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GrizzledOldGamer96 days ago (1 edit) (-1)

I think that you are trying to be somewhat humorous with the writing. I can't stand this whiny little MC.

What is wrong with making "men" act like they might possibly be capable of producing testosterone?

"Hey kid, wanna take a bath?"

"Oh, gee, lady. You are related to somebody that I once met. I could NEVER let you see my pee-pee."

I'm not saying that he should have jumped in the tub, but could you at least use excuses that DON'T make it seem like he would rather have a cock in his ass? PLEASE?

MasterWuju96 days ago

Thank you for your comment. The main character's behavior varies depending on the situation. I try to add a touch of realism to the scenes. For example, imagine if you saw your childhood friend's aunt in a state of undress, and she was also saying provocative things. At the very least, you would feel confused, right? A little humor and realism and absurdity)))

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