.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Any time now!
CAT GIRL
“S-scoodles! Hear my hecking call! So I can claim my prize and make these bandits bawl!”
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Page Thirteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat girl looks to the bracelet as it glows bright and arcs of energy trickle out from it. The energy coiling around her limbs and up along her neck.
Panel 2
Cat Girl clenches her eyes shut as the arcs of magic ripple across her face and start to blow back her hair.
Panel 3
Cat Girl flicks her eyes open, now aglow, with a confident expression.
Panel 4
Side view of Cat Girl and Bandit Leader. Cat Girl now wearing a confident/cocky expression as she locks eyes with the Bandit Leader. Problem is... she is all of a few inches taller albeit now glowy. Bandit Leader has flattened his brows and still looks mighty pissed off.
Panel 5
Exact same view as Panel 4. Cat Girl's ears droop and her confident smile falters as a nervous sweat bead appears on her head. Bandit Leader with the exact same expression except now he has reared his sword swinging arm back. Skelly speaks from off panel.
SKELLY
“OH FOR.”
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Page Fourteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Back of Skelly's head facing the viewer. Both Cat Girl and and Bandit Leader giving him a side eye as he speaks.
SKELLY
“You are calling down the power of the greatest wizard this realm has ever known! Say it like you mean it, come on!”
Panel 2
Note: Show arcs of energy crackling between Panel 2 and Panel 3
Zoom in of Cat Girl's face. In the reflection of her eyes gone wide a sword can be seen swinging towards her as Bandit Leader is quite clearly done and over with their shenanigans.
CAT GIRL
“S-scoodles hear my beck and call!”
Panel 3
Side view of Cat Girl and Bandit Leader. Cat Girl BWOOMPHS and dramatically swells in size as the ropes that were tied around her explode off of her. She suddenly finds herself standing head and shoulders above the Bandit Leader as she catches the wrist of his sword swinging hand in her palm. A relieved expression can be seen on her face. Bandit Leader is surprised and thrown a little off balance as the bracelet clad arm he was clutching before is now spilling out of his grasp.
SKELLY
“There you go!”
Panel 4
Bandit Henchmen have their backs to the viewer as they back away. Before them, Cat Girl still can be seen still glowing and brimming with power as she grows still. Cat Girl having flipped the tables as she holds/hoists up the Bandit Leader by one hand with a beaming and very kitty-like grin. Skelly's skull can be seen in the corner of the background by her feet.
CAT GIRL
“So that I may rise...”
SKELLY
“Great. Good.”
Panel 5
View of clearing from above. The Bandit Henchmen and Skelly's body are swallowed up in the shadow of the growing and off-panel Cat Girl. The Bandit Henchmen can be seen hugging each other worriedly. Skelly's body is shaking its hands to implore her to stop stop stop. Skelly's skull is off frame.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“And these bandits may fall!”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“A-alright. Now might be a good time to rein it in just a little bit...”
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Page Fifteen
EXT. - Forest & Forest Clearing
The entire page would be a single picture of the surrounding forest landscape, broken up into multiple panels, for the sake of showing Cat Girl's growth. Cat Girl can be seen rising up into the sky, towering over the page, as her head and shoulders crash up and through multiple panels. Chunks and shards of the panels tumble down around her.
CAT GIRL
“Grant me power!”
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Page Sixteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Bandit Leader dangling in mid air, sweating bullets, as he looks down at the clearing so very far below. A vertigo inducing perspective for him and the viewer as Cat Girl's huge fingers can be seen pinching his arm.
Panel 2
Bandit Leader, his back to the viewer, can be seen dangling before the Cat Girl's massive face. His tail hanging limp as her face nearly fills the entirety of the panel.
Cat Girl essentially having become the >:3 face incarnate.
CAT GIRL
“What's mine is yours, huh?”
Panel 3
Side view of Cat Girl peering down at the bitty Bandit Leader with a smug grin on her face while he laughs and wiggles nervously.
BANDIT LEADER
“I-it was meant more as a suggestion than anythin' else, honest!”
Panel 4
Bird's eye view of the Bandit Henchmen on the ground. Dipping to their knees they hurriedly shovel back in the various treasures they had chucked out of Cat Girl's treasure sack. The Henchman who had played dress up desperately tries to take off the pants he stole.
