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The Awakening by L.J. Smith
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Well, well, well. This is the book that actually started the cliche storm that influenced the Twilight series. Put it in your book history book (Whaa?), my dear readers!

I haven't seen the TV series yet (I will until I finish the entire series. I can't wait for Nina Dobrev, one of my favorite actresses!), but I'm pretty sure it's so much better than this. I don't know, maybe it was the writing that set me off. I wouldn't say it was terrible, it just wasn't . . . good. I will say it once again: Show, don't tell, goddammit!

Since I was more familiar with the TV series, I wasn't expecting Elena to be . . . blonde. And with lapis lazuli blue eyes. Because ordinary blue eyes are too mainstream, I guess. And because brown hair is for ugly girls. Didn't you heard that gentlemen prefer blondes, girls? Okay, here's my problem: Elena is a whiny bimbo. There, I said it. Elena isn't the typical ordinary girl. Instead, she is the Queen Bee and really rich. But, wait! Her life isn't perfect. She wants everything to be perfect, because if she doesn't, her life is ruined! Oh, how my heart aches for her suffering. She has a really nice boyfriend, Matt; (view spoiler) the best friends in the world; and of course, a frenemy, Caroline, who wants to take her spot as the most popular in school. And she is a superficial bitch who is willing to have what she wants, because she is also a spoiled parasite.

Yawn, yawn. Where's the spice?

Then, Stefan arrives. And in case you missed, HE IS A VAMPIRE! Elena immediately falls in love with him and is willing to dump her boyfriend so he can have him.
Bitch.
Stefan realizes that Elena looks like Katherine, his former lover, and the reason he is a vampire. Katherine also had an affair with Stefan's brother, Damon, who is now his worst enemy. He falls in love with her as well but ignores her for some reason.
Stuff happens, blah blah blah, after some angst, they finally get together.
It doesn't make me happy, though, considering the fact that their relationship is a bunch of garbage. If that isn't codependency, then I don't know what is! Even Elena said that she will die without him, before they even got together. And he apparently stalks her. Great, that's exactly what we needed: Another creepy YA lover. If doesn't matter, though. Wait, what? Why am I saying that? Let's do a little quiz, shall we?

QUESTION TIME!!
If you discovered that the guy you liked has a piece of clothing of yours (the one you lost on your second day of school) and you've been officially dating since yesterday, what would you do?

a) Call the police.
b) Think it was the most romantic gesture somebody has ever done to you.
c) RUN. AWAY.

If you chose either A or C, then you're not Elena Gilbert.
Enough. Said.

And where is Damon? Honestly, I didn't pay attention to this after Elena and Stefan got together. Nothing interesting happens from there.

Oh yes, I forgot! Someone is murdering innocents in the town! Who is responsible for this heinous crime?
I don't think I care.

The blurb tells you that there's a love triangle. The only love triangle at the moment is the one between the Salvatore brothers and Katherine. Which happened, like, centuries ago. I'm still intrigued about what will happen with Elena and the Salvatore brothers, though. Okay, yes, this book was predictable, cheesy, with bland characters and plot-less, but I still want to know what will happen next. That's my explanation for the rating I gave for this book.
EDIT: The rating is now 2 stars after some consideration.

One thing, though: The ending was so messy. That's not a cliffhanger, that is just being lazy!
UGH.

I'm thinking that I made a really big mistake. Oh, well.
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Reading Progress

