Shimmering winds softly speak
what we find, what we seek
faith in magic, belief in trust
shows whats fair, whats unjust
A month, a day, maybe a year
or maybe upon an autumn tear
we'll find the moon, and the sun
and be immortal, and be one
We are immortal
faithful fateful
we are final
we are one
we are one
Leaves fly away
sinful to stay
but we need them not
for we won't leave this spot
drift away into the sun
with thoughts of none
fade away
as we stay
oneI saw a piece of artwork called "Immortality" by
tanidareal at Confuzzled this year and I just couldn't help but be utterly inspired. I wrote the lyrics and the song on the way home and here's the result. :]You can check out the amazing artwork too here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8112146/
Special guest (with many thanks)
lilypad as the lead singer.
Song, lyrics, Piano and Orchestra by myself.
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Category Music / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.63 MB
Email me at keyboardfox[at]hotmail.co.uk with your details and I shall get it for you ^^
This is easily the most beautiful thing I've ever heard.
Well done, Fox, and well done Lilypad. I'm lost for words... Like
LtDalius said, it's like the soundtrack to an epic story...
Well done, Fox, and well done Lilypad. I'm lost for words... Like
LtDalius said, it's like the soundtrack to an epic story...
I am near speechless, brought to tears and weak in my knees. Lilypad has an ethereal voice, pure and moving. Such power in every note that it told a story I could see unfolding with each word. Well written, well played, well sung. I am in tears here. So soothing.
I did say NEAR speechless, I had to tell you what it made me feel
Well done you guys, well done indeed and I will say Lilypad is truly a keeper
I did say NEAR speechless, I had to tell you what it made me feel
Well done you guys, well done indeed and I will say Lilypad is truly a keeper
This is AMAZING!! i want to take this and put it in a movie!! your so amazing!! my boyfriend was playing it on his computer and i totally thought it was on Pandora and was a soundtrack song or a new release! I mentioned "Dude, why can't Disney songs sound like this..." and he laughed and told me to come here! I can't believe you actually made this! SOooooo awesome! you have some real talent! keep up the amazing work!!
Wow, wonderful, wonderful imagery comes to mind listening to this. fantastic song, and a fantastic job Lily, and Fox.
(As usual, I run out of good descriptors with your work, both of you. This could easily be a movie theme.)
TM.
(I'll have to wait until Thursday to have TL my wife listen to this one. That's our anniversary.)
(As usual, I run out of good descriptors with your work, both of you. This could easily be a movie theme.)
TM.
(I'll have to wait until Thursday to have TL my wife listen to this one. That's our anniversary.)
Am I going to be the only one with a bit of criticism?
*cowers and dodges the rotten tomatoes from everyone else*
All kidding aside, this is beautiful, Fox. Dynamic, full of emotion. Your soloist is right on with her interpretation.
The only problem I heard was the rhythmic placement of some of the words. For example, the lines "for we won't leave this spot... drift away into the sun" didn't feel natural in the way they came out with the accents of the melody (i.e. the melodic accents seemed to be placed on incorrect syllables, resulting in awkward-sounding syllable emphasis).
*cowers and dodges the rotten tomatoes from everyone else*
All kidding aside, this is beautiful, Fox. Dynamic, full of emotion. Your soloist is right on with her interpretation.
The only problem I heard was the rhythmic placement of some of the words. For example, the lines "for we won't leave this spot... drift away into the sun" didn't feel natural in the way they came out with the accents of the melody (i.e. the melodic accents seemed to be placed on incorrect syllables, resulting in awkward-sounding syllable emphasis).
I'm not musician but I witness a some stages as it was created, it is really powerful piece of music foxy puts lots of emotions and feelings into this piece, what it is really nicely reflected, however it is hard to ask the singer feel same way or fully understand the the driving force behind the song. what might often results it misplaced emphasis as the singer need interpret melody by himself.
I did find this fenomen in few of his songs, but this one particular I have not notice it until you mention it. Maybe should ask him also for non lyric version too.
I did find this fenomen in few of his songs, but this one particular I have not notice it until you mention it. Maybe should ask him also for non lyric version too.
This is without a doubt your best song featuring full lyrics!
And yeah,
lilypad has an amazing voice.
And yeah,
lilypad has an amazing voice.
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