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Our Missing Hearts
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There are a number of reasons Our Missing Hearts didn't work for me, but I can sum up my general feeling for the book as being similar to how I felt about The Testaments and Klara and the Sun (ironic, perhaps, given that I praised Ng in my review of that book):
Our Missing Hearts is a YA dystopia that I guess passes for literary fiction because of the super clever absence of speech marks.
Let me say that I had started to consider myself a fan of Celeste Ng and will likely seek out her future books. Little Fires Everywhere and Everything I Never Told You were relatively slow, quiet character studies, yet they were excellent examples of slow, quiet character studies. The characters felt alive, felt real. Their suburban worries and struggles, hopes and dreams, pulled me in. It is quite wonderful to be so mesmerized by simplicity.
Our Missing Hearts, unfortunately, had all of the slow pacing and none of the depth of characterization. Bird experiences the loss of a parent and the crumbling of justice and society all around him, but he views it detached, as if from a distance, never quite seeming to experience or react to it himself and making it difficult for me to do so as the reader.
Bird's mother, Margaret, also feels one-dimensional. She makes some difficult decisions-- such as abandoning her son --yet I never once felt let inside the emotional turmoil that surely should have caused.
Instead, much of this novel is given over to describing the details and injustices of PACT (Preserving American Culture and Traditions Act). According to the government, the act sets out to protect American values from foreign influence (China is considered especially problematic), but what it really serves as is an excuse for racism and violence against minorities. People are being arrested for even questioning the act; children are being taken away from parents who are deemed bad influences.
I was having a hard time for the first half of the book when we were on Bird's perspective, but I grew even more weary during Margaret's perspective when we were taken on a flashback through how she met Bird's dad and how PACT came to be.
Perhaps I am just burned out on dystopias at this point. A dystopia has to have something unique or have really memorable characters to hold my interest and stand out in this over-saturated genre. Our Missing Hearts, with its controlling government, banning books, secret resistance and flat characters, was not that.
Our Missing Hearts is a YA dystopia that I guess passes for literary fiction because of the super clever absence of speech marks.
Let me say that I had started to consider myself a fan of Celeste Ng and will likely seek out her future books. Little Fires Everywhere and Everything I Never Told You were relatively slow, quiet character studies, yet they were excellent examples of slow, quiet character studies. The characters felt alive, felt real. Their suburban worries and struggles, hopes and dreams, pulled me in. It is quite wonderful to be so mesmerized by simplicity.
Our Missing Hearts, unfortunately, had all of the slow pacing and none of the depth of characterization. Bird experiences the loss of a parent and the crumbling of justice and society all around him, but he views it detached, as if from a distance, never quite seeming to experience or react to it himself and making it difficult for me to do so as the reader.
Bird's mother, Margaret, also feels one-dimensional. She makes some difficult decisions-- such as abandoning her son --yet I never once felt let inside the emotional turmoil that surely should have caused.
Instead, much of this novel is given over to describing the details and injustices of PACT (Preserving American Culture and Traditions Act). According to the government, the act sets out to protect American values from foreign influence (China is considered especially problematic), but what it really serves as is an excuse for racism and violence against minorities. People are being arrested for even questioning the act; children are being taken away from parents who are deemed bad influences.
I was having a hard time for the first half of the book when we were on Bird's perspective, but I grew even more weary during Margaret's perspective when we were taken on a flashback through how she met Bird's dad and how PACT came to be.
Perhaps I am just burned out on dystopias at this point. A dystopia has to have something unique or have really memorable characters to hold my interest and stand out in this over-saturated genre. Our Missing Hearts, with its controlling government, banning books, secret resistance and flat characters, was not that.
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Oct 11, 2022 03:47AM
I have the same feelings of you on this. After loving the authors previous books I really thought this was going to be for me. I gave it a very generous 3.5 stars but it was just so boring and dull. It feels like such a basic dystopia and I don’t think telling Margaret’s story was compelling at all. Bird and his father were far more interesting to me.
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Chelsea wrote: "I have the same feelings of you on this. After loving the authors previous books I really thought this was going to be for me. I gave it a very generous 3.5 stars but it was just so boring and dull...""Basic dystopia" is exactly right. I can appreciate an author trying to branch out and try something new, but I hope Ng returns to her contemporary family dramas with her future work.
