I had to scroll about 4 miles down the perverts page to even see this game, but it is straight up the most interesting game with very little content I have played in years.
The translation is rough, I'm not gonna lie. Him, Her, He, She, and It are NOT usually interchangeable in conversation. At least not in English. And the script surrounding the branching paths are as problematic as in any other game. I appreciate all of the choices, but when I make a choice, the girl follows the choice; when your script continues on as if I had made a different choice it creates a logical paradox, plot hole, or decreases immersion. (The game 'College Kings' is an outstanding example of how choices, branching paths, and weak writers can turn a game from a treasure to trash.)
The rules for the game on Day 7 are all over the place. I got to use my "Joker" 3 times. I wasn't offered the Joker (even though I hadn't used it once yet) when I was offered to use my mind powers on Marc when Bao went to blow him. Elise gets to straight up tell Marc to stop fucking her before she cums in round 4 or 5, but why? Her cumming is her exit from the game, why would she be the one with the power to end the interaction? She damn sure aon't paying attention to the timer on her phone at that moment. And why are people that have been eliminated from the game still allowed to participate in it? Do you keep lapping the board in Monopoly even after being bankrupted?
That probably seems like a lot of criticism for something that I say that I like. (You should see what I say when I don't like something.) I predict managing those branching paths will be the biggest problem that you face. My issues with the party's fluctuating rules is me nitpicking, the party was fun, and that is all that really matters.
Beyond that, the inevitable pussies showing up to whine about NTR is likely to be the biggest aggravation this game faces. Anyway, great start, I hope that this doesn't end up dead and abandoned before it gets finished.