Jeff's Reviews > Shiver

So the story goes with Grace, a simple girl, who is protected by wolves that hang out around the woods near her backyard.

First of all:


you have wolves near your house?
YOU BETTER RUN

I don't know what kind of idea the author's trying to pull but trying to create a bold main character by saying she ain't afraid of wolves is pretty darn unimpressive to me.
See, the normal human wouldn't stay at a house like that, much less live there.
Unafraid.
By a freaking pack of wolves.

A message to you, Grace:THESE AREN'T YOUR FELLOW PEEPS, GRAB YOUR STILL EXISTENT HIDE AND LEAVE


But nah...of course, she'll stay cause she's the stubborn fricking main character.

Then there's that yellow eyed wolf that she can't seem to deny her attraction to.
Here's the thing...
when I think of a yellow eyed wolf...I think of...a carnivorous, insane beast that hasn't eaten in days with white foam near his mouth and will chomp of her head in seconds if she comes close to him.

But noooo, no no no, this girl will, and i mean WILL, come up to him, pet him like a dog, and then slowly fall in love.

-_-


I AM DONE.