Panel 5
Exact same point of view and perspective as Panel 4. The shading is significantly darker now as Cat Girl's shadow reaches towards them. Both of the Henchmen frozen in place in fear. One can be seen stuffing garbage back into the sack while the other has those pants, with the potion vials still dangling from the waist, pooled around his ankles. Cat Girl speaks from off panel.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“Was it now?”
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Page Seventeen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat Girl, crouching low and allowing for a copious shot of her cleavage, reaches a huge hand out towards the viewer. The Henchmen in the foreground panicking and trying to crawl away towards the viewer as she does so.
CAT GIRL
“Funny thing, that!”
Panel 2
Closeup of Cat Girl's hand as she grabs the Henchmen. The both of them cartoonishly squeaking/puffing out as she gently squeezes them.
Panel 3
Low angle view of Cat Girl's broad face, and breasts, as she holds her hands before her. Peering down past her chest she smirks at the bad guys in tow. In one hand she holds/squeezes the Bandit Leader and in the other she holds the Henchmen. Both the Bandit Leader and the Henchmen have their backs to the viewers.
CAT GIRL
“Because I have a suggestion for you too!”
Panel 4
Perspective is from Cat Girl's eyes. Looking out over her breasts, which fill the foreground of the panel as if we are looking over them, and at her hands held up before her. The Bandit Leader and Henchmen that are squeezed within her grasp warily side eye one other.
BANDIT LEADER
“An' what might that be? I-if you dun mind us askin?”
Panel 5
Note: Panel 5 and 6 will be side by side so it gives off the impression that Cat Girl is hurling the Bandits from one panel into another.
Perspective is bird's eye view looking down on Cat Girl. Eyes half lidded, Cat Girl hurls her arm up and right towards Panel 6. Action lines shooting out from her blurred hand.
Panel 6
Zoom in of Bandit Leader and Henchmen as motion blur lines rush past them. The Bandits looking up and to the right as their cheeks and hair blown back by the wind as they are hurtled upwards at ludicrous speed.
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Page Eighteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Point of view from among the clouds as Bandit Leader and his henchmen flail about in mid-air. Their expressions one of alarm and dread as the Henchmen swat and try to cling on to low hanging clouds. Cat Girl can be seen leaping up below them as she makes ready to uppercut them.
CAT GIRL
“Get lost.”
Panel 2
Side view of Bandit Leader and Henchmen pressing against Cat Girl's fist as clouds rush past.
Panel 3
A carbon copy of Panel 2 just with silly amounts of motion blur to show the Bandits are about to blast off.
Panel 4
View of Cat Girl from behind as she holds her arm up high and sunlight shines down upon her. Action lines explode off of Cat Girl's fist as the bandits are sent blasting off into the sky, and through quite a few clouds, with a twinkle.
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Page Nineteen
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Cat Girl lands back down in the clearing with a cacophonous THOOM. Trees rustling and jettisoning out of the ground as she wears a satisfied smile on her face.
Panel 2
Skelly's body fumbles for Skelly's skull as its grip on it falters during Cat Girl's meteoric landing. Cat Girl's towering legs can be seen behind him in the background.
Panel 3
Skelly, facing the viewer, puts his skull back on his body. Straightening it even as he sports a very nervous expression and looks nervous about speaking with Cat Girl again. Cat Girl drops to her hands and knees, showing off plenty of boobage, as she smiles down at him.
CAT GIRL
“Skelly! That was amazing!”
SKELLY
“That's certainly one word for it.”
Panel 4
Close-up of Cat Girl face, happy as can be, as she continues chatting him up.
CAT GIRL
“A super special treasure that makes me grow with the right magic words? Psh and here I was thinking about selling it! Now what are the magic words that make me shrink?”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Uhhh...”
Panel 5
Same close-up of Cat Girl face. Her happy expression remains but a pallor, lots of shadows, have fallen over her eyes as Skelly delivers an answer she doesn't want to hear.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“T-there aren't any.”
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Page Twenty
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Skelly, facing the viewer, rubs at the back of his neck with one hand while he swishes the other about his wrist. Very very nervously explaining himself in the shadow of Cat Girl.
SKELLY
“I mean I did kind of sort of warn you.”
Panel 2
Same point of view as Panel 1. Skelly weakly shrugging as he tosses his hands out to his sides.
SKELLY
“Once taken it can never be returned? Such is the power the great wizard Scoodles saw fit to tempt you with?”
