Susan's Reviews > Billie Jean

Re-read July 2023
I love this short.

Niall has been with Dan for 6 months now. And everything seems to be going really well. It looks like gruff cop Dan is the perfect boyfriend. Loving, considerate, and totally into Niall. But will he still be into Niall when he finds out Niall likes to wear sexy lingerie...?

What a wonderful short!. I absolutely loved Niall. He was such an awesome character. I loved everything about him. He had such a way with words, just amazing.

And although he’s mostly a top, we’ve both had a go at aiming the drill.


Next morning, he sees me off with a lingering grope ’n kiss, and I end up with a close to fifteen-inch hard-on.


We pull up to his house, and I prepare myself for being protected from potential criminal elements— hiding in bushes and dark corners. A blade of grass out of place there, Dan, better check it out! I scrutinise my man (his backside) as he checks the house over moodily, with his badass walk, then beckons me in.

I loved how sweet gruff cop Dan was with Niall. How he made him feel special by doing little things. Niall was all sass, but deep down he was so insecure. He needed a boyfriend like Dan, who took care of him.

And I was also thrilled we got some lovely hurt/comfort when (view spoiler)[ Niall got kidnapped (hide spoiler)]! This all made me so happy.

This duo always knows how to suck me in. I just love their writing.
I cannot express my love for this book enough.