Quite nice, congrats

I summon all my front page magic to influence this competition!! I want front page 2 months in a row!!
EDIT: I WON! THANK YOU.
Special thanks to my friends Slobbery Knobbery and Ron Burgundy
For judges/entertainment:
I used row C2
1. Song is all in 4/4
2. Gb Major at 1:13 and 4:32
3. Triangles at 4:16 (Triangle cymbal and triangle synth wave so 2 triangles like Lara Croft's tits)
4. Flute at 3:26 and 4:32
5. Swing rhythm at 2:36 and 3:26
Quite nice, congrats
Very nice, this is really good stuff!
You can call me a pretty big metalhead, and im just fucking pleased. You got some good riffs, and you got a pretty slow,but accurate style, some doom and heavy influences, and you also got just a little folk influence there also. Also nice job with the mixing, it is a high quality hidden gem i just found here, and im glad i found it!
By the way,im also a metal "musician" though i didnt upload anything yet, maybe we can do something in the future? I would love to collab with you after hearing this.
Congrats for getting Frontpaged,you deserved it! And keep up the phenomenal work!
I appreciate the review and glad you dug it, man. I don't collab much but feel free to DM me some of your stuff and what you would like to do.
I like the call-and-response opening section. There are a lot of fun and catchy riffs in this piece, in fact. The progression is a little slow-paced, though. The first minute and a quarter or so felt like an intro to me. Production is pretty loud and clean. All of the guitars sound really distinct, although the drums don’t come through quite as well on some of the busier sections, especially 2:03. That said, I thought the melodies at 2:03 were great, and really help channel the energy of the piece. The vocal sample at 3:22 caught me by surprise a bit, but fits in well with the directionality of the piece. Nice job incorporating the flute, and I love the victorious mood in the texture at around the 4-minute mark. The transition at 4:16 was a tad sudden. Would’ve helped to let the sound fade a bit before completely shifting gears. The next section was quite mesmerizing, though, if a little out-of-character given the rest of the piece. The piece loses a bit of cohesion that way - almost makes it feel like a filler song on an album, meant to bridge the gap between two different styles of composition. Still, this is a strong piece. Nice job with the sound design, mastering, and melodic elements. Keep it up, Djt820!
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Satisfies bingo requirement?
.75/1
Composite score
8.75/10
I rarely get my music analyzed to this degree haha. I'm glad you dug the song and can appreciate your feedback. Its funny... I've gotten that "slow paced" comment a lot lately but I don't mind! I come from a doom metal background and the motto is "low and slow". If you ever explore doom metal, smoke a joint beforehand.
Melody is always important to me so I'm glad you liked that aspect.
Like my life, there is very little cohesion so your criticism is valid.
Thank you very much for the detailed review. This is why I like NG!
Pretty cool track! You kept it interesting all the way through and I could mention plenty of elements I liked such as the change to the swing feel and the main riff which sounds like classic Guns n Roses but the intro with the panned guitars and bass phrases was my favorite part.
Now that you mention GNR, I can hear me subliminally being influenced by them. Been listening to them a little more than usual lately. Good ear. Glad you dug it my man! That intro was fun to make! Thanks brother.
That guitars and bass sounds very good friend!, i like the two voice of the guitars at 2:05 part, i also like the anticipations in the swing parts. At 4:35 is very nice too, with that sweet melody of the guitar over the soft comp.
Excellent job, and good luck in the Bingo Contest !
And good luck to you too. Thanks for the detailed review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.