In New York City, Chaz was chilling out as he was sipping his drink.
Chaz: *thinking* I honestly didn’t expect I haven’t been visit this place
before. But I hope no one bothers me with discovering I was a shark
from another world.
For several minutes, when Chaz finishes sipping his drink, he throws
it away in the New York City trash can. Chaz sensed and noticed that
a girl named Samantha was strolling on the sidewalk, caught him to
be mesmerized by Samantha's eyes but she didn’t notice Chaz was
there.
Chaz: *thinking* Wow, what an attractive girl!
Chaz snapped out himself from being captivated by Samantha with
her eyes, he wonders what his plan should do now.
Chaz: *grin with motivated look* Now's my chance to marry this girl.
Chaz: *thinking* I honestly didn’t expect I haven’t been visit this place
before. But I hope no one bothers me with discovering I was a shark
from another world.
For several minutes, when Chaz finishes sipping his drink, he throws
it away in the New York City trash can. Chaz sensed and noticed that
a girl named Samantha was strolling on the sidewalk, caught him to
be mesmerized by Samantha's eyes but she didn’t notice Chaz was
there.
Chaz: *thinking* Wow, what an attractive girl!
Chaz snapped out himself from being captivated by Samantha with
her eyes, he wonders what his plan should do now.
Chaz: *grin with motivated look* Now's my chance to marry this girl.
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Pardon me, I will deal with borrowing greatwhiteshark1993's dialogues because she had already commented you. So, I will correcting this greatwhiteshark1993's dialogues into the better one for your comic.
Here’s an idea dialogue from below:
In New York City, Chaz was chilling out as he was sipping his drink.
Chaz: *thinking* I honestly didn’t expect I haven’t been visit this place before. But I hope no one bothers me with discovering I was a shark from another world.
For several minutes, when Chaz finishes sipping his drink, he throws it away in the New York City trash can. Chaz sensed and noticed that a girl named Samantha was strolling on the sidewalk, caught him to be mesmerized by Samantha's eyes but she didn’t notice Chaz was there.
Chaz: *thinking* Wow, what an attractive girl?!
Chaz snapped out himself from being captivated by Samantha with her eyes, he wonders what his plan should do now.
Chaz: *grin with motivated look* Okay, it was my chance.
Here’s an idea dialogue from below:
In New York City, Chaz was chilling out as he was sipping his drink.
Chaz: *thinking* I honestly didn’t expect I haven’t been visit this place before. But I hope no one bothers me with discovering I was a shark from another world.
For several minutes, when Chaz finishes sipping his drink, he throws it away in the New York City trash can. Chaz sensed and noticed that a girl named Samantha was strolling on the sidewalk, caught him to be mesmerized by Samantha's eyes but she didn’t notice Chaz was there.
Chaz: *thinking* Wow, what an attractive girl?!
Chaz snapped out himself from being captivated by Samantha with her eyes, he wonders what his plan should do now.
Chaz: *grin with motivated look* Okay, it was my chance.
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