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☆ Todd is 4% done
*SNORT*

A few minutes later it swings open again, and the little boy appears. “Oh, what now?” he sighs in a very world-weary manner.

My lips twitch. “I’ve been thinking about your password.” He brightens instantly[...]. “Has it got the word poo in the password?”

He looks at me as if I’m Albert Einstein and Stephen Hawking rolled into one. “It has,” he breathes
Dec 27, 2017 10:34AM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 79% done
*SNORT* [Love the Gabe'ism...]

“Why am I stupid?” I say crossly, and then hesitate. “I really don’t want to know about the plug, but …”

He shakes his head. “No. We are not going down what Gabe calls one of our conversational cul-de-sacs.”
Dec 28, 2017 08:08PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 64% done
*BWAHAHAHA* [Hot and bothered...]

“Wait,” he pants. “Are you sure?”

I glare at him. “Weren’t you just in conquering mode? Quick, go back to it before I lose my erection.”
Dec 28, 2017 05:37PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 62% done
*Psssh* [One little mistake, my ass, bitch...]

“It’s eleven minutes past time for you to fuck off,” I say sharply, unbearably stung by his mentioning Billy and all the memories these two must share.
Dec 28, 2017 05:17PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 61% done
*HAHAHA!* [Breakfast of Champions...]

“So you’re a model then? It must be a glamorous job. How do you stay so fit looking?” She runs her hand down my chest and I shoot a look at her husband, but he’s talking earnestly to Asa and hasn’t noticed. “Such muscles,” she coos. “What do you eat to maintain them?”

“Mostly fish and chips and Mars bars,”
I say earnestly, and she gapes at me.
Dec 28, 2017 05:08PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 55% done
*WAH!*

No more warmth, no laughter, no real kindness. No sticky hugs from his son and hot steamy nights with him. Suddenly I want to throw up. I want Asa to bar the door and take the choice away from me. I know he won’t. He’s too good a person. Instead, he will watch me batter against the window like a moth, until eventually he’ll open it and let me fly away, and today, for the first time, I don’t want to.
Dec 28, 2017 03:36PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 53% done
*Awww* [Keeping Billy safe...]

The ways in which I could fuck this up were legion and varied. However, once we were on the plane and he fell asleep on my lap, I had the sudden, blinding realisation that this wasn’t just some random child. This was my Billy, and I loved him. I also had the feeling Asa knew this all along, the canny bastard.
Dec 28, 2017 02:57PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 49% done
*GAH* [Just for the summer...]

I massage my chest absently at the stab of pain I feel at the thought of him in the future with someone serious. Someone else who will sit at his table laughing and talking, someone who will kiss his son goodnight and sleep against his heart in the dark silence of the night, while I wander on in the world, never settling and never home.
Dec 28, 2017 12:47PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 40% done
*Awww* [Birthday weekend away...]

I feel an unexpected peace steal across me, as though for the first time in forever, I am in the one place I want to be, with the people I’m meant to be with.
Dec 27, 2017 09:32PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 25% done
*HA!* [Witch, bitch, whatever...]

“Please tell Lucy I have holy water and I’m crossing myself as she speaks,” I snipe, and he snorts, before wiping his face clear when Lucy turns to glare at him.
Dec 27, 2017 06:42PM
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☆ Todd
☆ Todd is 17% done
*BWAHAHA!* [I fucking died...]

“Daddy, I want to tell you -” He stops suddenly, and I realise with horror that the pile of sex toys on the desk has caught his attention. It’s not a surprise, as the manufacturers persist in making them in shiny, sparkly primary colours. “Oh, Daddy,” he says in awed delight. “Is that a magic wand?”
Dec 27, 2017 05:36PM
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