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The VaDorok (The Mate Index, #1)
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Needs editing, otherwise awesome
So I waited to read this one figuring that the next edition would be edited, but either it wasn't finished or done at all. I found 15 instances of missing or duplicate words, 14 spelling errors and 10 spots where the sentence structure needed working to make it sensible. There were some other minor issues with the story continuity or subplots that could have easily been left out.
On the positive note: I have read stories about many diverse alien species, but never a cross between a dragon, cat and yeti. It made for some very interesting observations. Vidok and Sara are flawed as any of us are, but determined to make things work. The world building was phenomenal, such detail has been put into the book which should pay off as the series progresses. I would give this a 4.5 stars if the proofreading/editing is accomplished.
So I waited to read this one figuring that the next edition would be edited, but either it wasn't finished or done at all. I found 15 instances of missing or duplicate words, 14 spelling errors and 10 spots where the sentence structure needed working to make it sensible. There were some other minor issues with the story continuity or subplots that could have easily been left out.
On the positive note: I have read stories about many diverse alien species, but never a cross between a dragon, cat and yeti. It made for some very interesting observations. Vidok and Sara are flawed as any of us are, but determined to make things work. The world building was phenomenal, such detail has been put into the book which should pay off as the series progresses. I would give this a 4.5 stars if the proofreading/editing is accomplished.
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May 21, 2019
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May 21, 2019
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May 23, 2019
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