I had/have high hopes for this one, as I have enjoyed her previous 2 books and I love a good dystopia novel. I have seen mostly 2 or 3 star reviews for this one though. 😬
Damn... I'm about mid-way through and was still hoping it's going to get better. It doesn't even read like an Ng!
i simply cannot understand the disliking of klara and the sun. perhaps you missed something? for me it was incredible
"Our Missing Hearts is a YA dystopia that I guess passes for literary fiction because of the super clever absence of speech marks." --chuckle.
I saw it as plausible after Trump’s election. However, my greatest disappointment was the ending which was a whimper instead of a bang. We never know what happened as a result of Margaret’s action.
David wrote: "I saw it as plausible after Trump’s election. However, my greatest disappointment was the ending which was a whimper instead of a bang. We never know what happened as a result of Margaret’s action."Yeah, I didn't find it implausible. I just thought it reminded me of many other dystopian books and didn't do anything different.
Nilguen wrote: "Great review, Emily! I am currently at this and am curious about the reading experience overall."Thank you :) What do you think so far?
I totally agree with your review. Just finished reading it - almost quit but it’s short and I wanted to read til the end. Ugh! What a shallow depressing book! As if the world isn’t going through enough, now I get to feel worse. The subject is worth discussing but this isn’t the story I’d recommend. Left without a glimmer of hope for anyone in this story.
Seeing your review makes me want to abandon several chapters in, and not having the same reading experience I have come to enjoy with this auhtor. Thank you for your honest review !
The author tried to do something she’s just not that good at. Her attempt to create a dystopia with believable characters failed miserably. I tried so hard to like this book!
It might be a dystopia for some but this is a very close description of life reality in China and in fact her book has been banned there.
Agreed. Started much better than I found with her precious books, but got slower and fell so flat at the end.
Not impressed. I thought it started slow, but I fought to finish it as it went downhill in the last half
After 50 pages when I wasn’t connecting with this book, I had a similar reaction, as if this was another unoriginal Netflix drama. Thank you for confirming.
I came to see if I should force my way thru the second half and these comments and your review confirm that it’s not going to get better.
Gave it a three. Only because the possibilities are so real and frightening- but I agree I had to dig deep to connect with all characters- more emotions would have made for a better read.
Appreciate your review. I have not found myself able to gravitate towards the characters in a way that is pulling me in. I simply can't keep focus which is disappointing considering how much I adore this writer and my excitement for her new novel. I have truly loved reading some recent dystopian novels. So, that is not the issue for me. I am still in the first half. I am not sure that I will be able to keep on going. Shall see. The writing is exquisite of course. But that isn't doing it enough for me at his moment.
I listened to the audiobook, I think narration can enhance or take away from the impact of physically reading a book. I do agree with the slow pacing of the book, and understand that it may be easy to get lost in that. However, by the end I gave the book 5 stars, and I can’t help but wonder if some of the pacing and even the characters are intentional. It seemed to me like the author is trying to show how we become complacent to gradual changes in our lives. And while the book is certainly about Bird and his mother and father, it’s more about all the families. I understand it’s not for everyone, but there’s a lot to this story, and as an Asian woman, the author I believe felt deep connection to it.
I agree completely. Everything felt disjointed and the characters weren’t developed well enough. The ending felt flat also.
I also felt that the story was lacking. I picked up the large print edition and skimmed through it. It was not that great of a book
Yes! Agree. Had very high hopes because of the last two books I read by Celest Ng. Couldn’t quite put into words why this book didn’t grab me quite like the others.
I am 3/4 through and my library book is due. I don't think I will finish it. It's just not interesting. I guess I would like to know how it ends... does anyone want to tell me?
While this story mirrors our present culture in so many ways, I was ultimately disappointed and didn’t have the same connection with the characters as I did with her two previous books. I was looking forward to this release and found myself just wanting to finish the audiobook so I could move on to my next read.
Was she rushed by publish to finish writing this book? Popularity ruins good writers as they have meet publishing deadlines. Jodi Picoult changed publishers si that she two years instead one to complete writing her novels.
Thank you for your review. It confirms the suspicion I had after 10 pages into the book. I'm dropping it.
Yeah, I was a DNF on this one. It just seemed flat and dull. I suppose if setting is your big thing as a reader, it fits the bill. I'm all about characters though, and these characters were flat. I've also read a lot of dystopia fiction, and I need some surprises to stick to it.




















