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Red City (The New Alchemists, #1)
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Huge thanks to NetGalley & the publishers for this ARC! I’m so excited 🥹. All thoughts are my own!
« Wounded hearts with something to prove are always the ones who change the world. »
I want to start off by saying that there’s a lot of interesting aspects about this story - and I think it will be a win for a lot of people. I saw a lot of things coming, which didn’t alter my reading experience but the major pacing issues did. I kept snapping out of it and nothing *much* was happening.
I was underwhelmed. It made me feel like a history book I was obligated to read and not reading for fun. Around the 20% mark, I went and reread the synopsis… and I think it’s really on me but something was just missing.
The relationship between Sam and her mom was incredibly well depicted. Messy, hurtful and complicated mother-daughter relationship with a lot of generational trauma woven into it. Sam felt like a multidimensional character to me but Ari was a cardboard box. He was one dimensional and I think the story could’ve went on without his POV.
I read one of Marie Lu’s duology and I had loved it - in this one… the writing felt cold. The characters went on about everything - even while terrible things were happening - as if it wasn’t a big deal. I felt as disconnected as the characters.
It’s separated in 3 parts and I wanted to DNF in the first part so badly. I briefly got hooked in the second part when we got Connie’s POV and that made me realize that I simply didn’t care about the 2 MCs. The only highlights for me were Connie’s 2 POVs and Edward’s 1 POV.
Although marketed as adult, the writing was very YA (other than the few sex scenes). The romance between Sam & Will made me highly uncomfortable. He met her when she was 15 and they have a 9 years age gap. He tells her he wanted her for a long time and sincerely… no.
I think some aspects were well done, especially the grim-dark-depressing setting. But the story was hindered by too many things for me to fully enjoy this.
« You must always try your best. Work hard and reach for the stars. If you do, even the smallest of us can find a way out. »
« Wounded hearts with something to prove are always the ones who change the world. »
I want to start off by saying that there’s a lot of interesting aspects about this story - and I think it will be a win for a lot of people. I saw a lot of things coming, which didn’t alter my reading experience but the major pacing issues did. I kept snapping out of it and nothing *much* was happening.
I was underwhelmed. It made me feel like a history book I was obligated to read and not reading for fun. Around the 20% mark, I went and reread the synopsis… and I think it’s really on me but something was just missing.
The relationship between Sam and her mom was incredibly well depicted. Messy, hurtful and complicated mother-daughter relationship with a lot of generational trauma woven into it. Sam felt like a multidimensional character to me but Ari was a cardboard box. He was one dimensional and I think the story could’ve went on without his POV.
I read one of Marie Lu’s duology and I had loved it - in this one… the writing felt cold. The characters went on about everything - even while terrible things were happening - as if it wasn’t a big deal. I felt as disconnected as the characters.
It’s separated in 3 parts and I wanted to DNF in the first part so badly. I briefly got hooked in the second part when we got Connie’s POV and that made me realize that I simply didn’t care about the 2 MCs. The only highlights for me were Connie’s 2 POVs and Edward’s 1 POV.
Although marketed as adult, the writing was very YA (other than the few sex scenes). The romance between Sam & Will made me highly uncomfortable. He met her when she was 15 and they have a 9 years age gap. He tells her he wanted her for a long time and sincerely… no.
I think some aspects were well done, especially the grim-dark-depressing setting. But the story was hindered by too many things for me to fully enjoy this.
« You must always try your best. Work hard and reach for the stars. If you do, even the smallest of us can find a way out. »
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Aug 19, 2025 07:22AM
Excited for you bb! Can't wait for the review
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Sorry this one wasn’t a hit Maeghan 🥲 The age gap thing is a bit much, what does he mean he wanted her for a long time 🥴 Hopefully your next read is better! 🩷








