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Just got done reading Pages 6 and 7. You built up the tension / conflict quite well. We have Spike feeling quite anxious after Cuddle Heart got him all ready to begin his stay in Magic Kindergarten. Now he is being introduced to his new roommate who, quite clearly, does not want him, or anyone, to share a dorm room with her.
Will Spike's dedication to fulfilling the wishes of Twilight empower him to make the first move towards friendship with the grumpy Goldigony, or will Goldy decide to give him a chance since, unlike previous roommates she had been introduced to, Spike is a dragon and meeting a fellow dragon is something that makes her feel more open to trying to make friends with him?
Definitely a lot of great story building to get to this point. It will be exciting to see how, or if, Spike and Goldy will be able to become friends.
Will Spike's dedication to fulfilling the wishes of Twilight empower him to make the first move towards friendship with the grumpy Goldigony, or will Goldy decide to give him a chance since, unlike previous roommates she had been introduced to, Spike is a dragon and meeting a fellow dragon is something that makes her feel more open to trying to make friends with him?
Definitely a lot of great story building to get to this point. It will be exciting to see how, or if, Spike and Goldy will be able to become friends.
Thanks for thinking that Yosh. I'm doing my best to develop a decent story here. I have to admit that I'm doing almost everything on the go without a long term plan for the comic, because in reality I have no idea how many pages or how long I will be able to work on it before stressing too much or something.
It sounds like you have a very good plan for doing your comic. Stressing over making it a certain way, so many pages, etc. is no fun and takes away from the experience of sharing your art in a fun, comic style. Just let the story write itself as you go about creating pages and do not worry when it stops. Keep having a good time giving us all a deeper look into Goldigony and Spike's relationship in their journey towards friendship and I am certain you will succeed regardless of how, or when, it may end. :)
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