Panel 3
Same point of view as both Panel and Panel 2. Difference is a giant set of Cat Girl fingers now fill the panel and can be seen pinching Skelly's head between them. Skelly's head is completely obscured by those fuzzy fingers. His arms hang limply at his sides as he just accepts what is happening to him.
SKELLY
“Why do I bother.”
Panel 4
Cat Girl puffs out her cheeks, her visage and bust filling the panel, as she frowns at the speck sized Skelly skull that has since been plucked off of his body. Skelly's skull sweating bullets.
CAT GIRL
“You're saying I'm stuck like this?!”
SKELLY
“B-better to be big than buried!”
Panel 5
Close up of Skelly's skull as he is cartoonishly mooshed between her fingertips.
SKELLY
“And s-surely a daring dungeon crawler like yourself can recognize that there's no greater treasure to be had than one's own health and happiness?”
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Page Twenty-One
EXT. - Forest Clearing
Panel 1
Zoom in of Cat Girl, still on her hand(s) and knees, squints at Skelly as she flares her nostrils. His skull, trembling in fear, is pinched between two fingers held up before her.
Panel 2
Cat Girl harrumphs and droops her ears. Skelly's skull heaves a sigh of relief.
Panel 3
Cat Girl's expression softens as she takes to rolling Skelly's skull about her palm. The feline giantess sitting down in the clearing with a THOOM. Her big butt and thighs bulldozing apart trees that barely come up past her waist as she sits down.
One hand is held up before her while the other rests on the ground beside her. Skelly's body can be seen in the foreground wiping the brow of the head that is no longer upon its shoulders.
A very tiny 'CRNCH' sound effect can be seen alongside Cat Girl's hand resting on the ground.
CAT GIRL
“This wasn't what I had in mind for my biggest bestest haul ever but... I'll take it.”
Panel 4
Bust shot of Cat Girl. Her eyes lighting up with twinkles/sparkles as she balls her fists and brings them up to her cheeks. Skelly's skull can be seen peeking up over some of her fingers as he is now squeezed within her grasp.
CAT GIRL
“And it's not like it was a total wash! I still have the rest of my record breaking haul to turn in!”
Panel 5
Similar perspective as Panel 4. Cat Girl turns her head down towards the ground with the intent of gazing upon her haul. A very kitty-like :3 smile on her face as Skelly looks along with her.
Panel 6
Zoom in of Cat Girl's hand being lifted up off the ground. Within the huge hand print shaped crater left in its wake is an utterly demolished sack of treasure that lies imprinted and half buried in the dirt. Torn to shreds and the rest of her gathered treasure teased at earlier on in the comic now lies in pieces.
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Page Twenty-Two
EXT. - Forest
Panel 1
Note: Panel 1 will be shaking/wobbling out of place from Cat Girl yelling.
Panoramic view of the forest. Trees shaking and flocks of bird flying up into the air as Cat Girl voices her frustration. Her very frustrated and angry word bubble practically filling the entirety of the sky.
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“SCOOOOOOOOOOODLES!”
Panel 2
Ground-level, almost worm's eye view, of Cat Girl lumbering towards the viewer. Her huge feet looking like they're about to step down upon us. Shoulders hunched, fists balled up, and a frown on her face as she stomps through the forest very agitated. Skelly's body can be seen diving out of the way of her footfalls. Skelly's skull is tucked into her fist and his word bubbles filter out from between her fingertips.
SKELLY
“H-hey! Hey! Where do you think you're going!?”
CAT GIRL
“Where do you think? I'm gonna go find me a wizard!”
Panel 3
Another ground-level, worm's eye view, of Cat Girl from behind. Looking up up up at her heels and backside as Skelly's body chases after her. Arms out before it as it stumbles and tries to keep pace with her massive strides.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Come now, don't be ridiculous! Do you even know where to start?!”
CAT GIRL
“No. But I bet you sure do!”
Panel 4
Another panoramic view, looking on down from among the clouds, of the gargantuan Cat Girl stomping through the forest.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Why is this my problem to fix?! You're the one who stole the bracelet! You're the one who ignored my warnings!”
CAT GIRL
“Don't you try and talk your way out of this! You're gonna help me find that mean old wizard and make him fix this!”
Panel 5
Pan up to the sky and the clouds. A beautiful sunshiney day capping off Cat Girl and Skelly's new adventure together.
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“Augh...”
CAT GIRL (OFF PANEL)
“No take backsies!”
SKELLY (OFF PANEL)
“AUUUUUGH.”
FIN
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