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This games great, but it could use some better translation!! I had to do a double take when i was reading some of the narration, and i believe this game could really go up a few notches with some better grammar and overall more natural dialogue! ^^

its totes fine to be disappointed with the game!! theres a ton of hype for this vn + the concept was pretty good, but i dont think the messiness of the style is the product of a bad artist and is rather to add to the atmosphere!! a ton of other people totally love this game, so i dont mean to say youre wrong, but i do think this just might not be something thats your taste, and thats totes fine!! 

a lot of people say "it's [blank]" from what i know !! ive never really heard anyone say "is [blank]" tbh,, if you really wanna be picky about coherency then wouldn't you say, "it's [blank], [blank], and [blank]"? i can see a little better how this game wouldn't be your cup of tea from the vns you like, but i dont think its the best to say its "genuinely terrible" when its just not your cup of tea??

how are you gonna critique on grammar when you say "is" instead of "it's" LOLOL !! may i ask, what kind of visual novels do you usually play?

hi!! i love this game, but i only get two options (saying whether you like being held hostage or not) in the game instead of four!! (im playing on mac and i downloaded the director's cut version btw!!)

okay wait so im a little confused.. in the like the forever haunted ending, is he like GONE GONE? like are we no longer able to see, feel, or hear him? like do we only sense his presence? or is he like dead and well?