Neat story, and I liked the sound effects, styling for the papers, and the way the text moved upwards. The story was a little abstract for my tastes and it was hard to connect with the protagonist once they started remembering things (felt a little out of nowhere), but I think that's what you were going for. How the text jumped up and down a few pixels with every line also bugged me a little.
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<3 I’m really glad you noticed the paper styling! I spent a ridiculous amount of time creating the scroll effect. The sound effects were making me nervous, because my editing software is, uh, old school. More attention on editing the narrative might bring out the emotional end I was going for initially.
I thought I’d smoothed out the text jumping. That’s going back on my list of isdues to research.
Thank you so much for your feedback.