November 4, 2012 – Started Reading
November 4, 2012 – Shelved
November 4, 2012 –
0.0% "Remember when I said I wasn't going to read this series?
I CHANGED MY MIND.
And lied."
November 4, 2012 –
page 3
1.19% "Elena is blonde?
WHAT?
The TV show lied to me!"
November 4, 2012 –
page 3
1.19% "And she also has lapis lazuli blue eyes.
Once again, WHAT?
That's too typical!"
November 4, 2012 –
page 12
4.74%
November 6, 2012 –
page 16
6.32% "Stefan arrived!"
November 6, 2012 –
page 18
7.11% "Insta-love alert!"
November 6, 2012 –
page 20
7.91% "Wait, Elena is dumping her current boyfriend over someone she doesn't know well?
Bitch."
November 6, 2012 –
page 20
7.91% "And she's already planning on how to break up with Matt!
BITCH!"
November 6, 2012 –
page 26
10.28% "Elena looks like Katherine, whoever that is."
November 6, 2012 –
page 31
12.25% "She'd have him, even it killed her. If it killed both of them, she'd have him.
YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HIM!! Risk your life, you'd say? Damn that insta-love."
November 6, 2012 –
page 32
12.65% "I hate Elena.
And the writing is average."
November 8, 2012 –
page 66
26.09%
November 9, 2012 –
page 80
31.62% "A guy rejects you and you spread rumors that he is narc.
Lovely."
November 9, 2012 – Shelved as: paranormal
November 9, 2012 – Shelved as: vampires-want-my-blood-ah-ah-ah
November 10, 2012 – Shelved as: ya
November 10, 2012 –
page 88
34.78% "Oh wow.
Crushes are one thing but this is too much!!
Elena said that if she doesn't have Stefan, she'll die!
Seriously."
November 11, 2012 –
page 91
35.97% "Why isn't Matt getting away from Elena?
She dumped him over a guy she doesn't know!
Then again, he is a nice guy."
November 11, 2012 –
page 95
37.55% ". . . did they just compared Elena to Helen of Troy?
WHAT?"
November 11, 2012 –
page 100
39.53% "Oh shit, that bitch Caroline."
November 11, 2012 –
page 103
40.71% "Isn't Elena so nice? She made Tyler's date cry by flirting with him in front of her.
I'm in love."
November 17, 2012 –
page 160
63.24% "QUESTION TIME!!
If you discovered that the guy you liked has a piece of clothing of yours (the one you lost on your second day of school) and you've been officially dating since yesterday, what would you do?

a) Call the police.
b) Think it was the most romantic gesture somebody has ever done to you.
c) RUN. AWAY.

If you chose either A or C, then you're not Elena Gilbert."
November 18, 2012 – Shelved as: boring-bland-main-characters
November 18, 2012 – Shelved as: it-was-okay
November 18, 2012 – Shelved as: you-are-an-idiot
November 18, 2012 – Shelved as: activate-insta-love
November 18, 2012 – Shelved as: guilty-pleasures
November 18, 2012 – Finished Reading
December 15, 2012 – Shelved as: mean-girls
December 15, 2012 – Shelved as: where-s-the-fucking-conflict
December 15, 2012 – Shelved as: mediocre-writing

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Helen Why the three stars then? Or is your rating system different from GR default?


message 2: by Anachronist (new)

Anachronist Yes, I wonder like Helen - why three stars? What's wrong with a solid one-star rating?


message 3: by Kay (new)

Kay I tried to read this earlier this year, and I just couldn't get through it. That line you mentioned about her willing to die to get with him before they're even together made me close the book and give up.

The television show is way better at least up until season 2. I missed season 3 due to schoolwork. I have to catch up with season 3 and 4 now.


message 4: by Merary (last edited Dec 16, 2012 06:37PM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Merary Helen wrote: "Why the three stars then? Or is your rating system different from GR default?"

Because it could have been better. When I rate a book 3 stars, it means that I thought it was just okay. Average. Nothing special. You get my point. I rated it Monster High 4 3 stars even though I didn't enjoy it as much as the others.
This book is so cliched and cheesy that it has a charm as a guilty pleasure. The ridiculousness was so entertaining.
And that's my answer. :)


message 5: by Jo (new)

Jo I understand your criticism about the book. I my self think that the TV-show is way better, they have better writing and the story line is much more clear... Although I think you rating was miss placed, I gave 'New Moon' a rating of one star and it had better writing and a better story line than this.


Frosted Butterfly Elena doesn't break up with Matt because of Stefan. She breaks up with him because she felt something was "missing" and also for the past few days she's been feeling that, and the reason is because she was meant to be with Stefan.


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