Now that's more like it

Yup, she taught him a lesson.

Doubt it will stick, he still kept shamelessly hitting on Moxxie and Millie despite what he did, not sure what he did to Moxxie exactly for them to break up but it was enough to where she would go as far as kill him

I don't know what he did to Millie either. It's quite
unknown. It's a shame that Chaz is dead, thanks
to Crimson who killed him after hearing the truth
from Blitzo with a silent o. But I don't how did he
kill him.

You may think its a shame but even if Blitzø didn't reveal that, Crimson still would have found out, the idiot didn't even check beforehand if Chaz had money before trying to get him and his son engaged

Yes that's true. He's super poor and a phony. I
can see Moxxie and Millie don't like Chaz because
he's super annoying.

Couldn't have put it better myself

On the other hand, I like his singing voice. Not
too shabby. All I need is dialogues.

Ah of course

Nice job! c:

Thanks.

*Takes a deep breath* Okay, I’ll leave it to me as I will borrow your friend’s dialogue that had already been commented on. So I will make a refinement of the dialogue to be a half different grammar.


Here’s an idea dialogue from below:


Meanwhile, Samantha was continuing to stroll on the sidewalk but Chaz appeared at the front of her, much to Saamantha’s startled.

Chaz: Hello, miss.

Samantha: Ah?!! Wh-Who are you? Where did you come from?

Chaz: The name’s Chazwick Thurman, but everyone called me “Chaz” in the short name. I’m from another world.

Chaz gives Samantha a hand kiss after finish introducing himself. Samantha was more shocked in a speechless look as she hadn't heard that Chaz was from another world.

Samantha: Hmm, it’s.. nice to meet you. I'm Samantha Powers.

Chaz starts to seduce her with his own singing just like what he did for Moxxie and Millie, Samantha is listening to Chaz’s song but she has no words, and Chaz kisses Samantha at the end of the song, causing her more shock than before. After Chaz finishes kissing Samantha, she is annoyed as she knows what he is singing after their first meeting.

Chaz: So.. Samantha?

Samantha: Yes, What is it?

Chaz: Will you marry me?

Samantha: *shocked in annoyance* ARE YOU SERIOUS?!!

Chaz was shocked to see she was more furious than before, and Samantha willingly declined his marriage all the sudden, and began to strike with beating him up powerfully.

Samantha: In your dreams, I already have a boyfriend! If you want to marry someone, then marry this!!!

Shuichi heard a scream from across the street, he ran to the way before found out that it was Samantha, the one who screamed across the street, and he was shocked to see what she did to Chaz.

Shuichi: *gasp* Samantha?!!

Samantha heard Shuichi’s voice. Shuichi runs toward Samantha and asks if she is alright.

Shuichi: Are you okay? I heard your screams and thought you were in trouble.

Samantha: Don’t worry, everything is fine. That crazy shark just tried to hit me, but I was able to stand up against him, and gave it a proper go-ahead.

Shuichi: Oh, thank goodness. But now that we've met, what do you say if we go for frozen yogurt? I offer.

Samantha: Hmm, what a brilliant idea. Let's go.

Samantha and Shuichi leave to get a frozen yogurt, and Chaz was unconscious for several minutes.

Well done.

Thank you! ^^

You're welcome.

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